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Shipwrecked!, Ch. 1
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Tina leaned against the railing, welcoming the cool, light spray of the sea against her face. Squinting, she pointed out toward the horizon. “I don’t like the look of those clouds out there.”
Frowning, Bette leaned forward, pulling her arm from around Tina’s waist to support herself against the railing. “That doesn’t look good. Maybe we should ask Alice if we’re stopping soon. I’d rather not be on the water if it starts to storm.”
Shivering slightly as she realized the drop in temperature, Tina took Bette’s hand as they made their way across the boat.
“Hey, hey! Break it up over here, you two!” Alice shouted in disgust, pushing Carmen and Shane apart, effectively wedging herself between them. “Ick, get a room!”
Carmen let out a little unhappy moan, and Shane sighed in defeat. “I was still watching where we were going and all that,” she protested, gesturing.
“Yeah, with your tongue halfway down her throat?” Alice demanded, pointing at Carmen. “And your hands who knows where? I don’t think so!”
Carmen opened her mouth to defend Shane, but Bette and Tina interrupted them. “Um, guys? Have you noticed the weather seems to be getting worse?” Tina asked, having to raise her voice slightly to be heard above the rising wind.
Shane stepped away from the group, noticing for the first time that dark clouds had gathered overhead, and the boat’s motions had grown unsteadier as the sea beneath them became choppier. She quickly turned back to Alice. “Al, we could have problems.”
Dana, who had also been watching the weather, had hurried over to them. “Guys, it’s starting to sprinkle. Is that bad? What if it rains harder?”
“Okay, everyone, no cause for alarm,” Alice said, trying to keep calm as the vessel took another bounce on the waves, nearly causing her to lose her balance. “Let’s just stay calm and -”
BOOM! CRASH!
The group screamed simultaneously as thunder boomed overhead, followed by a bright bolt of lightning in the distance.
“Oh, hell no!” Kit’s voice shouted, as she unsteadily made her way across the wobbly deck as fast as her legs would carry her. “I did not sign up for this when I agreed to come on this trip!”
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OH SHIT! I cant wait to read more@!!!
This is great! I love action adventure. Please post soon… you left us hanging in suspense.
Land them on the same island as giligan! Alice could go out with Ginger to make Dana jelous.post soon =)
*CLAPS* Very well done, this is the originality I’ve been hoping for. Please, keep going you now have me intrigued
OMG!!! This is really exciting stuff. I love lots of drama and action! Hope they all get out of the water ok! Dana might realise how much Alice means to her now, thinkin that she may have lost her. Lovin it already so keep it up. Thanks.
OMG…no, you can’t stop here? Where will they end up? I need to know if the’re all going to be ok? Alice? Shane? I loved the way you portray the interactions between the gang. It brought me back to the feeling I had watching S1.
Very cool. I have missed your stories! This is super exciting! Glad to see you back. Post again soon :)
I’ve really missed your stories, so I am REALLY glad that you started a new one. Excellent start, and I can’t wait to see where you take us with it. You’re such a talented writer, and you really do bring back the good, fun season 1 feel to the girls! :-) (But I would love you even more if Danish worked it out!!)
Haha! Fox, you’re back too! How wonderful to ‘see’ you. As always, I expect the expected from your stories, one of the many reasons why it’s always such a thrill to read them. So who’s gonna die? :D No more hooky eh
About time you showed yourself back on here! It has been waaay too long. I’m loving The Lost Word, but since they’re on an island, having them run Baywatch-style wouldn’t hurt the next time someone drowns… Just a suggestion. Glad to see you back and writing again!
Wow… just, WOW!!!! That is such an awesome story! Actually, more than awesome!! I`m already addicted to it, loved it!!! Please continue soon!
holy crap! Something different and I enjoyed it. Hope you continue.
Awesome, keep going
hopefull u’re not gonna kill anyone, and we’re gonna get loads of B & T sex on the beach….shane & carmen too, BOT MORE B & T…..lol
Interesting and exciting new take on our girls from WeHo. Please continue
Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip.That started from this tropic port,aboard this tiny ship… Sorry wrong show. =) Very good story, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Dang! Now there’s some drama for you on a Saturday morning!! Welcome back…sorry to hear you are going through some not so fun parts of life. Just try to remember…everything is temporary. Thanks!
Great start! but why Shane had to get hurt?? awww she is my favorite so please let her be ok :P I cant wait for next chapter :)
You came back with a big bang. hope all tthe girls are alright. The should have taken Helena ship. Alice thing want get her desposit back. thanks
I was totally amazed when I saw that you were back and so very excited! Your comeback has me hanging on the edge.. what a fantastic story line. You better not leave again… I’ll beg if I have to but it wouldn’t be pretty, lol. Please post again soon! Yay, Forefire’s back and is amazing as ever!
Wow, what an awesome story. Nothing like a little blood to attract the sharks.
Just read your fic again today. I know, I already left a comment, but this one is so beyond well-written! I love it so much and please … as a “Shipwrecked addict”, I need more!!! *smile*
Hey FF, Fabulous to have you back on the site and post such an unique and inticing story. A cross between Lost and Pirates of the Carribean comes to mind and nowt wrong with that in my book. Absolutely hysterical from Kit’s cell phnoe home run pitch to losing her hat. Alice replacing the lifeboat with a cooler. Too few lifejackets… Brilliant and I can’t wait to see what Chapter 2 brings. Thank you so much for coming back and adding this hilarity to my life. Your gratiful and Loyal Fan.
Loving the start of this, can’t wait to see where it goes so update soon please!!. little bit off topic but any chance of some more danish PWP?