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“That makes two of us then Bette chimed, as her face brightened up with a smile. You know I could always get us something What do you feel like having?” she asked as she stood up and started pacing in front of Tina.
Umm well Tina trailed off once she realized that she had no idea what she wanted, nor did she know what Bette was in the mood for, so instead of picking something too adventurous, Tina opted for something more universal: How about Chinese? Upon hearing this Bette expression turned into one that looked like she was fighting the urge to cringe. God Chinese food!!! Im so sick of that stuff she said in disgust, turning away from Tina ever so slightly, while she angrily ran her fingers through her thick dark hair, all the while shaking her head in disapproval.
Oh I Tina blurted out. She was about to panic; things have taken such a dramatic turn between her and Bette But what just happened exactly? One minute Bette was being the most hospitable and accommodating person on the set, then all of a sudden she gets upset over a poor choice of take out food. Bette I didnt mean to I didnt know Tina began to apologize in a low, dejected voice.
She was in a state of disbelief, but everything was going so fast and worse, all of it definitely seemed real. Bette was not budging at all, although her shoulders rose and fell in accordance to the deep, heavy breaths she was taking. Oh god is she crying? Tina questioned. She needed to find out She just had to fix things before they got more blown out of proportion So in a last attempt to calm Bette down, the slightly shaken blonde stood up and moved closer towards her. We can order whatever you want Bette I dont mind really I don”
Tina was so busy asking for forgiveness that it took her a while to make sense of the muffled sounds coming from Bettes side of the conversation. What? Tina asked with a hint of exasperation.
No its nothing. Im sorry. Its just that Bette paused as she simultaneously tried to stifle a giggle in between gasping for breath, I didnt think youd actually fall for that one.
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Ooh I can’t wait for that kiss. Heh. Woo. Nice going Craze, must continue you must. A little Yoda there, even tho I didn’t see the movie:P Aloha!
Just a wonderful chapter. I’m so waiting for the next chapter. Excellent job.
Oh craze…this was brilliant! I’m looking forward to that kiss! Don’t keep us waiting too long….please!
Just a great chapter. I’m so waiting for the next. Awesome job.
CMC…nice update and yes we are looking forward to the “kiss”. Just amazing girl. 5 stars from me. Post soon
What are you doing to me Smoke? How you gonna leave it like this? All on the suspenseful tip. Can’t wait for the next scene. Please post soon. =)
Hey Smokie!
I just spent the last few minutes catching up on your story. Woo! Very good woman. I am so into it now. I hate that I will have to wait to read the next installment when I return from vacation. I would like to thank whoever inspired you. I hope I post this soon so I can be under Tee. Hee Hee
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are having fun and can’t wait to see what happen next. Post soon, thanks!
I absolutely love this B & T beginning. Great Chapter!
Great Chapter Babes!! *shouts Wooo hoo hahaha… I cant wait for the kiss… thats going to be NICE hehe.. So B&T sharing a trailer.. hmm intresting heheh.. i wonder where this is going to take us.. i know somewhere good hehehe… 5 STARS !!
Can’t wait to see how they practice that scene. Good Job.
oh and were going to have a kiss this is getting good.
CMC,
Thanks for taking the time to reply in person.
I am totally addicted to this version of events.
That is due to you and your story telling gift. The honesty and realism with which you write is takes my breath away. The nervousness and edginess of both Bette and Tina are palpable. Alice’s unique charms just reverberate off the screen. Can’t wait to see how the other characters will appear in this adventure.
I am equally entertained and stunned with your cliff-hangers. Such pleasure tinged with such pain.
Am ready from the next chapter so pls make it soon.
Your loyal fan.
Great! Looking forward to more.
Why do writers have so much fun in leaving the readers hanging like this?!?!?!?! I can’t wait until the kiss, please post soon!
hmmmmmm wander how that kissing scene is gonna pan out????? hope its YUMMY!!!! sorry i havent commented in a while..life has been crazy..:) but the ketchup is on the table..and the dairy queen…is open for business…LOL great post..woman..glad to be back reading them! 5 million stars
excellent chapter..waiting for the next!
Rating disabled Freak?!?! LMAO… hey i just caught up on all your chapters no. Phew… hehe i loved them… see i told u i’ll catch up and i have. I just havent been on the site long enough to read any posts. So you will post soon right freaky? Hehehe…. See ya
yr fren, Freaky :P
I just got caught up your killing me here post soon