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Showtime: Chapter 4
Maybe its just this outfit, its much too heavy for me to be wearing in this type of weather, Tina pointed out, fixing her eyes on the tall, frosty drink Bette gave her a while ago, running a finger across the top in circles as she shrugged uncomfortably in her seat.
“You can take it off if you’d like.” Bette said coming off rather suggestively, but before Tina could voice another ‘pardon’, she quickly added, “Your jacket I mean. I have a coat hanger by the door, you can leave it there if you want.” Tina glanced over at the door, self-consciously tugging a little at the thick fabric of her dark denim jacket then turned her gaze back towards Bette. She was feeling rather silly at the moment considering how harshly she almost reacted a while ago. “No, I think I’ll be fine, thank you.” she politely replied.
Biting lightly onto the surface of her bottom lip, Tina knew she was blushing, she could tell from how warm her cheeks felt when her fingers slightly brushed up against them earlier. So much for not being nervous. To her credit though it was pretty hard not to get flustered, after all Bette Porter was looking her directly in the eye, more like piercing actually. Sitting across from her, the tall brunette smiled softly, while listening to her words as if they were part of an important, historical speech.
There was an unexplainable intensity between them at the moment, a silent tension that Tina couldnt quite explain for some reason… She thought perhaps this was all in her head, but then again maybe not.
As the seconds ticked by, she was quite relieved to find that Bette was still left completely oblivious to the fact that she felt like smacking herself across the forehead repeatedly over and over again, in fact she felt like doing so even as early as half way through the conversation, anything just to prevent herself from getting too talkative and thus looking like a total fool but somehow Tina couldnt stop her words from flowing:
I guess its not so much the humidity thats bothering me, but the fact that I havent had food in my system since this morning
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Ooh I can’t wait for that kiss. Heh. Woo. Nice going Craze, must continue you must. A little Yoda there, even tho I didn’t see the movie:P Aloha!
Just a wonderful chapter. I’m so waiting for the next chapter. Excellent job.
Oh craze…this was brilliant! I’m looking forward to that kiss! Don’t keep us waiting too long….please!
Just a great chapter. I’m so waiting for the next. Awesome job.
CMC…nice update and yes we are looking forward to the “kiss”. Just amazing girl. 5 stars from me. Post soon
What are you doing to me Smoke? How you gonna leave it like this? All on the suspenseful tip. Can’t wait for the next scene. Please post soon. =)
Hey Smokie!
I just spent the last few minutes catching up on your story. Woo! Very good woman. I am so into it now. I hate that I will have to wait to read the next installment when I return from vacation. I would like to thank whoever inspired you. I hope I post this soon so I can be under Tee. Hee Hee
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are having fun and can’t wait to see what happen next. Post soon, thanks!
I absolutely love this B & T beginning. Great Chapter!
Great Chapter Babes!! *shouts Wooo hoo hahaha… I cant wait for the kiss… thats going to be NICE hehe.. So B&T sharing a trailer.. hmm intresting heheh.. i wonder where this is going to take us.. i know somewhere good hehehe… 5 STARS !!
Can’t wait to see how they practice that scene. Good Job.
oh and were going to have a kiss this is getting good.
CMC,
Thanks for taking the time to reply in person.
I am totally addicted to this version of events.
That is due to you and your story telling gift. The honesty and realism with which you write is takes my breath away. The nervousness and edginess of both Bette and Tina are palpable. Alice’s unique charms just reverberate off the screen. Can’t wait to see how the other characters will appear in this adventure.
I am equally entertained and stunned with your cliff-hangers. Such pleasure tinged with such pain.
Am ready from the next chapter so pls make it soon.
Your loyal fan.
Great! Looking forward to more.
Why do writers have so much fun in leaving the readers hanging like this?!?!?!?! I can’t wait until the kiss, please post soon!
hmmmmmm wander how that kissing scene is gonna pan out????? hope its YUMMY!!!! sorry i havent commented in a while..life has been crazy..:) but the ketchup is on the table..and the dairy queen…is open for business…LOL great post..woman..glad to be back reading them! 5 million stars
excellent chapter..waiting for the next!
Rating disabled Freak?!?! LMAO… hey i just caught up on all your chapters no. Phew… hehe i loved them… see i told u i’ll catch up and i have. I just havent been on the site long enough to read any posts. So you will post soon right freaky? Hehehe…. See ya
yr fren, Freaky :P
I just got caught up your killing me here post soon