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“Oh,” she uttered, quickly recovering her composure. “Well, I don’t think we’ve formally met… I’m Bette’s assistant Alice, but Bette calls me Al, or at least I’d like her to she usually just calls me something along the lines of nosey or over-bearing nowadays… so you never know But hey what can you do right?” She finished with a big smile.
“Right,” Tina nodded slightly, with one eyebrow raised. “I’m Tina.”
“I guess you want to come in?” But Alice had already made her way past her and was well inside the trailer before Tina even had a chance to speak. At first glance, Alice was practically the opposite of Bette. Unlike the statuesque brunette, Alice had short blonde hair that was slightly a bit darker than Tinas, which was styled in a choppy yet wispy cut, that hung perfectly above her shoulders. Her eyes were a very bright and seemed to glow with a very vibrant life. On the same note, she seemed to be a bit of a klutz on her feet while still appearing very wiry and energetic, though in Tinas opinion Alice carried herself pretty well for somebody so hyper. She walked nearly as fast as she talked, and stumbled over her words a lot. Again nothing like Bette.
Dragging her shoes across the floor, Alice seemed like she walked into the trailer without lifting her feet from the ground once. Then, as if it was her own place she threw her jacket onto one of the empty chairs in the kitchen and quickly stumbled over to a nearby window. Tina turned and closed the door then upon hearing the sound of it clicking shut; Alice immediately seemed to remember that someone else was in the trailer with her. With this in mind she walked right back towards Tina, stopping only inches away from her face.
“So where’s Bette? I know shes in here, I mean where else could she be at this hour?” Alice asked as if she were assuming that Tina knew Bettes schedule as well as she did.
“She’s in the…”
“Bedroom, right? Or bunk whatever you call it. Either that or in the shower but I figured it’s way too early for something like that… I mean since I think she already took one around two hours ago Alice said matter-of-factly, Which only leaves the kitchen” which obviously she isnt in, and of course the bedroom.”
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Ooh I can’t wait for that kiss. Heh. Woo. Nice going Craze, must continue you must. A little Yoda there, even tho I didn’t see the movie:P Aloha!
Just a wonderful chapter. I’m so waiting for the next chapter. Excellent job.
Oh craze…this was brilliant! I’m looking forward to that kiss! Don’t keep us waiting too long….please!
Just a great chapter. I’m so waiting for the next. Awesome job.
CMC…nice update and yes we are looking forward to the “kiss”. Just amazing girl. 5 stars from me. Post soon
What are you doing to me Smoke? How you gonna leave it like this? All on the suspenseful tip. Can’t wait for the next scene. Please post soon. =)
Hey Smokie!
I just spent the last few minutes catching up on your story. Woo! Very good woman. I am so into it now. I hate that I will have to wait to read the next installment when I return from vacation. I would like to thank whoever inspired you. I hope I post this soon so I can be under Tee. Hee Hee
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are having fun and can’t wait to see what happen next. Post soon, thanks!
I absolutely love this B & T beginning. Great Chapter!
Great Chapter Babes!! *shouts Wooo hoo hahaha… I cant wait for the kiss… thats going to be NICE hehe.. So B&T sharing a trailer.. hmm intresting heheh.. i wonder where this is going to take us.. i know somewhere good hehehe… 5 STARS !!
Can’t wait to see how they practice that scene. Good Job.
oh and were going to have a kiss this is getting good.
CMC,
Thanks for taking the time to reply in person.
I am totally addicted to this version of events.
That is due to you and your story telling gift. The honesty and realism with which you write is takes my breath away. The nervousness and edginess of both Bette and Tina are palpable. Alice’s unique charms just reverberate off the screen. Can’t wait to see how the other characters will appear in this adventure.
I am equally entertained and stunned with your cliff-hangers. Such pleasure tinged with such pain.
Am ready from the next chapter so pls make it soon.
Your loyal fan.
Great! Looking forward to more.
Why do writers have so much fun in leaving the readers hanging like this?!?!?!?! I can’t wait until the kiss, please post soon!
hmmmmmm wander how that kissing scene is gonna pan out????? hope its YUMMY!!!! sorry i havent commented in a while..life has been crazy..:) but the ketchup is on the table..and the dairy queen…is open for business…LOL great post..woman..glad to be back reading them! 5 million stars
excellent chapter..waiting for the next!
Rating disabled Freak?!?! LMAO… hey i just caught up on all your chapters no. Phew… hehe i loved them… see i told u i’ll catch up and i have. I just havent been on the site long enough to read any posts. So you will post soon right freaky? Hehehe…. See ya
yr fren, Freaky :P
I just got caught up your killing me here post soon