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What if Bette really did go on reading and they ended up kissing then and there? Would she pull away? Would she give in?
A second passed. . . . . . . . then two . . . . . . . . . . .
Tina are you there? Say something. Bette demanded although she spoke very softly, as she brushed her own hair away from her face.
Leaning closer towards the blonde, Bette sidled up to her and let their shoulders press against each other, their skin touching, inadvertently giving Tina a taste of what it would be like if by chance they ever got close.
Tina breathed deeply and very audibly, partly frustrated and somewhat confused; she just sat there frozen, deep in thought The closeness, no matter how innocent it was, wasnt helping her forget anything at all, but still she didnt pull away the warmth of Bettes skin just felt so good so right. She wouldn’t have mind staying in that position for the rest of the day…
But then swiftly Bette tried to re-position herself a little to the left so that she could see Tinas face properly.
Well she offered expectantly, hoping that Tina would continue for her, only to be greeted with the same response, You dont think that was too sudden did you? she inquired.
The words rang through Tinas ears but somehow failed to register.
What? she finally asked back unintelligibly.
The delivery, Bette explained, Do you think I said I love you too fast this time?
Uhm no, it was fine. Tina replied weakly, seeming as if her mind had drifted off to some place else.
Are you okay? Bette asked softly, but Tina definitely took her time to answer. She was far more distant now, like she was brooding about something important gone was the gentle expression she had been wearing only minutes ago, and her seriousness only made Bettes smile fade away.
For the longest time they both just looked at each other, with Bette surveying Tinas face just waiting for her reply
Trying her best to fight the thought of kissing her co-star away, forcing them far from her thoughts, Tina tried to keep herself calm, but the more she pondered on things, the more the blonde felt like going through with it she knew somehow that she needed to stop she had to.
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fuck it’s about time!!, sorry had to let that out. I’m so glad to see you have came back to us, damm a month I though you had moved on to bigger and better things. Well just don’t leave us hanging to long now you hear
yay!! sooooo excited to see you’d updated! ty! i love this story, so pleeeeeeeease update again sooooooooon :)
Good chapter. Damn this is so hot and crazy, love it. Who the hell is at the door. Please post soon, can’t wait to see what is Bette and Tina doing next. Thanks!
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So glad to see another chapter of this story. Like the others, I was wondering if you’d forgotten about it! Lovely tension built up, and very sexy kisses, but who is that annoying person interrupting! Bet it’s Alice… :) Keep on writing please.
“I Love You” those words mean so much.. i know cause i feel something everytime i say them… or i hear them from “That” special person!.;).. This was a great chapter baby… i loved it so much… mmm sexy kisses hehe.. Got to love them… You know i love everything you do.. no matter if you think its dorky…. my BW is not a dork.. but the best writer i know… MWAH… GREAT, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, SEXY, LOVING, PASSIONATE… ohh and the new update was Great too hehe.. see babes.. getting caught up talking about you…fav part, when bette came up to tina.. and took control.. cant wait til the next one…
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i just re read all ur stories last nite and was wondering when u wud update…. keep it coming now!! thanks
Hello Craze: Excellent chapter. i enjoyed this one very much. keep up the good work. I’ll catch the next one.
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Glad you are back. Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
soooo very worth the wait…..thanks so much for the post. Great chapter…more pleeeze!
Hey, tell Alice to go away and get back to the action! GLAD YOU’RE BACK!!
Great story, another notch on your writing belt….but pls don’t make us wait so long between chapters…that is totally not fair…pls more !!!!
you better not take another month to post the next chapter crazy, even though this was worth waitng for. loved it. now on to the next and hurry up. please! thankyou. God i’m polite, so you have to post now just for that. lol.
aw i loved that. the tension was thick!
Hello! Callmecazy WHOA! I love it Thank you Another Beautiful Awesome Story again I can’t wait come on Please LOL posted this again ASAP! LOL HAVE A GREAT 4TH JULY and Thanks for coming back.
Megga- THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN! My eyes TOTALLY teared up during the “I love you” stuff (what can I say, you know I’m dramatic), and your descriptions were beautiful, everything seemed so real and the stakes were so high for both of them. (Megga claps for crazy) Please. . .PLEASE don’t wait another month to post! (Or I’m gonna have to whip out my bossy pants!)
Welcome back CMC – you have been missed. Wonderful update as always. Your story here is super..love the way you make us wait. Post soon….we want more CMC.
What the hell took you so long what the **** have you been doing had to get that off my chest Fanstic chapter Please don’t make us wait long the next chapter post real Soon
Smokie, I loved it! I am sorry I have not been a better friend and kept up reading but I am trying. You are so talented. Only you can make a kiss such a sensual, loving act that takes everyone’s breath away. Not just Tina’s. I hope you have someone you can give a special kiss to soon. She is one lucky gal. :-)