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    Showtime: Chapter 8

    Story written on July 31, 2005 by callmecrazy.
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    A twisted B&T beginning: On location in Miami…

     

    Sighing, she made her way down the darkened hallway, stopping in front of room 306 and dropping all her luggage onto the floor producing a loud thud.  With a quick wipe of her wet palm down the side of her jeans, Tina set the small card key into the electronic lock, not entirely sure how it was supposed to work.  Sure enough, a quiet click resounded in her ears as the small light near the slot flashed green, unlocking the door instantly.  As the door inched open, Tina’s jaw nearly fell to the floor as she caught her first glimpse of the room’s indescribable beauty. Taking the card key back into her grasp, Tina entered the room Unaware that she was missing Bette entirely by just a couple of seconds.

     

    Peering inside the fully opened door, her brown eyes widened as she stared at the meticulous layout, almost dropping her key onto the carpet with a silent gasp. Inside, two king sized beds rested side by side before a huge television set; and in the far corner, a clear glass table was set with tropical flowers and two unopened room service menus.  Finally, at the far end of the room, drapes of long, silken material flowed back and forth in the warm breeze of the open window, which showcased the most incredible view Tina had ever seen.  Just beyond the railing of the small balcony, the vast waves of the ocean were mounted by the light of the setting sun as it sat on the horizon, partially hidden by the clouds and mirrored across the radiant surface of the sea.

     

    Taking one final lingering moment over the breathtaking view, Tina turned towards the second bed and sat down, running her fingers across the smooth, lavender sheets as she watched the sun’s light fade over the calm ocean horizon.  Within moments of resting her head on the pillows, she drifted away into a comfortable sleep.  It never even occurred to her that she had somehow forgotten to inform Bette of something of utmost importance Indeed Bette Porter was going to be furious the moment she discovers that Tina was in fact sharing a room with another woman for the rest of her stay in Miami.

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    4. WEEE!!! Another chapter ALREADY CRAZY? I LOVE this story. . .I nearly bust a gut laughing when bette said “women. . .”Hahah, do you feel the same way? (raises eyebrow) Haha, awww, Tina’s sharing a room with Dana! Hmmm. . .I hope there’s a little “sneaking into eachother’s room” action for Bette and Tina. . .and I hope that Bette was the one that held the door for T. PLEASE post again soon. . .and get better already! Sheesh. . .HAha, catch ya later gator!

    6. Love the update. But I’m a little confused. Are they all there for work and Bette doesn’t know that Tina is there or huge coincidence they’re vacationing in Miami? (maybe I read too fast and missed something)

    8. OOH! Loved it! You’re so good at this! I’m wondering if Dana is the one sharing Tina’s room…hmmm…Alice was so cute and the exchange between her and Dana was so adorable! THanks!

    9. CMC,
      This chapter is marvelously evocative of Miami as the heat and humidity of the city are emitted from the screen. Your ponderous and redolent pace makes this story a true delight. The devil is in the details and yep, you give us them in excess. The simplest of items warrants a full description. This adds such depth to your story.
      Thank you for this continuation of a genuinely unique story.
      The ‘so near but yet so far’ aspect is fascinating and I am yet to discover exactly what Bette and Tina’s relationship is in this version of events.
      It put a big grin on my face the introduction of Alice and Dana. Who knows where you will take this partnership?
      Can’t wait for your next post. Please make it soon.
      Your Loyal Fan.

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