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Side Effects Chapter 13 – HELLO…, … … WHO IS IT?
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Tasha: (red-faced and uncomfortable) “hmm…, maybe you should help her”
Duffy: “I tried but apparently she prefers a different helper…; come on Tasha, what’s going on?”
Tasha: “nothing…, is just that I feel a little sick.”
Duffy: “are you feeling sick? Look, if you need something I could help you.”
Tasha: “it’s nothing, I told you.”
Duffy: “okay, if you say so…, hey Tasha, seeing you in this moment it reminds me of me…, indeed, it was a very long time ago, when I was starting in the BPD, I was commissioned to the Harvard campus police office, you know, to watch over campus delinquent activities, to catch drunk drivers, drug addicts, sexual violence, robbery, and those things that happen in universities; one day I met this girl, she was a student in arts, had a boyfriend, they were doing things in the hidden part of the gardens, you know, like a young couple; when a group of six guys attacked them; the offenders were a little bit drunk and they forced the couple to have sex in their sight, then they proceeded to rape them both; someone hear the noise and the crying of the victims and made the call to 911, they notified us and my unit was the first in the crime scene, my partner pursued one of the suspects and I check on the victims, until the paramedics came which was almost immediately; I took the statement of the girl and another officer worked with the boyfriend, the girl got pregnant and it was hard for her and for the boyfriend, she didn’t know who was the father, so she got an abortion.”
Tasha: ”hmm, that must be hard for her.”
Duffy: ”yeah, she was alone, I felt initially sorry about her, so I tried to help her, visited her in the hospital and later in her apartment; when she went to the psychologist, I was her companion; the boyfriend didn’t want to know anything with her after the raping, it was also a terrible memory for him. So I was the one, always there to support her…, and one thing led to another, and suddenly I was very attracted to her, I think she knew that and slowly she let this feeling grow in between us, we were dating for around one year, I was happy, even though it was hard in the sexual part, she was very sensitive after the incident, and I decided to be very patient and caring, until one day… we had sex, real sex, but something was out of place because when we were in the middle of the act she said those strange words… like ‘stick it inside me’ ‘spill it inside me’ …”
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Hi! Thanks for the new chapter!
And who is the “str”? Sister? I guess we need wait to see
Waiting for the next!
Hi Zhenya:
Well as Tina will say in the next chapter, ‘I don’t think str is for Streep because Bette doesn’t know Meryl Streep in person’; but you are in the right way.
Thanks for reading. See you next week.
P
You so know how I feel about cliffhangers!!!!:-)
Great update, dreadful cliffhanger, so please post again soon:-)
‘A little drama’ a big understatement!
PPS – love the story
SG
Hi SG:
I’m sorry for the cliffhanger, but this is nothing in comparison to the cliffhanger of the next chapter; It’s not that I want to torment the readers…, is that this is the best way to cut a chapter and start fresh the next one, at least for me.
And yes, I intend to post soon, (at least that is my intention now).
Well, I didn’t want to alarm about the drama, but you’re right, more than one big drama is coming soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
Str? I also think it stands for sister, for Louise!
Some drama is about to start? I think it will be a drama in a big way.
Tina isn’t stupid and will be very pissed of that Bette, her mother and now Jane kept her in the dark. They are doing it to protect her, but man she will be so pissed!!!
So happy to read this story!!!
Thank you proteonomics for coming back to finish the story!
Hi Bibi:
Yes, you have no idea how Tina is going to react as soon as she finds out about her sister.
But take this into account, Louise knows her sister from a long time ago, she understands how Tina reacts; Tina isn’t able to measure her response when it is about her loved ones, she submitted to Don’s condition of working in Imhotep because she feared Don was going to hurt Bette, her family, and her own mother (that you will realize soon).
Yes, more than one drama is in the way.
Yes, as Zhenya, you are in the right way about str.
Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.
P
Proteonomics:
First of all, I really don’t like Louise hiding away from Tina. I knew that she’s trying to protect her sister and she didn’t mean to threaten Bette and Tina’s relationship, but it’s just too risky. At this moment they should stick together instead of creating any drama. I hope that Tina won’t get mad about Bette is hiding something from her, cause if my partner (wife, actually.) do something or hiding something such important things to me I will be furious. But in those circumstances, I really can’t be sure what will I do if I’m the one who is going to protect Tina. I can understand her decision not to let her sister involve in whatever she’s going to do, Tina has suffered enough, I believe let her sister know nothing is the best way to reduce the risk and keep her away from the danger. I am hoping that Louise is smart enough to know what’s she’s doing. Jane did say she won’t hesitate to arrest her.
As for Tasha’s dilemma, this happened in every place instead of just this situation. Sometimes taking care of a very close friend who happened to break up with his or her girlfriend. The caring, the secret sharing, the intimate contact somehow really did make people fall into it unconsciously. It’s an unexplainable feeling. You don’t even know whether he or she likes you or not, or do they really let go of their ex? It’s a tricky question that no one can explain and certainly, no one can help. You just stuck in these feelings and unable to get out.
I myself love the cliff hanger because this means there will be a new chapter I’m going to look forward to. Can’t wait for more, and please, click the publish button more often. This long waiting is killing me, but thanks for bringing back the story. Always good to reread it, some stories are worth to read again!
Great Chapter! And welcome back again! Always your biggest fan!
CJ
Hi CJ:
Yes, I don’t like either when people hide things, especially people that you love, but some times there is no other choice if you are afraid for the life of the loved ones.
Well I’m going to emphasize what Louise told to Jane, Louise believes she is going to die fighting her uncle because she knows the obsession of Don Kennard for her is sick and criminal, she wouldn’t allow being touched by him, and she will die before that happen; but she doesn’t want to ruin Tina’s life, she doesn’t want Tina close to her when the moment Louise face Don arrives; because, Tina will risk her life for hers. Louise knows Tina has suffered a lot, she wants to be remembered by her sister for the good moments they lived when children and not for the horror of being raped by her own uncle. And Louise is risking everything she has to take Don down,
Tasha situation is another drama and as you said, sometimes is unavoidable to fell in love when you are close to someone who you are consoling and taking care, and sometimes (perhaps most of the times) is hard to set the boundaries; sometimes require to be a very experimented person to do that, but in this case, the situation will produce a very hard outcome in the next two chapters (I won’t say another word about it)
CJ, I can’t click the publish button more than one time per week, but I’ll try to do it every week in the future.
And I’m your biggest fan too, waiting for your weekend chapter
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P