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Side Effects Chapter 16 – LAST DITCH EFFORT
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Bette and Tina smiled seeing them and left when the Coleman told them that they were going to stay with some new friends in the bar.
Now
The bedroom is quiet, no moans no agitation, the bodies are resting but both women are still awake.
Tina: “do you think Josh hooked with the athletic guy?”
Bette: “sure, he did.”
Tina: “how do you know?”
Bette: “Coleman told me.”
Tina: “what…? You didn’t share that with me?”
Bette: “why should I…, he was interested in you.”
Tina: “I thought he was after you.”
Bette: “well…, the guy was bisexual”.
Tina: “ha-ha…, funny.”
Bette: “what’s funny?”
Tina: “hmm…, I was a little… jealous, I thought you like him.”
Bette: “I was… just polite…; baby, when is your doctor appointment?”
The couple finished their conversation and fell asleep cuddling each other.
The Hamptons, Long Island, NY, Wednesday
William Wentworth’s property was huge, it was fenced by brick walls, and a metal gate of bars, followed by a paved path running between gardens, after a half mile the path lead to a house with a water fountain in its front; the property was located in the border of Bridge and Southampton. Since the four women arrived at the property, William showed all of them the gardens, pointing to a smaller construction and a big paddock where two horses were pasturing; when they entered the main house, the girls could see the interior, there were three floors, a basement a big garden with a swimming pool in the back, where, today, Jenny is sitting with Kelly Zoe and Mal remembering that day.
William Wentworth: “ladies welcome to my humble house.”
Kelly: “William, I think this is far from humble.”
William Wentworth: “you may be right, it was humble and lonely until now, but today it’ll be transformed in a magnificent and happy house because of the presence of all of you beautiful ladies; but it’s almost dinner time, we have a wedding banquet waiting for us in the dining room.”
William showed the way and the ladies headed toward the banqueting room; on her side, Kelly was mentally reviewing her plan and hopefully, in around one month she and her friends will be free.
After dinner, during the celebration, Kelly added a sleeping pill in William’s scotch and when they left the gathering to go to their bedroom, the old man was tired, he tried to kiss Kelly, who let him do it but suddenly he fell asleep. Kelly used the opportunity to find a phone to call Jodie, but the lines were blocked; she tried to go to her friends’ bedrooms, but there were guards walking inside the house; things are not going to be easy, it’s going to be hard to flee away from this place.
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Hi! Thank you for the chapter, but you need to stop kidnapping Tibette)
xactly!!
So Rizolli & Louise have pulled off their security teams??? Uuughhhhh!!
So who’s gonna resque the ladies??? No one seems to be able to protect that’s for sure
Hi DumplinT:
You all are people of little faith. Rizzoli’s and Louise’s people are still prepared to intervene, but besides them, put your faith in our wonderful couple.
Who is going to rescue them? Let the ladies do what they can.
Remember how TIBETTE escaped in the former kidnapping? Fine, let’s see how they react now.
Okay, I better stop, I won’t say another word, just wait until the next chapter.
I’m just telling you, I’m a TIBETTER by heart.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
Hi Zhenya:
I’m sorry, but this kidnapping of TIBETTE is the most important part of this chapter, and it’s essential to make the last turn of this story. I promise that this will be the last one and it’s definitive.
However, if you consider that the former one was a failed abduction, this is the only successful one.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
Why oh why leave you us with this end?!!!
You authors love it to let us readers left hangin till the next chapter ????
The flashback to Texas was amazing to read!
Please hurry up and post the next chapter asap. I need to know our girls will be safe and Louise too.
Hi Bibi:
Sorry for the CH again, my friend, you have to understand that I couldn’t find another point in the story to stop until next chapter.
But I agree with you, many authors enjoy cliffhangers; I apologized for this one in the author notes (an also in FB).
The memories from Texas, was a bonus, to compensate a little for the cliffhanger.
As I already said, you need to give our TIBETTE more credit.
Let’s see what happen in the two final chapters of this story.
Thanks, my friend for reading and commenting.
P
No need to apologize my friend!!!
I have faith in you and our girls!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
You know what I am going to say !
I hate cliffhangers!!!
Please post soon!
SG
Hi SG:
I’m sorry again, yes, I know, I know.
I’ll try to post soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
proteonomics:
Sorry took me long enough to write this comment, I was actually waiting for other’s (you know what I’m talking about.) And looked like things going pretty smooth. haha
Back to the story. I can understand Tina’s eagerness and anger about her sister and Bette’s lie, if I were she I’ll probably do or say something more harsh. I know Louise was trying to protect Tina, but damn she’s been hiding for too long, Tina has a great heart not to punch her right on the face. As for Bette, she shouldn’t drive that fast, didn’t want her unborn child to live with a single parent, right?
Tahsa and Dana…I’m not sure I prefer who the most, they are both holding back their feelings for Alice, this is no good for the poor blonde. I know for sure that they love Alice very much, but in these dangerous circumstances, being along is not healthy for anyone.
One of the reasons I love about your story is that so many flashbacks. The Tibette’s interactions are never too much, especially before the chaos. Love the tender and gentle Bette, making Tina coming out and braver, they were both learning from each other, supporting and helping to defeat the devil in their heart, the scene that I would never get bored with it.
Although I always love to see so many pages when it comes to a wonderful story, I have to agree with Zenya, please stop kidnapping TiBette and give us a happy ending soon. It’s been a long while and I really looking forward to the climax part when she needs to choose…okay, I’ll stop there. ;)
Anyway, wonderful story, amazing chapter, and please please please post soon. Or I will need to continue to read the same chapters again and again.
CJ
Hi Crystal JH:
Tina didn’t react worse, because she has been looking for her sister all those years, and her absence was a big part of her pain and psychological problem, which she could overcome only thanks to her relation with Bette.
Bette was speeding up because she was scared about Tina’s reaction; she already suffered the breaking of their relationship time ago because Tina’s way to face things.
Respect To Tasha and Dana, well what can I say, Alice has a history with Dana, they had gone through many difficult things in life together and are waiting for a baby, it’s hard to compete with that.
Now, the reason why this is a long chapter is because this story is not only TIBETTE’s story, there are many other characters here and many of them have their little stories and I don’t want to leave loose ends; I need to resolve each situation and part of that has been done in this chapter.
I’ll try to post soon, but I see that this weekend all of us will have many updates to read, including yours, and two wonderful ends of stories from DBFF and CellaNox, so not sure if I’ll post this coming week.
But I’ll post soon anyway.
Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.
P