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Side Effects Chapter 16 – LAST DITCH EFFORT
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Lara: “yeah…, I understand.”
Dana: (sobbing) “it’s hard and it had been harder… all my life, all our life my brother and I suffering abuse and humiliation from that man, from Howard Fairbanks; he said that we have to be like him, that we have to obey his rules or we’ll be disowned; when we left the house because of my father, my mom secretly helped us with money … (Crumbling in tears) oh my God, that man was a monster… he ordered those criminals to kidnap me…”
Dana was desolately crying and Lara hugged her, they were there for a couple of minutes until Dana stopped sobbing, and the redhead kissed her forehead soothing the athlete, they pull out a little and gaze at each other eyes.
At that moment Dana felt an irrepressible desire and pressed her lips on Lara’s, the redhead let it happens; but Dana didn’t stop, suddenly something reborn inside her, the softness of the lips, the need of caressing a fresh skin, the smell of women, the sensation of those boobs pressing on hers, the closeness of those legs, women legs. They kept kissing and caressing on the couch; Lara wasn’t new on this, she had had some girlfriends and nightstands, nothing serious but friendly, no attachments; though she was conscious of Dana’s situation, she was also attracted by her, she let the athlete’s hands roam on her body and kiss behind her earlobe, Lara shivers, she was getting wet.
Lara: (moaning) “ohh…”
Dana: (slowing down) “I’m sorry…”
Lara: “it’s fine, please don’t stop… I like you very much.”
Dana felt encouraged by the redhead who now was caressing her hairs and shoulders. The athlete brushed with her hand Lara’s pants on her thighs; the brunette felt aroused, she wants more, but something very inside her heart told her not to go farther, eventually, they stopped but kept close, the Dana talked.
Dana: “you are my friend Lara…, my dear friend, and I don’t think I can have secrets with you, I really like you and I didn’t think I was able to desire a woman again…, but I feel deep desire for you, and I want to keep sharing that feeling with you”
Lara: “I like you, too, Dana…, I like you very much, you are so beautiful, and even with your illness you are very strong…, is not the physical, you know, is your will, your determination to beat the death, the strength to oppose to those who wanted to harm you…, I admire you, baby”
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Hi! Thank you for the chapter, but you need to stop kidnapping Tibette)
xactly!!
So Rizolli & Louise have pulled off their security teams??? Uuughhhhh!!
So who’s gonna resque the ladies??? No one seems to be able to protect that’s for sure
Hi DumplinT:
You all are people of little faith. Rizzoli’s and Louise’s people are still prepared to intervene, but besides them, put your faith in our wonderful couple.
Who is going to rescue them? Let the ladies do what they can.
Remember how TIBETTE escaped in the former kidnapping? Fine, let’s see how they react now.
Okay, I better stop, I won’t say another word, just wait until the next chapter.
I’m just telling you, I’m a TIBETTER by heart.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
Hi Zhenya:
I’m sorry, but this kidnapping of TIBETTE is the most important part of this chapter, and it’s essential to make the last turn of this story. I promise that this will be the last one and it’s definitive.
However, if you consider that the former one was a failed abduction, this is the only successful one.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
Why oh why leave you us with this end?!!!
You authors love it to let us readers left hangin till the next chapter ????
The flashback to Texas was amazing to read!
Please hurry up and post the next chapter asap. I need to know our girls will be safe and Louise too.
Hi Bibi:
Sorry for the CH again, my friend, you have to understand that I couldn’t find another point in the story to stop until next chapter.
But I agree with you, many authors enjoy cliffhangers; I apologized for this one in the author notes (an also in FB).
The memories from Texas, was a bonus, to compensate a little for the cliffhanger.
As I already said, you need to give our TIBETTE more credit.
Let’s see what happen in the two final chapters of this story.
Thanks, my friend for reading and commenting.
P
No need to apologize my friend!!!
I have faith in you and our girls!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
You know what I am going to say !
I hate cliffhangers!!!
Please post soon!
SG
Hi SG:
I’m sorry again, yes, I know, I know.
I’ll try to post soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
proteonomics:
Sorry took me long enough to write this comment, I was actually waiting for other’s (you know what I’m talking about.) And looked like things going pretty smooth. haha
Back to the story. I can understand Tina’s eagerness and anger about her sister and Bette’s lie, if I were she I’ll probably do or say something more harsh. I know Louise was trying to protect Tina, but damn she’s been hiding for too long, Tina has a great heart not to punch her right on the face. As for Bette, she shouldn’t drive that fast, didn’t want her unborn child to live with a single parent, right?
Tahsa and Dana…I’m not sure I prefer who the most, they are both holding back their feelings for Alice, this is no good for the poor blonde. I know for sure that they love Alice very much, but in these dangerous circumstances, being along is not healthy for anyone.
One of the reasons I love about your story is that so many flashbacks. The Tibette’s interactions are never too much, especially before the chaos. Love the tender and gentle Bette, making Tina coming out and braver, they were both learning from each other, supporting and helping to defeat the devil in their heart, the scene that I would never get bored with it.
Although I always love to see so many pages when it comes to a wonderful story, I have to agree with Zenya, please stop kidnapping TiBette and give us a happy ending soon. It’s been a long while and I really looking forward to the climax part when she needs to choose…okay, I’ll stop there. ;)
Anyway, wonderful story, amazing chapter, and please please please post soon. Or I will need to continue to read the same chapters again and again.
CJ
Hi Crystal JH:
Tina didn’t react worse, because she has been looking for her sister all those years, and her absence was a big part of her pain and psychological problem, which she could overcome only thanks to her relation with Bette.
Bette was speeding up because she was scared about Tina’s reaction; she already suffered the breaking of their relationship time ago because Tina’s way to face things.
Respect To Tasha and Dana, well what can I say, Alice has a history with Dana, they had gone through many difficult things in life together and are waiting for a baby, it’s hard to compete with that.
Now, the reason why this is a long chapter is because this story is not only TIBETTE’s story, there are many other characters here and many of them have their little stories and I don’t want to leave loose ends; I need to resolve each situation and part of that has been done in this chapter.
I’ll try to post soon, but I see that this weekend all of us will have many updates to read, including yours, and two wonderful ends of stories from DBFF and CellaNox, so not sure if I’ll post this coming week.
But I’ll post soon anyway.
Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.
P