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Side Effects Chapter 16 – LAST DITCH EFFORT
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Louise: “long time is urgt?”
Text: “x me IMU.”
Louise: “when where.”
Text: “2day?”
Louise: “free after mdnt?”
Text: “my car?”
Louise: “fine Kennard’s bldg?
Text: “ok I L u.”
Louise: “L u 2.”
Louise smiled, finally after several months she may get ’something’; things were good these last days, she was talking by phone with Tina and with her mom, perhaps she won’t have to die to catch her monstrous uncle, perhaps she could have an open life, and with this promising last text message, perhaps she could make plans for her future. But this evening is also special and important; Louise has to take the last piece of information to send Don Kennard to prison for life.
Manhattan, NY, same day, 11:40 pm
Kennard’s Building
Disguised as an old lady and wearing the cleaning crew uniform, Louise has entered the last room she has to clean and at the same time she will retrieve the electronic device that she’s been using to collect evidence about the trafficking activities of his uncle; once in her hand, she plugged it in her cell phone and activate the download and transfer button, rapidly the encrypted information was on the network system of her organization, just when she finished, the door of the office opened and all the lights went on, in front of her were two ruffians and behind, Charlie.
Charlie: “what do you think you are doing?”
Louise: “cleaning.”
Charlie: “that thing that you have in your hand…, give it to me.”
Louise: “that’s my music in my flash drive.”
Charlie: “this is not a common flash drive.”
Suddenly behind Charlie the figure of a tall man broke the calm on Louise mind, yes she still remembers that monster, her memory traveled back on time, she felt an unexpected terror, she felt very small.
Don: “why don’t we finish this masquerade…, I recognized your voice, Louise… Charlie, remove her wig.”
Charlie obeyed exposing the golden locks of Louise; she was quiet and paralyzed, still stunned for her travel through memory lane.
Don: “bring her here.”
Charlie touched Louise’s arm, and an alarm sound in the blonde’s mind and she made a quick move knocking Charlie to the floor.
Don: “hold her!!!”
The other two ruffians attacked and behind Don, Eric and Henry showed; Louise was strong and powerful in martial arts, soon one of the ruffians were on the floor too, she smashed with her foot the electronic device; Eric was pushed by Don to participate in the fight and received a piece of Louise’s fury on his face, but Henry has a syringe with a liquid that he injected on the woman, who finally fell on the floor.
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Hi! Thank you for the chapter, but you need to stop kidnapping Tibette)
xactly!!
So Rizolli & Louise have pulled off their security teams??? Uuughhhhh!!
So who’s gonna resque the ladies??? No one seems to be able to protect that’s for sure
Hi DumplinT:
You all are people of little faith. Rizzoli’s and Louise’s people are still prepared to intervene, but besides them, put your faith in our wonderful couple.
Who is going to rescue them? Let the ladies do what they can.
Remember how TIBETTE escaped in the former kidnapping? Fine, let’s see how they react now.
Okay, I better stop, I won’t say another word, just wait until the next chapter.
I’m just telling you, I’m a TIBETTER by heart.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
Hi Zhenya:
I’m sorry, but this kidnapping of TIBETTE is the most important part of this chapter, and it’s essential to make the last turn of this story. I promise that this will be the last one and it’s definitive.
However, if you consider that the former one was a failed abduction, this is the only successful one.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
Why oh why leave you us with this end?!!!
You authors love it to let us readers left hangin till the next chapter ????
The flashback to Texas was amazing to read!
Please hurry up and post the next chapter asap. I need to know our girls will be safe and Louise too.
Hi Bibi:
Sorry for the CH again, my friend, you have to understand that I couldn’t find another point in the story to stop until next chapter.
But I agree with you, many authors enjoy cliffhangers; I apologized for this one in the author notes (an also in FB).
The memories from Texas, was a bonus, to compensate a little for the cliffhanger.
As I already said, you need to give our TIBETTE more credit.
Let’s see what happen in the two final chapters of this story.
Thanks, my friend for reading and commenting.
P
No need to apologize my friend!!!
I have faith in you and our girls!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
You know what I am going to say !
I hate cliffhangers!!!
Please post soon!
SG
Hi SG:
I’m sorry again, yes, I know, I know.
I’ll try to post soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
P
proteonomics:
Sorry took me long enough to write this comment, I was actually waiting for other’s (you know what I’m talking about.) And looked like things going pretty smooth. haha
Back to the story. I can understand Tina’s eagerness and anger about her sister and Bette’s lie, if I were she I’ll probably do or say something more harsh. I know Louise was trying to protect Tina, but damn she’s been hiding for too long, Tina has a great heart not to punch her right on the face. As for Bette, she shouldn’t drive that fast, didn’t want her unborn child to live with a single parent, right?
Tahsa and Dana…I’m not sure I prefer who the most, they are both holding back their feelings for Alice, this is no good for the poor blonde. I know for sure that they love Alice very much, but in these dangerous circumstances, being along is not healthy for anyone.
One of the reasons I love about your story is that so many flashbacks. The Tibette’s interactions are never too much, especially before the chaos. Love the tender and gentle Bette, making Tina coming out and braver, they were both learning from each other, supporting and helping to defeat the devil in their heart, the scene that I would never get bored with it.
Although I always love to see so many pages when it comes to a wonderful story, I have to agree with Zenya, please stop kidnapping TiBette and give us a happy ending soon. It’s been a long while and I really looking forward to the climax part when she needs to choose…okay, I’ll stop there. ;)
Anyway, wonderful story, amazing chapter, and please please please post soon. Or I will need to continue to read the same chapters again and again.
CJ
Hi Crystal JH:
Tina didn’t react worse, because she has been looking for her sister all those years, and her absence was a big part of her pain and psychological problem, which she could overcome only thanks to her relation with Bette.
Bette was speeding up because she was scared about Tina’s reaction; she already suffered the breaking of their relationship time ago because Tina’s way to face things.
Respect To Tasha and Dana, well what can I say, Alice has a history with Dana, they had gone through many difficult things in life together and are waiting for a baby, it’s hard to compete with that.
Now, the reason why this is a long chapter is because this story is not only TIBETTE’s story, there are many other characters here and many of them have their little stories and I don’t want to leave loose ends; I need to resolve each situation and part of that has been done in this chapter.
I’ll try to post soon, but I see that this weekend all of us will have many updates to read, including yours, and two wonderful ends of stories from DBFF and CellaNox, so not sure if I’ll post this coming week.
But I’ll post soon anyway.
Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.
P