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Side Effects Chapter 5 – LOOKING FOR CLUES
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In the meanwhile, Bette was talking with Louise, reporting the progress of their work, indeed, Louise doesn’t need Bette’s report, she had other people in the police station and Dan in the consultant team, to learn very much in detail what has been transpired in the case of the ‘injected shoulder’, but what she wanted to know is about Tina her sister and Bette was always the perfect source to ask for her.
Bette: “Louise you always seem to know more than me about this mess, I don’t know how do you do, but we have to stop talking every day; Tina is suspecting I’m hiding something from her, I saw her sad waiting for me to tell her what’s going on”
Louise: “are you sure it is because of the phone calls? Are you good to her?”
Bette: “what do you mean by that Louise? I’m giving myself totally to her and I’m sure I make her happy”
Louise: “then, why those phone calls make her insecure about you?”
Bette: “she is under lot of pressure, Louise, she will be surely better if you show yourself to her, especially in these circumstances”
There was silence, Louise needed to know what is hidden in her sister’s past that triggered all her insecurities, her fears, her lack of social life, why Bette seems to be the only one who really knows Tina and apparently share with her a bond of secrecy; life wasn’t fair with her family, she and Tina were very fond of each other during their childhood, but they were separated since very young age because of that monster, and now that she found her, she wants her sister back but the monster is still out there, she recognizes that Bette was a good match for Tina and maybe she still is, the brunette has shown her she loves her sister, but Louise wants to know more.
Bette: “Louise, are you there?”
Louise: “yes…, okay Bette, let’s lay our cards on the table and be frank with each other, she is my sister, but there are things about her that are hidden to me, I want you to tell me what is in Tina’s past that has originated all those insecurities, what holds her of having an active social life, to sacrifice herself for everybody else, to carry the world upon her shoulders…”
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Yeaah, you finally updated this incredible story proteonomics!!!
I really love it, especially the background about Maura and Jane and ofcourse about Bette and Tina.
Bette is at a difficult position, wanting to protect Tina and hiding that she is in touch with Louise. It cause fears and insecurity for Tina to the point that she is ready to let Bette go. That will break my heart ???? So make sure you are not gonna break my heart.
Thank you for the update!
Hi Bibi:
Nice to be here again and thank you very much for your comments. Yes, I know, things are getting hard for everybody, as I mentioned when I replied your comment in the former chapter, we are starting our trip on a roller coaster; the old memories are important, to understand the deep bond among the characters.
Bibi, I’m not going to break your heart, I’m a TIBETTER, but, many hard things will happen, just have faith in them.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and for your constant support
P
Hi proteonomics,
Caught up on this story now and really hoping for another update soon.
Please to see your Reply to Bibi28’s Comment that means you will not be breaking my Tibetter Heart and I will try and have faith.
Happy, Healthy and Peaceful New Year and Thank you for your fascinating stories.
SG
Dear SassyGran
It is a great pleasure for me to read your comment.
Yes, just be patient, I’m not a TIBETTER-heart breaker because I would break my own heart.
Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting on this story, I’ll update soon.
P
Glad my Heart is safe.
Don’t always have time to comment but be assured I read when I can.
SG
I’ve been out of the loop for a minute but I had time to finally get caught up on this story and I loved it! With Bette and Tina being the fan favorites it easy to want them to have a perfect relationship, but I love the stories were they show us “there human” and have ups and downs just like eveyone else! Maura and Jane I’m liking them as the story continues and I had a feeling Tasha was going to fall for Alice! Get story, Happy New Year, and looking forward to the next chapter!
Hi Skunk:
What a coincidence, I just came to read the last pages of your story and found your comment.
Yeah, I like when all those amazing fictional characters of our favorite shows, become humans as we are, as you do in your stories too.
Yup, it is coming about Tasha.
Thanks so much Skunk for reading and commenting; now, I will continue reading your story.
Happy New Year too.
P
Happy New Year looking forward to your first post of the year on this story!
Hi SassyGran:
I’m in my way, almost finished, I’ll post in the next two days.
Thanks for following this story.
P
Great, look forward to it.
SG