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Side Effects Chapter 5 – LOOKING FOR CLUES
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Bette: “Louise…, honestly I think you are exaggerating, she has fought to overcome all her fears”
Louise: ”but she is still fearful”
Bette: ”… look, Louise, I know the story, I’ve never told anybody, I don’t think, even, your mom knows it, but you are her sister, and if I was in your place I would need to know, so I will tell you…”
Remembering
Eleven years ago (continuation of former chapter)
It is again Friday evening; Bette is sitting with Shane in her car outside of Tina’s and Carmen’s apartment, they are waiting for them, the last four weeks have been like a teeter-totter for Bette.
The first hard time was due to Jane’s jealousy about Tina; that evening of the incident of the broken lighter on the beach, Maura was in the laboratory working in her research when her phone rang.
Maura: “hello…”
Jane: “hi Maura…, it is Jane…”
Maura: “I know…, what’s up Jane?”
Jane: “…guess who was caught between the legs of Bette Porter…?”
Maura: “what the fu…, Jane, are you sober?”
Jane: “sure, I just finish my shift”
Maura: (sighing) “okay…, tell me…”
Jane: “your new student”
Maura: “new student…? Are you talking about Tina…?”
Jane: “the same one…”
Maura: “okay…, what do you mean?”
Jane: “nothing…, I just caught them…”
Maura: “Jane Rizzoli, if you want to tell me something come here and talk to me”
Jane: “okay, I’m in my way…”
There is a knock on the door
Maura: “Jane…, do you know where I am…?”
Knock on the door again
Maura: (walking to the door) “Jane…”
Maura: (opening the door) “Jane…, don’t you dare to hang up…”
Jane: “I’m here…”
Maura: “what are you doing here?”
Jane: “you said you want to talk with me”
Jane told Maura about the incident where Tina got stuck between Bette’s legs, which left the graduate student very concerned.
On Monday after her first date with Tina, the week started with an uncomfortable situation for Bette; it was Maura, who took her aside after the lecture and summoned her to her office, to ask about the incident at the beach.
Bette: “I swear, Maura…, nothing nasty happened between Tina and me”
Maura: “I didn’t say it was nasty…, look, Bette, Tina is a shy, innocent and good-natured girl, she doesn’t have much experience…, Bette…, she is not one of those easy girls you usually have, and she is not like one of your one-night-stand affairs…”
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Yeaah, you finally updated this incredible story proteonomics!!!
I really love it, especially the background about Maura and Jane and ofcourse about Bette and Tina.
Bette is at a difficult position, wanting to protect Tina and hiding that she is in touch with Louise. It cause fears and insecurity for Tina to the point that she is ready to let Bette go. That will break my heart ???? So make sure you are not gonna break my heart.
Thank you for the update!
Hi Bibi:
Nice to be here again and thank you very much for your comments. Yes, I know, things are getting hard for everybody, as I mentioned when I replied your comment in the former chapter, we are starting our trip on a roller coaster; the old memories are important, to understand the deep bond among the characters.
Bibi, I’m not going to break your heart, I’m a TIBETTER, but, many hard things will happen, just have faith in them.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and for your constant support
P
Hi proteonomics,
Caught up on this story now and really hoping for another update soon.
Please to see your Reply to Bibi28’s Comment that means you will not be breaking my Tibetter Heart and I will try and have faith.
Happy, Healthy and Peaceful New Year and Thank you for your fascinating stories.
SG
Dear SassyGran
It is a great pleasure for me to read your comment.
Yes, just be patient, I’m not a TIBETTER-heart breaker because I would break my own heart.
Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting on this story, I’ll update soon.
P
Glad my Heart is safe.
Don’t always have time to comment but be assured I read when I can.
SG
I’ve been out of the loop for a minute but I had time to finally get caught up on this story and I loved it! With Bette and Tina being the fan favorites it easy to want them to have a perfect relationship, but I love the stories were they show us “there human” and have ups and downs just like eveyone else! Maura and Jane I’m liking them as the story continues and I had a feeling Tasha was going to fall for Alice! Get story, Happy New Year, and looking forward to the next chapter!
Hi Skunk:
What a coincidence, I just came to read the last pages of your story and found your comment.
Yeah, I like when all those amazing fictional characters of our favorite shows, become humans as we are, as you do in your stories too.
Yup, it is coming about Tasha.
Thanks so much Skunk for reading and commenting; now, I will continue reading your story.
Happy New Year too.
P
Happy New Year looking forward to your first post of the year on this story!
Hi SassyGran:
I’m in my way, almost finished, I’ll post in the next two days.
Thanks for following this story.
P
Great, look forward to it.
SG