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Chapter 9 – SISTERS
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“It could be a lot of fun to find out though.” Ashley suggested.
“Well, I’m not asking.” Tina nervously shot back. “Not yet at least.”
“Okay, okay. You could be right about Bette. Listen, I’m not sending anything. I’m just teasing, so don’t worry.” Ashley relented, but grinned into the phone anyway. It was all meant in good fun. She loved pushing Tina’s buttons sometimes. It was one of the perks of being her younger sister. She really couldn’t help the next thing that came out of her mouth. “Coward.”
“You know I would crush you if I was there right now.” Tina snorted and just wanted to jab her sister in the ribs.
“But you’re nooottttt heeeeere, so I can tease you all I waaannnnt.” Ashley finally giggled, knowing Tina could do nothing to her this time.
“What are you? 8?”
Ashley just laughed harder at Tina’s question.
When they were kids, their usual method of resolving issues was to pounce on one another in a girlish wrestling match, with Tina usually winning. But as Ashley complained that Tina always had the advantage because she was older, taller and bigger, they had switched to good ole tickle fights which were more evenly matched. Tina no longer had the natural advantage and Ashley loved it.
“Just so you know, I’m loving long distance at the moment.” Ashley did a little taunting just for fun. “Score one for A Kennard and zero for T Kennard. Woohoo!”
“Have your laughs now sis.” Tina reminded the younger woman. “I won’t be in England forever. And when I get home, you know I have an excellent memory.”
“Yeah, yeah.” Ashley shot back with that grin still on her face and her eyes gleaming with mischief. “Like you’ll remember this in five months when you get back home. Fat chance on that Chrissie.”
“Don’t call me that you jerk.” Tina chuckled as she raised her hand in a certain gesture like Ashley could actually see her do that. “You know I hate that nickname. Damn you.”
“Uh-huh.” Ashley twirled a few ends of her hair with her right hand fingers. “Geez, I’ll stop. Calm down. So . . . what are you going to do about Bette?”
“I’ve got to talk to her.” Tina had decide as she stood and walked to the long bank of windows in the apartment. She pulled back the curtains and looked out. Down the street was the world famous British Museum. Bette had promised to take her there soon for a tour. It was a beautiful afternoon. A crystal blue sky with faint streams of white long clouds high up. “I can’t go on like this with these feelings and not say anything. I just don’t know what to say so that she won’t back away.”
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Hey Collins,
Looks like an interesting chapter. Can’t wait to read it.
Hopefully tomorrow. Gotta work extra few hours tonight. Some folks didn’t show for their shift tonight- damn holiday!
But I’m off tomorrow & reading’ time will be observed!!
Thanks
Thanks
Loving this story so far – loving the long chapters as well! Read this during a nasty thunderstorm today.
Hi Ashley,
So glad you are enjoying this story. I know the chapters can be long sometimes – depends on the message I’m sending. I like them too & I do try to include as much as I can.
It is important to me to give the background of their relationship in this story since it’s set in a different country & Tibette has different careers. I love building up their story & how they fit together.
Sorry to hear about the weather in your area. Hope all is okay!
Be safe & will post soon.
Oooooo Wee!! These two better get to talking or their fantasies are gonna cause them to jump each other’s bone!! They gonna Fk so hard that they might break each other. Lordy these two!!
Hey D,
Thanks for leaving a note. Yes, you’re so right, they are going to ‘jump each other’ very soon. A few more chapters to get them a little bit closer & then they’re on it!!
Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Best regards
The relationship between Tina and her sister is very interesting. You portrayed them realistically.
I loved their little arguing and teasing each other. And Ashley teasing Tina about her first girlfriend and that she has a type – you could feel the love there between the two sisters.
When Tina tells Ashley about Bette – “Oh Ash, she’s everything I could want in a partner.” And “I love everything about her.”
Geez, I thought about GQ and the ridiculous comment by Bette about Pippa being ‘everything.’ Really???? So glad you corrected Marja’s unbelievable writing!! Thanks
Fav line this chapter – Tina referring to Bette – “I just wanna melt into her.” Wow – yeah me-too Tina.
Pictures were awesome and I hope we get some really great scenes with Tibette back in love and showing it in GQ3.
The love scenes were great – so hot. Like DumplinT said, they are going to jump each other soon! Can’t wait for it to happen.
Wondering though what’s up with their mother and her tiredness? Could this be some foreshadowing of something to come???
Thanks for the wonderful chapter. I enjoyed it.
Hey Kira,
Thanks for the message. Happy you loved the chapter!
It was a labor of love for me!!
I only have brothers – no sisters – but I hoped I captured the bind between sisters & how they feel about one another. It was fun to write & I hope some of the humor showed through.
See you caught that reference to GQ2. I just hated when Bette said that about Pippa – I wanted to gag! How ridiculous indeed. Like that would ever happen in an 11-day relationship!!! Please – give me a break.
I liked that line too when T just wants to melt. It shows the depth of her feelings. She’s hooked – just needs to act on it!
I knew you would notice that little convo between Tina & Ashley about their mother – we’ll have to wait & see how that turns out.
Thanks for reaching out & stay safe.
Hey Collins,
You did a terrific job at the relationship between Tina and Ashley – no worries there.
I’m hopin’ & prayin’ like Dusty that Tibette reunites quickly in GQ3. I don’t know if I can handle it if they don’t.
Okay, so you confirmed my thoughts about Tina’s mother. Any clues you could provide???
Again – great chapter – loved it!
Thanks for the kind words. They mean a lot.
We are getting very close to the start of filming for GQ3 – trying to still be positive about Tibette & their reunion. Prayers said already!!!!
Tina’s mother – I’ll say that she’ll play a critical role in a decision Tina has to make later in the novel. It will affect the course of Tina’s life & career.
Stay tuned in.
Thanks for the hint.
You betcha I’ll be staying tuned in.
Can’t wait.
Collins,
Thank you. You know this chapter is special to me; I loved it.
Ashley and Tina – you nailed it. You captured perfectly all the aspects of sisters’ close bond; the teasing – omg, I laughed out loud.; talking about relationships, providing support and the best advice – Ashley knew Tina was falling for Bette and gave Tina excellent advice. No one knows you like your sister. Yes, I cried. And I felt wonderfully uplifted.
My favorite line – “Love is in the air. Have faith sis”. The younger Kennard assured the older one. “Have faith”
Anything that has a Dusty Springfield song can’t go wrong – love Dusty.
Tina’s fantasy – wow. Very well-written and very HOT. Then Bette – for sure there was only one way to resolve how she was feeling. When these two get together – watch out…I love the way you’re building up to it., for them and for us
I love, love this story. Such good writing. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Hey Westy,
You are so welcome for the chapter – you have been my inspiration for the relationship with the Kennard sisters. It was a privilege to write the chapter in your honor.
I find it very interesting that some readers have favorite lines in the chapter. Glad the words could have that much of an impact.
I am an oldie myself & just love Dusty too. Although I’m not a big fan of including lyrics in chapters, this song by Dusty just seemed to fit for the way it was used.
I gotta keep the sexual tension going between them until they actually confess their love & desire for each other. A little daydreaming always helps in that department!!
And yes, the tension is building & will get even hotter in the next few chapters.
Will post the next chapter soon.
Again – it was an honor to do this for you.
Hey Collins,
Thanks for the chapter, Very well written.
I have a sister but the relationship is non-existent so it was nice to read about theirs.
Can’t wait to read more !
Hi Izzie,
Thanks for reading & the recognition. So happy you liked it.
Sorry to hear about your sister. Please know that you are very much appreciated in our community & we value your spirit & support. Life’s too short to be negative.
Promise to post soon – have several chapters ready to go.
Until the next time – thanks again.
Thanks for your kind words
Its heartfelt & sincere.
Best regards.
Agree with the others that I am loving this epic story too. Very well written indeed. Loved how you wrote the connection between the sisters – it was so natural and honest.
You include so many great details in your love scenes – it’s much appreciated!!
Can’t wait for them to finally get together and be honest with each other about their feelings.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hi Leigh,
Thanks for checking this latest update out.
I appreciate your comments about the story & all the little details I sweat out in review & rewrites!
Honesty & confessions are on the horizon.
Won’t be long now – they are on their way.
Hi Collins, a little late but i will read this update on my last day of vacation tomorrow!
Hey Bibi,
Hope you have enjoyed your holiday.!
Let me know what you think.
Happy travels.
Hey Collins,
Note to myself, don’t read NC-17 chapters in the morning when you already have had a shower! Damn, i need another one!
What a very well written chapter, i loved the conversation between the two sisters, the banter, the teasing but also the more serious talk they had. I have a little sister, she is 30 years and i am 50 but we never will share a bond like that, we simply differ so much, a whole gap, but in our own way we have a good contact.
Both Tina and Bette lust for each other but it is more than that, they have a deep connection. Tina is more open about her feelings and want, Bette is struggling but she will come around and let those walls down. Ashley is right in her advice to Tina, be around Bette, let her see she can trust her, be patiënt.
Tina’s mother, she is tired and Ashley is concerned about her health and asked Tina to call her, i have a feeling this is going to be the main reason why they lose contact in the future or atleast one of the reasons.
Collins, you did a amazing job with this chapter!!!
Vacation was really good, sadly it is almost over. Have a good day and take care of yourself and your wife!
You are too funny with the shower comment!
Age gaps in families can be difficult to transverse. I have 2 older brothers that are 16 & 18 years older than myself & for a time when I was much younger, it was challenging to understand the other’s point of view.
So, I certainly know what you are speaking of with your sister.
B & T have a few more situations to transgress before the fireworks start – the buildup id always worth the wait!
Family issues – Tina & Bette will both have them. Damn!!
Glad your holiday was enjoyable & that you had a marvelous time. Reality comes back way tooooo fast when you’re enjoying yourself.
Till next time my friend.
Thanks so much for the kind words.