Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
Smile
Login to add story to favorites
(83 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
“Yes!” her breath was shuddery as tears welled up in her eyes, Shane slid the ring on her finger and she was pulled back on the bed for round two.
Damn it’s 2 am again
They had made love again till they were both to sore to continue and even then they remained close by kissing each other senseless. At the moment though, they were laying down with Carmen’s back to Shane’s front, fitting together perfect like pieces of a puzzle as Shane traced lazy circles on her lovers stomach.
She glanced up at the clock to see it was 2:17 am and muttered curses as she slid out of the bed as quietly as she could. Carmen however sensed the immediate loss and woke up.
“You have to leave already?” her voice sounded slightly desperate.
“Yeah, I’ve got to do some big wig at some studio in Burbank” she said as she pulled up her jeans and threw on her black shirt.
“When will you be home?”
“Around 12:00, I’ve got another appointment after the first one downtown, but I promise we’ll have the whole day to ourselves when I get back.” she sat on the bed next to Carmen. “You should stay and catch up on some sleep though”.
And she kisses me goodbye, for the 16th time
She reached up and grasped onto the front of Shane’s shirt, pulling her down into a kiss… and then another… and another… and another and several kisses blended into one very long very heart wrenching goodbye kiss. Shane finally pulls away, grabs her stuff, and (after a few more kisses) heads out the door.
And I’m driving home it’s 5 am
Carmen is back in the taxi watching the beautiful scenery of an L.A. morning
And I look at the sun come up over the hills, Clouds are turnin’ pink…
Small parks, empty streets, and towering building being lit by a fiery dawn, a new day, and for her a new life.
And green, And all I can see is her eyes
The green of the freshly mowed grass in her neighborhood reminds her of Shane’s eyes, and all she can do is sigh as she walks into her house to prepare for another day of work. Looking at the ring on her finger, she wonders if she made the right decision saying yes.
And I get blinded when she opens the door
She turns the ***** and lets herself into the house that they share and stops dead in her tracks. Rose petals, leading from the front door, down the hall, straight to their room. She places the bouquet on the coffee table and follows the trail.
It’s like looking to the sun you know
She walks up to the entrance of their room and pushes the door open to find Shane, holding a puppy golden retriever in her arms and scratching it behind its ears.
And I’m just blinking, mumbling, staring at my shoes
“Who’s a good boy? Who’s a good puppy” Shane was speaking in a goofy voice when she realized someone was at the door. She looks up to find Carmen leaning against the door post with tears coming down her eyes.
And she just looks at me
“I thought you might want to start a family too”
And smiles
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
i love you! that was great!….and hot hot HOT! the song was a great backdrop for the story. wow shane asking carmen’s hand in marriage. thanks for a great sharmen story!
WOW that was awesome! please continue :)
WOW! I think i got a lil’ wet reading ur awsom story.hehe!.I loved it so so much. it was great.please PLEASE continue!!!
This one should definately get an award! I loved this story! Makes me wish you’d write a sequal (cos this seemed like a stand-alone?). This made my little closet-romantic heart go pitty-pat lol. Seriously, very romantic; sweet beyond words; and as wittybanter said: “hot hot HOT” and the song did fit in here. Very nice. 5 stars for ya. No doubt. So, any way I, or anyone else, could possibly persuade you to do a sequal?? :D
OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.
OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.
great please continue!!!!!!!!!!!
oh gosh, damn that was so fuck*ng amazing…so cute and full of love.Thank you so much for this beautiful story, really you did an awesome job!!
right now i am speechless, ur story is extrordinary, u have a great talent plz update soon!!!
I really loved this story!!! It was amazing!!!
Puppy! I’m a sucker for foof, and you’ve combined it with some hot sex. This story would be stronger without the excerpts of lyrics or whatever they are.
Great story, trying to make it hard on the rest of us are you. I’m so glad you’ve joined in. I hope you continue to write and I’ll continue to read. Great story and thank you. Deb
Omg.omg.omg.That’s all I’m gonna say.;) Well I lie. YOU ROCK!!!!!! Love the song, love the story. I just wonder why did Carmen start to doubt if saying yes was the right thing to do? Does she think Shane will not go trough with it? And I must say that was one hot sex scene, totally made me horny:D Update soon PLEASE!!!
It’s cool, hot, clear, awesome. Glad to read it because I haven’t seen ‘happy Shane’ for a long time in fanfics.
So damn good. Shane’s romantic side is HOT! Pleasantly surprised by the proposal. What are Carmens doubts? Are they about herself or does she feel Shane is unable to completely change for this relationship? Con’t Please
that was great I love it and I did not think it would be shane that would have pop the question but I love it
Oh my god, that was simply fantastic. I loved it, great storyline. Thanks so much for posting it!