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    Story written on November 6, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57488
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    And she just looks at me… and smiles


    Shane let out a shuddery sigh and lightly brushed her finger tips against the hardened nub. She could feel the nails leaving marks in her back but it only added to the sensations. She would never openly admit it (at least not to anyone that wasn’t Carmen) but Shane liked a little pain mixed with her pleasure. She couldn’t tell you why, she just went with what felt good.


    Carmen was twisting and turning from this sweet and excrutiatingly delicious torture. She practically begged, “*****. Please baby I need to feel you inside me.”


    She heard the pleading in her voice and very slowly slid two fingers into Carmen. The latina’s eyes rolled back and her pelvis flew off the bed as a plethora of Spanish swear words spilled from her lips, only driving Shane even crazier with lust.


    As she rhythmically moved in and out of her, her whole body moved with her. Lips and tongue and fingers and racing hearts all happening simultaneously in a fluid chaotic dance. Hot breath, hotter then Santa Ana winds during the dry summer panted and huffed against kiss bruised lips.


    …Falling up and down


    Shane was close to coming from feel of slick skin sliding along her body and words she didn’t know but still understood being muttered by a sultry husky voice in her ear. Carmen was close too; her eyes were shut and what was once Spanish was becoming only a few words chanted like a mantra “Shane, ***** me, yes, Oh god, ***** me, harder”.


    It was becoming hard to breathe for the both of them. The air around them thick and heavy with the scent of ***** and their bodies just giving into what felt good. Shane’s hand rubbing against the apex of her thighs as she thrust in and out of her lover… and then the proverbial string broke with three words, “I love you”.


    Carmen’s body shook with quakes and tremors that resonated from her core and rippled throughout her entire body. Her nails dug into Shane’s back leaving scratch marks or even scars but neither of them cared. She let out a groan/scream/moan that could only be described as animalistic and though they didn’t think of it at that moment, everyone on that floor probably heard them.

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    1. i love you! that was great!….and hot hot HOT! the song was a great backdrop for the story. wow shane asking carmen’s hand in marriage. thanks for a great sharmen story!

    4. This one should definately get an award! I loved this story! Makes me wish you’d write a sequal (cos this seemed like a stand-alone?). This made my little closet-romantic heart go pitty-pat lol. Seriously, very romantic; sweet beyond words; and as wittybanter said: “hot hot HOT” and the song did fit in here. Very nice. 5 stars for ya. No doubt. So, any way I, or anyone else, could possibly persuade you to do a sequal?? :D

    5. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    6. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    11. Puppy! I’m a sucker for foof, and you’ve combined it with some hot sex. This story would be stronger without the excerpts of lyrics or whatever they are.

    12. Great story, trying to make it hard on the rest of us are you. I’m so glad you’ve joined in. I hope you continue to write and I’ll continue to read. Great story and thank you. Deb

    13. Omg.omg.omg.That’s all I’m gonna say.;) Well I lie. YOU ROCK!!!!!! Love the song, love the story. I just wonder why did Carmen start to doubt if saying yes was the right thing to do? Does she think Shane will not go trough with it? And I must say that was one hot sex scene, totally made me horny:D Update soon PLEASE!!!

    15. So damn good. Shane’s romantic side is HOT! Pleasantly surprised by the proposal. What are Carmens doubts? Are they about herself or does she feel Shane is unable to completely change for this relationship? Con’t Please

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