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I did.
So now I have to get my earrings from u?
Oh, I did not think of that.
Lair.
Maybe. I have to work. We will set up a time later. Get some sleep.
K. Talk to u later. Thank u.
Bette grabs the box carrying it into her office, where gently places it on the sofa. She turns to go to the front but thinks better of it. Instead she stops to look in the box. She lifts up a grey UCLA sweatshirt. She glances around to make sure she is alone before she lifts it to her face. The delicate smell wafts into her nostrils, it is a sweet mixture of honey, soap, and something unfamiliar. This unidentifiable smell weakens her knees forcing her to sit on the sofa next to the box. Somehow the sweatshirt made her safe and loved. She folds it back up and places it back into the box, fighting the incredibly strong urge to put it on. The ringing of the bell helps strengthen her resolve.
“Hello,” she greets the first couple of the day. The day is a typical unremarkable Sunday, people coming in and out just browsing. The only difference in Bette is completely exhausted and very happy about it.
“I really like this one,” the husband says.
“I don’t know honey. You don’t think it is too green for the living room?”
He rolls his eyes behind his wife’s back for Bette’s benefit. “I will paint the damn living room to compliment the painting.” Bette grins at the man’s passion.
The door rings again as a pretty blonde walks in by herself. Bette nods in greeting.
“I don’t know.”
“I will paint any of the other rooms in the house as well.”
“Ok,” she quickly agrees.
The husband narrows his eyes at her and turns to Bette, “I think I just got played.”
Bette laughs, she doesn’t see the blonde’s head snap up at the sound, “I think you did too but I imagine that you both will be very happy with the arrangement. We should talk about shipping.”
“Oh, no. I want to take it today.”
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Loved the story, looking forward to more of your stories. Thanks.
Anyone reading this has to know that they have just read the work of an unbelievably talented writer. i actually don’t think you get how brilliant you are — thank you for this story — you are amazing and i am honoured to read this
These two chapters were an absolute delight to read…just ask the goofy grin that is still plastered to my face!! Thank you for this.
Such a sweet story. I loved it. Thanks for posting it and I hope you post another one soon.
agreewith all of the above wow thankyou for maing me smile the first time today you really are a great writer hope there will be more like these in future dont stop writing:)
That was really sweet&hot too.Why can’t the real thing be like this…the real thing being Tibette. ;)
Well this short story was just too cute! Yes, I’m a sucker for cuteness. You definitely fooled me with the “Let’s do it” comment. Then I felt like a bonehead because I didn’t realize “window shopping” meant just that and wasn’t a euphemism for anything. lol
we have hope with you. Please give us another amazing story…soon. thanks!
Full of art you are, v.
Brilliant, Brilliant, BrilliantI am so captured by this whole concept with the IMs. I love your Bette taking charge and going after it. The way she just knew it was Tina also was fate. Soul mate kind of stuff. Great
I love this, I read the first part of this and couldn’t wait for the second. They’re amazing!!
Loved your story, hope you post another one!
it’s a miracle, i was just thinking about this story today because i miss it…thank you for this delight…can we beg you to continue? i love it…thanks
Thank you – this was beautiful, amazing and so brilliant, you are truly talented and the way you write is so captivating…..You may have guessed this, but I’m A FAN :o))….I truly hope you will continue with these short stories about B&T crazy in love, we need it :o))
Thank you so much for a respite from the pain of season 3!
Wonderful and amazing, love it. Hope you will have another one coming!
That was very cute. Hope U come back with another story soon.
love.
That was a great short story – so often the longer ones are just too intimidating for me to start. Thanks for taking the time to come up with such an innovative idea. Look forward to more.
I went back and read the first chapter again before I read the final one. This story was just beautiful and gives me faith that when two people really love each other they can make a life together. I hope you can get back to your other story at some point soon. See I’m back to bugging you about your writing.
Val,that was just perfect!
Lordy Be! That was just so beautifully written that I could feel all of the emotions that were past from woman to woman. Just like ally said you should be on the writing team for the L word.
Take a bow. That was amazing!
Brilliant, loved it! I’ll look out for your next story too!
Yea! Something happy to read!! Always, you write so well. I do look forward to your stories. Keep those stories coming!
This was one of the most interesting short tibette story I’ve ever read..i love every mintue of it, every minute