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Bette points outside, “Is that your BMW coupe out there?”
“Oh,” he blushes, “I see you point. I will pick it up tomorrow.”
“That is fine as well.” She walks the couple out the door, happy at the unusual Sunday sale. “May I help you?” She asks the blonde who is hovering at the front of the gallery. The blonde just shakes her head. “Ok, if you need anything or have any questions please feel free to ask.” Bette walks back to the desk where she had transferred some of her unfinished paperwork. She picks up her cell phone to text Tina.
I just made a sale! I am so tired. Did you take a nap?
Thirty seconds after she had hit the send button the blonde’s cell phone comes to life.
She jumps fumbling with her purse looking to silence her phone.
I know tomorrow my best friend will be my coffee cup
Cause here we go again
Watchin’ the sun come up
Yeah, I know I should get some sleep
I’m at the beginnin’ of another long week
But I don’t want you to go
No I don’t want you to go
I guess another minute wouldn’t do no harm
Bette walks out from behind the desk. She makes her to the front of the gallery. The blonde locates the offender turning it off. Bette walks closer trying to get the woman to make eye contact with her. The blonde gazes at the sculpture with the greatest of intent. Bette is now standing behind her, getting as close as possible without touching her.
Bette breathes in the same comforting scent from the sweatshirt. She smiles; it is heavenly to be this close to Tina. Her heart beats louder in her chest, the temperature of the gallery raises a few degrees, and Bette fights the urge to take Tina into her arms. “I love that one as well. The way she merged the wood with the glass is almost,” she leans in to whisper in Tina’s ear, “erotic. Don’t you agree, Tina?” She could feel the blonde shiver at the sound of her name. Tina sways backwards, their bodies now a sixteenth of an inch away from each other.
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Loved the story, looking forward to more of your stories. Thanks.
Anyone reading this has to know that they have just read the work of an unbelievably talented writer. i actually don’t think you get how brilliant you are — thank you for this story — you are amazing and i am honoured to read this
These two chapters were an absolute delight to read…just ask the goofy grin that is still plastered to my face!! Thank you for this.
Such a sweet story. I loved it. Thanks for posting it and I hope you post another one soon.
agreewith all of the above wow thankyou for maing me smile the first time today you really are a great writer hope there will be more like these in future dont stop writing:)
That was really sweet&hot too.Why can’t the real thing be like this…the real thing being Tibette. ;)
Well this short story was just too cute! Yes, I’m a sucker for cuteness. You definitely fooled me with the “Let’s do it” comment. Then I felt like a bonehead because I didn’t realize “window shopping” meant just that and wasn’t a euphemism for anything. lol
we have hope with you. Please give us another amazing story…soon. thanks!
Full of art you are, v.
Brilliant, Brilliant, BrilliantI am so captured by this whole concept with the IMs. I love your Bette taking charge and going after it. The way she just knew it was Tina also was fate. Soul mate kind of stuff. Great
I love this, I read the first part of this and couldn’t wait for the second. They’re amazing!!
Loved your story, hope you post another one!
it’s a miracle, i was just thinking about this story today because i miss it…thank you for this delight…can we beg you to continue? i love it…thanks
Thank you – this was beautiful, amazing and so brilliant, you are truly talented and the way you write is so captivating…..You may have guessed this, but I’m A FAN :o))….I truly hope you will continue with these short stories about B&T crazy in love, we need it :o))
Thank you so much for a respite from the pain of season 3!
Wonderful and amazing, love it. Hope you will have another one coming!
That was very cute. Hope U come back with another story soon.
love.
That was a great short story – so often the longer ones are just too intimidating for me to start. Thanks for taking the time to come up with such an innovative idea. Look forward to more.
I went back and read the first chapter again before I read the final one. This story was just beautiful and gives me faith that when two people really love each other they can make a life together. I hope you can get back to your other story at some point soon. See I’m back to bugging you about your writing.
Val,that was just perfect!
Lordy Be! That was just so beautifully written that I could feel all of the emotions that were past from woman to woman. Just like ally said you should be on the writing team for the L word.
Take a bow. That was amazing!
Brilliant, loved it! I’ll look out for your next story too!
Yea! Something happy to read!! Always, you write so well. I do look forward to your stories. Keep those stories coming!
This was one of the most interesting short tibette story I’ve ever read..i love every mintue of it, every minute