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Snapshots – Ch. 5 – Intuition
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They laid in comfortable silence for what seemed like hours until nerves finally got to Carmen.
We can leave, if you wantI know this is kind of corny
Shane smiled. Corny is ok sometimes. This is nice A thought suddenly struck her. but, you know, if you want to leave
Carmen shook her head immediately and Shane laughed, putting her arm around Carmen.
Ok then, settledwe stay here and be cornballs. Carmen shifted so that her head rested against Shanes neck.
They laid like that for a good while, both their eyes closed.
I thought I was going to die if we didnt get some time alone Carmen whispered.
Shane grinned, her eyes still closed, and Carmen could practically feel self-satisfaction vibrate off of her. She smirked.
Dont let it go to your headI just figured if we were going to be corny, may as well go all the way.
Shane assumed innocent eyes. I didnt say anything.
Carmen laughed softly. You didnt have to.
Shane ran her fingers gently along Carmens arm and looked at her earnestly. For the recordI was pretty close to insanity myself. Im glad we did this.
For a moment, Shane inwardly kicked herself for how stupid that sounded, but that was before Carmen leaned in and kissed her gently, as if to say ‘thank you, I know that wasnt easy.’
The kiss ended and moments passed. Shane knew Carmen well enough now to know that their first sexual encounter wasnt going to be in the back of a truck. But a thought entered her head and she began to laugh quietly to herself. Carmen, who had resumed her place on Shanes shoulder, looked up.
What?
Nothing gets past you, does it?
AhI had a good teacher Carmen replied with a wink.
Shane nodded. Your mother.
I knowits kind of scary, but its because she cares.
No, its sweet.
Carmen smiled thoughtfully. She knew before I did.
It was a moment before Shane understood what Carmen was referring to. She knew the woman was good, but that good?
Really?
Carmen smiled and shook her head, as if she couldnt believe it herself.
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I love how you write Carmen and Shane! Its like a love story unfolding….well worth the wait for updates :)
Another great chapter. And I agree with Nikki; it was well worth the wait.
Ahhh I’ve missed you…are these snaps shots , glimpses into jcscantling’s story? i think that cool either way
Great job once again. I can’t wait for the next update.
nah, the only thing JCS’s story and mine share are the pairing and Carmen’s mom’s name (as I couldn’t imagine her called anything else)…I wouldn’t dream of claiming that I was glimpses into someone else’s work. Though I’m a huge fan of “The Story of Us”
PLEASE come back to this story….. I am so glad that we can search by pairs now and that I was ableto fine it.
It’s been forever since you posted. I know you probably won’t post again but if one day for the heck of it you decide to come back and read posts, just know that I love this fic. It’s just so touching and so real. I really wish you would finish it. *sigh*
Love Carmens Mother, so very loving and understanding. To bad all parents can see this in their children.
i wish i could write like you can- worth the wait like always :)
are you gonna continue? don’t leave us hangin.
Loving this story; looking forward to the next post. ^_~
please, please,please.. update this story soon.. i can’t wait for the next part!! heehee.. sharmen love!!! this is sooooo hot hot hot..
so that was REALLY good so far! but it seems you havent updated in a bit… and im getting a bit worried… i really hope you decide to update soon cause this is really good!