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Snapshots – Ch. 5 – Intuition
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Well in a sense, yes. I had this whole period of deep denial.
Thank god thats over. Shane gave her a trademark grin.
Carmen laughed and snuggled into Shanes side. Shane sighed happily. She hadnt had ***** in three weeks now, and it was so odd how she felt so profoundly content just lying there, holding Carmen and staring at the stars. It had been awhile since she had simply enjoyed the pleasure of a womans company, besides that of her friends. She took her time processing what Carmen had said, giving her an opening to continue but being careful not to apply pressure.
I was in a relationship with a boy I went to college with Carmen felt Shanes body unconsciously respond to that statement. She leaned more fully into her and settled an arm across her waist, as if to assure her, before continuing.
He got this job offer in Chicago, and we had been dating for awhile, so he asked me to go and live with him there. At the time, I didnt have a job and I didnt know what I really wanted to do, and it seemed so she paused thoughtfully.
Shane nodded. Safe
Carmen smiled softly. Safe, yeah
Thats totally understandable.
And so I was packing in my room and my mom comes in, offers to help
———– years ago —————–
Mi vida, how in the world do you manage to fit all this in your room?
Utilization of small spacesI learned from the best. Carmen replied with a wink.
Before they had bought the first house, raising four kids in a two-bedroom apartment had been no easy task for her mother. Shed always known that. Isabella laughed and shuffled through pictures and trinkets, sighing softly. Sorting through these possessions was like looking at everything she had noticed about Carmen through the years, spread out before her eyes. Her daughter was a womana woman with such great potential for the future, which was why she couldnt stand to see that future take a detour. So she reached for a box, already sealed and labeled, and began to remove the tape.
Carmen furrowed her brow and sat up. Mom, what are you doing?
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I love how you write Carmen and Shane! Its like a love story unfolding….well worth the wait for updates :)
Another great chapter. And I agree with Nikki; it was well worth the wait.
Ahhh I’ve missed you…are these snaps shots , glimpses into jcscantling’s story? i think that cool either way
Great job once again. I can’t wait for the next update.
nah, the only thing JCS’s story and mine share are the pairing and Carmen’s mom’s name (as I couldn’t imagine her called anything else)…I wouldn’t dream of claiming that I was glimpses into someone else’s work. Though I’m a huge fan of “The Story of Us”
PLEASE come back to this story….. I am so glad that we can search by pairs now and that I was ableto fine it.
It’s been forever since you posted. I know you probably won’t post again but if one day for the heck of it you decide to come back and read posts, just know that I love this fic. It’s just so touching and so real. I really wish you would finish it. *sigh*
Love Carmens Mother, so very loving and understanding. To bad all parents can see this in their children.
i wish i could write like you can- worth the wait like always :)
are you gonna continue? don’t leave us hangin.
Loving this story; looking forward to the next post. ^_~
please, please,please.. update this story soon.. i can’t wait for the next part!! heehee.. sharmen love!!! this is sooooo hot hot hot..
so that was REALLY good so far! but it seems you havent updated in a bit… and im getting a bit worried… i really hope you decide to update soon cause this is really good!