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Something so right – Chapter 101
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“That’s roughly what Bette says “
“Bette held us together yesterday “ Finn said “She was great – the only cool one in the place”
“I know – she’s amazing “
“She even took meeting grandpa in her stride. “
Tina shook her head “That’s the one I was worried about “
“You shouldn’t have been – dad, Willow and I have all told both of them how happy she makes you “
“Yeah but she’s a she “
“He might have spluttered a little bit when he found out but you can do no wrong and I have to say that when she puts her mind to it your woman can be utterly charming “
Tina beamed with pride
“Yes – she can “
“Come on – lets see how she is getting on with the books “ Finn stood up. They left the poly tunnel and made their way
back to the house.
“I miss LA “ Finn admitted “Last night I couldn’t sleep – I could have done so many things in LA “
“So what did you do ?”
“I sorted out some books to take back with me “
“There are things in my room that I would love to have in LA – trophies and pictures and books”
Brother and sister looked at each other
“We could sneak them out “
“It would have to be a secret “
“It would be “
They arrived at the house and went in via the kitchen door. Sarah was missing but evidence of what she had been doing
was scattered around every flat surface – there were pies and cakes almost everywhere – a tray of scones were cooling next to Finn who picked one up and took a bite
“Hell- that’s hot “
“Well its probably just come out of the oven “ Tina said picking one up all the same and taking a bite. It was delicious – full of fruit and melt in the mouth gorgeous.
“Fancy some milk ?” Finn asked
Tina nodded and quickly they were at the kitchen table drinking milk and eating still warm fruit scones
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“Tina might have been daddy’s girl once but she is Bette’s girl now ” I love this line:)great chapter. PPS
Hey AllyE, It is a happy Thursday now that you have posted more of this great story.This chappie was amazing.Tina and Finn sorting through their thoughts and feelings was so loving and tender. They really do look after each other. The cake stealing was precious.Then Tina speaking to Sarah and Bette was interesting especially when Bette stepped in to light the atmosphere and stop Tina and Sarah arguing over Niall’s behavior and actions.Bette and Sarah’s heart-to-heart was brilliant. Given Sarah’s initial reaction to Bette, thsi shown how many she has changed. Sarah sees that Bette is perfect for Tina. She will protect and defend her daugther constantly. Bette will challenge and comfort Tina at every turn.It is great to read such an honest expose of a mother to her daughter’s girlfriend chat. This is all about the acceptance.More please as I feel Niall and Sarah have much to sort out.Ally, as ever you blow me away with your talent.Thank you is so inadequate yet it is heartfelt and truthful,Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
Wondrful Chapter!!! Tina needs to stop sticking up for her dad. I am glad Sarah and Bette are talking and get on so well. Thank you PPS
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Bette is really brave. Normally you just can’t win in such a situation. It doesn’t take much to stand in the cross fire.
“She´s Bette´s girl now” – perfect line. Seems young Gemma might cause a lot of problems – maybe even some for Niall. Thanks for posting.
GREAT chappie Ally. I also hope that Sarah takes Bette’s advice and get a good lawyer, maybe Bette or her mother could recomend someone. I hope that Bette can help open Tina’s eyes to a true picture of her father. Not only was it cowardous how he waited until after he had a child to leave his family, but it is also LOW how he had let Sarah bear the brunt of the children’s rage about their open marriage which he more than willing participated in. As I said before, Sarah deserves credit for at least being honest and open with her children and I hope that it does not take too long for Tina, Finn and Willow to realize this. PPS :o).
Thanks for the update. I’m glad we got to hear Sarah’s perspective of her relationship with her husband. It always seemed unfair to me that Tina placed more of the blame for the open marriage arrangement on her mother. Maybe now she’ll be able to see if more clearly and start building a better relationship with her.
Loved the last line. Excellent update. Thank you.
Thanks for the great update.
Looks as if there is going to be a shift here……with tina and her mom…and Sarah’s role
So Sarah is not really what Niel’s painted of her?…she’s not the “one” who has a bad behavior?…WHICH ONE WHO’S TELLING THE TRUTH?