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Something so right – Chapter 101
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“These are delicious “ Finn said
“Do you miss her cooking ?”
“I do when I remember how good these taste – how much stuff is here ?”
“A morning’s worth “ Tina said “ look at the six pies over there – if Bette sees that she might decide to move in “
“You could bake for her in LA “
“I wish I had the time and as I told Bette when she was scoffing gran’s cake we would both be the size of small barrels if I did “
“Is this a way of mom taking her mind off things ?”
“At least its not scotch “ Tina said dryly.
“Do you think I can get her to prepare me a food parcel ?”
Tina smiled “Well we have the packaging and we have the delivery system set up – no reason we only send off vegetables – pack them right and you could send a cake and some pies home “
“Shane would love those pies “
“So would Bette “
“Think we should pour her a glass of milk and take her a scone ?”
“We should – or we could have some cake – we’ve been working hard “
“We have “
They looked at each other again. It reminded Tina of when they were kids – Finn would look to his big sister before they got up to any mischief.
“Lets not be too piggy “ Tina said
“Why ?”
“Because I want some space for pie”
Finn shook his head in admiration “See – that’s why you had the expensive education and have the high power job “
Tina drained her milk and got up
“I’ll go and see how Bette is “
Finn lent back and stretched his legs “You need to keep your energy up – from my time sharing your apartment you and Bette have some stamina”
Tina went bright red
“I am going off you “
Tina went into the room just off the main sitting room that doubled as the farm office. She was surprised that Sarah was sitting with Bette – there was paper all over the desk and Bette was quietly talking to Sarah.
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“Tina might have been daddy’s girl once but she is Bette’s girl now ” I love this line:)great chapter. PPS
Hey AllyE, It is a happy Thursday now that you have posted more of this great story.This chappie was amazing.Tina and Finn sorting through their thoughts and feelings was so loving and tender. They really do look after each other. The cake stealing was precious.Then Tina speaking to Sarah and Bette was interesting especially when Bette stepped in to light the atmosphere and stop Tina and Sarah arguing over Niall’s behavior and actions.Bette and Sarah’s heart-to-heart was brilliant. Given Sarah’s initial reaction to Bette, thsi shown how many she has changed. Sarah sees that Bette is perfect for Tina. She will protect and defend her daugther constantly. Bette will challenge and comfort Tina at every turn.It is great to read such an honest expose of a mother to her daughter’s girlfriend chat. This is all about the acceptance.More please as I feel Niall and Sarah have much to sort out.Ally, as ever you blow me away with your talent.Thank you is so inadequate yet it is heartfelt and truthful,Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
Wondrful Chapter!!! Tina needs to stop sticking up for her dad. I am glad Sarah and Bette are talking and get on so well. Thank you PPS
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Bette is really brave. Normally you just can’t win in such a situation. It doesn’t take much to stand in the cross fire.
“She´s Bette´s girl now” – perfect line. Seems young Gemma might cause a lot of problems – maybe even some for Niall. Thanks for posting.
GREAT chappie Ally. I also hope that Sarah takes Bette’s advice and get a good lawyer, maybe Bette or her mother could recomend someone. I hope that Bette can help open Tina’s eyes to a true picture of her father. Not only was it cowardous how he waited until after he had a child to leave his family, but it is also LOW how he had let Sarah bear the brunt of the children’s rage about their open marriage which he more than willing participated in. As I said before, Sarah deserves credit for at least being honest and open with her children and I hope that it does not take too long for Tina, Finn and Willow to realize this. PPS :o).
Thanks for the update. I’m glad we got to hear Sarah’s perspective of her relationship with her husband. It always seemed unfair to me that Tina placed more of the blame for the open marriage arrangement on her mother. Maybe now she’ll be able to see if more clearly and start building a better relationship with her.
Loved the last line. Excellent update. Thank you.
Thanks for the great update.
Looks as if there is going to be a shift here……with tina and her mom…and Sarah’s role
So Sarah is not really what Niel’s painted of her?…she’s not the “one” who has a bad behavior?…WHICH ONE WHO’S TELLING THE TRUTH?