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Something so right – Chapter 104
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“Hang on – you are like your mom and therefore you are not going to be able to keep me ?” Bette said trying to make sense of their conversation.
“If I am as demanding and hard to please as her “
Bette kissed her brow.
“You are no more demanding and hard to please as I am “ Bette said “You and I are strong and happy – I’m going nowhere Ti “
“Will you do something for me ?”
“You know that I will “
“Just keep hold of me “
“I promise “
Bette rolled backwards and pulled Tina so she was cuddled up to her.
Tina yawned and fell silent – Bette stroked her hair as she listened to her breathing becoming more shallow. After ten minutes of silence Tina was finally asleep. Bette glanced at the alarm clock – it was 1am and the alarm was due to sound at 6:30am for them to start their day.
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Bette and Tina shared the same gym and as Bette knew that Tina would be there after work she changed her plans so she could be there at roughly the same time. Bette arrived at 5:30pm and started a session on the treadmill while she looked around for her partner. Tina was on an exercise bike taking part in a spin class. Bette set off at a comfortable pace while she watched Tina from afar. After 10 minutes the class came to a halt and all the participants apart from the blonde headed out of the gym. They were all sweating heavily after what had clearly been a strenuous class
“That’s the last time I take an advanced spinning class “ Bette heard one girl tell her friend giving Bette some insight into what Tina had gone through. Advanced spinning classes tended to be 60 minutes of sheer hell. Bette watched as Tina took a long drink from her water bottle and walked across to the treadmills.
“Tina “ Bette said. The blonde looked across and smiled
“Hey there”
“Hey – how was the spin class ?”
“Painful “ Tina admitted getting onto the newly vacated treadmill next to Bette’s
“Did you do the whole class ?”
“I’ve been in here since 3:30 “
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Amazing as always.Thank you.
Great update! I don’t think Tina should apoligize, to me she did nothing wrong. Niall deserve whatever they said to him.
i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps
Oh that is just perfect. Bette is doing everything in her power to give Tina room to figure this out on her own but also be there to help her around all the corners. Nicely done Ally.
im with amanda and rbabe”i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps “
Maybe Bette will get more sleep tonight. LOL
I love your story progression, but I am not with the “Sarah beat down”. Having been a Daddy’s girl, I know that you can over idolize you dad to the detriment of your mom. I agree with Amanda, Niall knew what he was getting into when he and Sarah made their arrangement and agreement about their marriage. As I have said before, I hate the things he said about Sarah when she was involved with David and how he let the children just pile on Sarah. Yes he is her father, but it certainly was NOT easy for Sarah doing all of the heavy lifting in referancde to raising their children. Tina needs to let things calm down, but sending them a welcome to the family basket is going over board and can be seen as offensive to her mother. I don’t think that Tina needs to serve as a go between for Nialls with her sister and brother. It’s time for Nialls to do some heavy lifting. He made his bed, now he can take responsibility and reach out to his children to make amends. Thanlks and PPS :o).
Boy, ally, you’re getting everybody riled up. Niall can’t expect his original family to be accepting of his new arrangement. He might hope for their understanding but can’t expect it. He should have gotten a divorce and then started his new family. Is Sarah upset b/c she didn’t dump Niall first? That she was the dumpee and not the dumper?
Ally, you are my queen of intimate conversation… you nail it every time! Thank you. SK/C
Bette is so good for Tina in this story.
At least Tina come to her senses [Even though i still think her dad is a JERK] That no matter what, her father is always gonna be her FATHER! Thanks Ally..
Tina’s confession about feeling secure is for me the best love declaration I have read for a long time. Queen of intimate converstioan it is!
I wish my girlfriend would hold me like that again. I love this story PPS.
Wow, Tina’s father’s words really shook her to her foundation. A parent has the power to do that. She is struggling with still seeing her father as she did as a child and seeing him as a fellow adult. The tables are turned and he needs her support now. It seems that with Bette’s help she will be able to do that for him.
Wonderful update. Just brilliant. Thank you.