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Something so right – chapter 15
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“Not very like Melvin “
“Would you ever introduce the two of us ?”
“Only if I wanted to give myself grief and oddly enough I am not into that – no – not because I am ashamed of you – I am so proud of you Tina. But I am ashamed of him “
“What about Kit ?”
Bette smiled “ I was thinking about that – yeah – I would love for you to meet my sister “
“Do you look like Kit ?”
“No – we have different mothers – what about your family – do I get to meet the Woodstock
couple ?”
“It can be arranged “
“Do you go there often ?”
“Couple of times a year “
“Roughly how many times I see Melvin- he can best be summed up by Alice’s description of him. Alice once called him a cantankerous old goat – even for Alice it was a good one “
“Has he always been like that ?”
Bette sighed “ I have memories of him being fun but after my mom left him some light went out and it never came back on – it changed him and it changed me “
Tina kissed Bette “ Its okay – you’re not alone anymore “
Bette pulled Tina even closer “I know that – thank you “
Tina decided to risk a question that she had never dare raise
“What about your mom – is she ? “
Bette rested her head against Tina’s
“I don’t honestly know what happened to her – she could be dead for all I know or care “
“Sorry Bette “
“No – its okay – I don’t mind talking about it to you – thank you “
“You keep thanking me “
“I have a lot to be thankful of “
Bette looked at Tina – her long blonde hair was still damp with the sweat they had generated during sex, her soft pale skin looked good against Bette’s darker tone. Bette could just feel her heart swell with pride that they were together – how had it happened ? How had Bette got so lucky ? When they had been flying across one of the air hostesses had been giving Bette the eye – Bette could see the subtle flirting . So many times she had taken random offers like that – but on the plane she had only been looking at the woman sitting beside her . And that had been before she had discovered how great Tina was as a lover . Bette knew that her days as the biggest and baddest womaniser in LA were well and truly over – and she was delighted because of who had ended her reign
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I can see why Bette hasnt told Tina she loved her. That would be a big step for Bette. When you tell someone that you are in Love with then. you surrender part of yourself and Bette has never gave that much of herself to anyone. thanks
WOW!!!! Thank you Ally. I just hope that there is more to come for this story. Thanks PPVS
Absolutely loved it. Love how Tina is just learning what to do in bed, how they are slowly opening up to each other, and this one has so many things I can’t to read about. I hope we see them say I love you, see Tina meet Kit, see them both happy showing everyone at Liquid, and see Bette meeting Tina’s hippie rents..and finding out her real name. This story is really special.
This story is incredible. It is so touching and real. ok, perhaps not the hawaii part, but the words, feelings, and actions. wow. One of the things that makes me so very happy is that story is sooooo far from being over, even at this point, I know I have many post ahead. But really, what is Bette waiting for….just say it!!!
This is exactly how I see these two before the last 3 of their 7 year relationship began to downward spiral. I think things began to sour when Bette took the job at the CAC and spent so much time there. This story gives me a prolonged look at the two of them in happier times. Thanks Ally!
That was wonderful. Love the lovin & the talkin.
say that this is not the end, let see some drama between these 2, and some making up thereafter!!!
Wonderfull AllyE … thank you ever so much as per usual you are the best. And I look forward as always to your next chapter
& h ago, what do u mean implying “Flashdance’ was cheesy. I re-watched it carefully about a month ago & back then still!!! JB brought ‘intelligence’ to the role. I loved it maybe Better this time cuz I appreciared the variety of issues it ‘raised’ for it’s time. Just had to say that: give credit where credit is due…and no dispespect to you cuz as a writer u used it becuz it’s a good line.cheers.
That was hot and awesome, love it. They are wonderful together and happy for them. Please post more, thanks!
This chapter was wonderful and beautiful. I hope it isn’t the end, but the beginning of something more maybe.
Hello ally, that isn’t the end right… it just felt like such a finality… please say this isn’t over… that was just so beautiful… beyond anything, beyond the physical act of love… you can so tell that these two women were made for each other… they fill in the missing spaces with each others lives… they can read each other without saying a single word… this was magical and poetic… just so beautiful… Thank you so much. Sincerely, JC
nice, hot, tender, any ‘I love u’s yet’…pps
Perfect first… for both. Continue to adore this story, Ally. Kudos to you for the diet/exercise success! If the diet is what has produced these NC-17’s from you then I wish you all the willpower in the world… who knew dieting could be so sexy??
Congrats on losing the weight! To me it was never the numbers — it was fitting into the old clothes. You wrote Tina’s first time very well. And “yay” to Bette for being so supportive. Love Helena’s tips. The conversation at the end was great. I have to wonder if Tina will end up getting any work done on this trip… Thanks for a new chapter so soon!
very nicely done. love how bette starts to open up to tina! we gonna meet the hippie couple? of course we need to take out time on vacation!lol
aw, that’s awesome. I love it. Thank you :)
Bette said some very nice things, things she’s probably never said before. But not THE THREE WORDS. Ah well, the vacation’s young.