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Something so right – chapter 15
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Tina raised her glass at Bette and sipped the bubbly liquid.
“To Tina Kennard – the sexiest and sassiest woman I know. Thank you for being so easy to get to know, thank you for not seeing the myth – for seeing who I am underneath the well sculptured mask as you called it earlier. You have made dating fun for me – you don’t take my image seriously and you don’t let me take it seriously either . I guess its obvious how your life is now different because of us – but so is mine. You have become my best friend as well as so many other things – things that I thought I couldn’t feel and could never have. I have never felt this way and its scares me senseless and I wanted to run but I made myself stay and I am glad that I did because – because you make me really happy Tina . I want don’t want this to be a fling either – I want to be your woman Tina. To have “ sole property of Tina Kennard “ tattooed on my ass. I need you in my life babe and I hope I make you as happy as you make me – to you honey – thank you for being so fantastic “
Bette clinked glasses with Tina and they drank the champagne
“Thank you “ Tina said kissing Bette as she reached for the tray “ I know that you have been scared “
Tina lifted the tray between them and Bette took a sandwich
“I am really hungry “
“Me too – that may be unromantic but it is reassuring “
They ate as much as they could both take and had another glass of champagne. Finally Tina moved the tray and got back into bed and snuggled up against Bette. For several minutes neither spoke
“Tina “
“That’s me ”
“Was sex what you expected it to be ?”
Tina shook her head “ No – I never thought it would be as wild and wondrous “
“I hope that I didn’t harm you – I got so carried away “
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I can see why Bette hasnt told Tina she loved her. That would be a big step for Bette. When you tell someone that you are in Love with then. you surrender part of yourself and Bette has never gave that much of herself to anyone. thanks
WOW!!!! Thank you Ally. I just hope that there is more to come for this story. Thanks PPVS
Absolutely loved it. Love how Tina is just learning what to do in bed, how they are slowly opening up to each other, and this one has so many things I can’t to read about. I hope we see them say I love you, see Tina meet Kit, see them both happy showing everyone at Liquid, and see Bette meeting Tina’s hippie rents..and finding out her real name. This story is really special.
This story is incredible. It is so touching and real. ok, perhaps not the hawaii part, but the words, feelings, and actions. wow. One of the things that makes me so very happy is that story is sooooo far from being over, even at this point, I know I have many post ahead. But really, what is Bette waiting for….just say it!!!
This is exactly how I see these two before the last 3 of their 7 year relationship began to downward spiral. I think things began to sour when Bette took the job at the CAC and spent so much time there. This story gives me a prolonged look at the two of them in happier times. Thanks Ally!
That was wonderful. Love the lovin & the talkin.
say that this is not the end, let see some drama between these 2, and some making up thereafter!!!
Wonderfull AllyE … thank you ever so much as per usual you are the best. And I look forward as always to your next chapter
& h ago, what do u mean implying “Flashdance’ was cheesy. I re-watched it carefully about a month ago & back then still!!! JB brought ‘intelligence’ to the role. I loved it maybe Better this time cuz I appreciared the variety of issues it ‘raised’ for it’s time. Just had to say that: give credit where credit is due…and no dispespect to you cuz as a writer u used it becuz it’s a good line.cheers.
That was hot and awesome, love it. They are wonderful together and happy for them. Please post more, thanks!
This chapter was wonderful and beautiful. I hope it isn’t the end, but the beginning of something more maybe.
Hello ally, that isn’t the end right… it just felt like such a finality… please say this isn’t over… that was just so beautiful… beyond anything, beyond the physical act of love… you can so tell that these two women were made for each other… they fill in the missing spaces with each others lives… they can read each other without saying a single word… this was magical and poetic… just so beautiful… Thank you so much. Sincerely, JC
nice, hot, tender, any ‘I love u’s yet’…pps
Perfect first… for both. Continue to adore this story, Ally. Kudos to you for the diet/exercise success! If the diet is what has produced these NC-17’s from you then I wish you all the willpower in the world… who knew dieting could be so sexy??
Congrats on losing the weight! To me it was never the numbers — it was fitting into the old clothes. You wrote Tina’s first time very well. And “yay” to Bette for being so supportive. Love Helena’s tips. The conversation at the end was great. I have to wonder if Tina will end up getting any work done on this trip… Thanks for a new chapter so soon!
very nicely done. love how bette starts to open up to tina! we gonna meet the hippie couple? of course we need to take out time on vacation!lol
aw, that’s awesome. I love it. Thank you :)
Bette said some very nice things, things she’s probably never said before. But not THE THREE WORDS. Ah well, the vacation’s young.