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Something so right – chapter 15
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“Bette – you were amazingly tender “
“I hoped that I was “
“You were”
Bette stroked Tina’s shoulder and arm “ This is just great – just lying here enjoying each other “
“Its odd because I never thought about what it would be like after we had had sex – just the before and during but you are right – this is great “
“I feel so close to you “
“So you should given that we are naked and our legs are wrapped together and I am holding you “
“That’s not what I mean- you can be close to someone that you are physically close to – that’s what its always been for me. Lying in the dark after some random encounter feeling utterly alone “
“That’s not how it is with us “
“Even before we became lovers I have felt close to you – we’d lie on the sofa after some cheesy movie had finished “
“By cheesy you mean Flash dance ?” Tina replied
“Well yes now you mention it – we’d be lying on the sofa talking and I would try and remember the last time I felt that close to another human being “
“And the answer ?”
“I don’t think I have been as close as I am emotionally to you “
“You have Alice and Shane who obviously love you to bits “
Bette sighed “ I feel the same way about them “
“Do they know ?”
“If by that you mean – have I told them – then the answer is no I haven’t “
“Why ?”
“Does Helena know how you feel about her ?”
“I sent her an email last night – I was pretty emotional I guess and I said “ thank you for all your support – I hope you know how much I love you “
“I walked into that “
“You did rather – but as I told you at the start – my folks are hippies – they encouraged us to be very open about our feelings and that we should be proud of who we are “
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I can see why Bette hasnt told Tina she loved her. That would be a big step for Bette. When you tell someone that you are in Love with then. you surrender part of yourself and Bette has never gave that much of herself to anyone. thanks
WOW!!!! Thank you Ally. I just hope that there is more to come for this story. Thanks PPVS
Absolutely loved it. Love how Tina is just learning what to do in bed, how they are slowly opening up to each other, and this one has so many things I can’t to read about. I hope we see them say I love you, see Tina meet Kit, see them both happy showing everyone at Liquid, and see Bette meeting Tina’s hippie rents..and finding out her real name. This story is really special.
This story is incredible. It is so touching and real. ok, perhaps not the hawaii part, but the words, feelings, and actions. wow. One of the things that makes me so very happy is that story is sooooo far from being over, even at this point, I know I have many post ahead. But really, what is Bette waiting for….just say it!!!
This is exactly how I see these two before the last 3 of their 7 year relationship began to downward spiral. I think things began to sour when Bette took the job at the CAC and spent so much time there. This story gives me a prolonged look at the two of them in happier times. Thanks Ally!
That was wonderful. Love the lovin & the talkin.
say that this is not the end, let see some drama between these 2, and some making up thereafter!!!
Wonderfull AllyE … thank you ever so much as per usual you are the best. And I look forward as always to your next chapter
& h ago, what do u mean implying “Flashdance’ was cheesy. I re-watched it carefully about a month ago & back then still!!! JB brought ‘intelligence’ to the role. I loved it maybe Better this time cuz I appreciared the variety of issues it ‘raised’ for it’s time. Just had to say that: give credit where credit is due…and no dispespect to you cuz as a writer u used it becuz it’s a good line.cheers.
That was hot and awesome, love it. They are wonderful together and happy for them. Please post more, thanks!
This chapter was wonderful and beautiful. I hope it isn’t the end, but the beginning of something more maybe.
Hello ally, that isn’t the end right… it just felt like such a finality… please say this isn’t over… that was just so beautiful… beyond anything, beyond the physical act of love… you can so tell that these two women were made for each other… they fill in the missing spaces with each others lives… they can read each other without saying a single word… this was magical and poetic… just so beautiful… Thank you so much. Sincerely, JC
nice, hot, tender, any ‘I love u’s yet’…pps
Perfect first… for both. Continue to adore this story, Ally. Kudos to you for the diet/exercise success! If the diet is what has produced these NC-17’s from you then I wish you all the willpower in the world… who knew dieting could be so sexy??
Congrats on losing the weight! To me it was never the numbers — it was fitting into the old clothes. You wrote Tina’s first time very well. And “yay” to Bette for being so supportive. Love Helena’s tips. The conversation at the end was great. I have to wonder if Tina will end up getting any work done on this trip… Thanks for a new chapter so soon!
very nicely done. love how bette starts to open up to tina! we gonna meet the hippie couple? of course we need to take out time on vacation!lol
aw, that’s awesome. I love it. Thank you :)
Bette said some very nice things, things she’s probably never said before. But not THE THREE WORDS. Ah well, the vacation’s young.