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    Something so right – chapter 21

    Story written on February 13, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68620
    Author Notes:

    “Other women had been more beautiful than Tina but none had unravelled her like the blonde who she loved so much. Maybe that was it Bette reflected – maybe it was the whole package – the fact that they laughed so much- the fact that Tina was so smart and loving – and maybe it was her smile and her laugh – it was certainly how sexy she was – and that fact that Tina knew she was sexy.”



     

    “Oh my poor hard done to Bette Porter”

    “I know – its terrible “

     

    Tina hadn’t mentioned to Bette that she had also woke up with an need for her lover. Tina wanted to feel Bette inside of her before long. From her own experience Tina knew that a run made her horny for a good fuck – with luck Bette was the same.

    “Its 10:20 – what do you want to do for the rest of the evening “

     

    “Take all your clothes off and I will show you “ Tina replied

     

    “Really ?”

     

    Bette’s clit twitched at the suggestion – she smiled at Tina

     

    “Yeah – come on “

     

    “But I am all sweaty and stinky “

     

    “We can deal with that “ Tina replied

     

    “You are all clean and fresh “

    “We can deal with that as well “

     

    Bette quickly pulled off her thin running vest, bra, shorts and pants – she stood and looked at Tina

     

    “What did you have in mind ?”

     

    Tina smiled “Our own personal hot tub “

     

    “Naked ?”

     

    “Why not ?”

     

    Bette shrugged “ It is private isn’t it ?”

    “It is – come on “

     

    Tina dropped her towel and walked out of the doors that lead down the three steps to their personal tub. The tub was about six foot across – Tina bent down and turned it on. In a few seconds the water started to bubble. Bette was standing at the doorway from their room – Tina was naked and showed no signs of being shy about her body. Tina tested the water and looked up at Bette

     

    “Come on Bette “

     

    Bette hesitated watching Tina as she sat on the side of the tub and slowly slipped her body into the water. When the water was covering everything but her head she looked back at Bette

     

    “Its nice honey – come on “

     

    Bette stood unable to move until Tina pulled herself up and the water fell from her body – seeing the water dropping from her breasts made Bette’s clit twitch again. She quickly hurried down the steps and lowered herself into the tub

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    1. Hello AllyE, Thank you for all your wonderful posts today. This one was magnificent. Completely blown away by your talent and way with words. Bette and Tina could have stepped into ice water and made it a hot tub as their intimacy heated up the moment. Loved your references to Season 1, Episode 2 shower scene. Cute, too fucking cute. There was almost a tragedy as Tina ran away but what sweetness followed as Bette explained the situation and stated her thoughts on their connection. Give Tina her grandmother’s ring was a commitment to their future together. Can’t wait ot see what happens when they return to the real world and the gang sees the meaning of true love. More please. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    2. Ally, I haven’t left a comment for a while (sorry about that) but I have read every chapter. This is such an amazing story and as usual you Rock! Thanks for the post and waiting for the next! =)

    4. Hey AllyE , well first things first Soooo gald that your back !! missed you !!. And what a way to announce that you are back and the best in the FANfic writing with two of the most exceptional stories going. Give us more and as usual I cannot wait for next posting Big thanks your loyal fan CG

    10. Well, these two are certainly not disfunctional/toxic as so many have called them in this story. I love the way you write them Ally, can’t wait for your next update.

    11. Let’s see we have sexy, hot steamy sex filled with love. Then we get the soulmates sweetness and happiness. And you top it off with a promise of a future to come. You are AWESOME!

    15. hi ally, i’m sorry to hear that you’ve been going true a rough periode i hope you start feeling better soon! But i’m also very glad to see that you are back with your great story’s!! i’ve missed your fantastic writing! really so glad to see your back with us

    16. AWWWWWEEEEEEEE how freakin’ incredible this chapter is!! bette i really letting her walls down for one miss kennard! as long as they talk they will be fine…please let them stay on vacation forever, hehe… :)

    17. Woah, the end just knocked me off my feet. I can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction. I love that Bette is letting herself go emotionally in ways she never has before..and that she is already planning things like having James take over more work, working out, and spending time with Tina. Its really beautiful.

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