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    Something so right – chapter 21

    Story written on February 13, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68620
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    “Other women had been more beautiful than Tina but none had unravelled her like the blonde who she loved so much. Maybe that was it Bette reflected – maybe it was the whole package – the fact that they laughed so much- the fact that Tina was so smart and loving – and maybe it was her smile and her laugh – it was certainly how sexy she was – and that fact that Tina knew she was sexy.”



     

    “Am I ?” Bette was happy to let Tina lead them wherever she was taking this conversation.

     

    “You do things to me that I didn’t believe was possible “

    “Such as ?”

     

    “The way you stimulate my G-spot – the way you can take me to one orgasm then to another and another. I love that about you “

    “I love that you can come more than once “

     

    Bette could feel her wetness beginning to significantly increase. Tina moved closer to Bette – close enough for their nipples to briefly touch under the water. Bette could see how Tina’s face was flushed – and it wasn’t with the gradual increase in temperature of the hot tub water.

     

    “I love being inside of you – it feels so good when I touch your walls and I can feel them starting to shake because you are having an orgasm – I love that feeling Bette”

     

    “You are pretty good at it -after a few days that’s amazing “

    “I want to be the best possible lover that you could have “

    “You are “

     

    “I love how you taste – its such a high to know that you let me do things that you won’t let other women do “

     

    Bette put one hand on Tina’s back and pulled her closer – their breasts touched and both women felt the same jolt of desire at the same time

     

     

    “As far as I am concerned there are not restrictions – how could I not let the woman I love taste me ?”

     

    “I never knew sex could be so hot and tender at the same time “

     

    “I love touching you “

     

    “So do I “

     

    Tina’s hand that had been resting on Bette’s waist dropped and pressed against Bette’s pubic hairs

     

    “I love the moment when I first come into contact with your clit – I love how it smells and how it tastes and how it feels when its swollen because of our need for each other “

     

    Bette was losing this game- Tina was driving her wild just with words. Just by the tone of her voice and by the syllables she was uttering Tina was arousing her. Tina could see what she was doing to Bette – she was also unravelling herself. But she wanted to be this weak and at the mercy of Bette – how could she have known that she would love lesbian sex as much as she did ? How could she have forecast that she would fall so deeply for this enigmatic and perfect woman ?

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    1. Hello AllyE, Thank you for all your wonderful posts today. This one was magnificent. Completely blown away by your talent and way with words. Bette and Tina could have stepped into ice water and made it a hot tub as their intimacy heated up the moment. Loved your references to Season 1, Episode 2 shower scene. Cute, too fucking cute. There was almost a tragedy as Tina ran away but what sweetness followed as Bette explained the situation and stated her thoughts on their connection. Give Tina her grandmother’s ring was a commitment to their future together. Can’t wait ot see what happens when they return to the real world and the gang sees the meaning of true love. More please. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    2. Ally, I haven’t left a comment for a while (sorry about that) but I have read every chapter. This is such an amazing story and as usual you Rock! Thanks for the post and waiting for the next! =)

    4. Hey AllyE , well first things first Soooo gald that your back !! missed you !!. And what a way to announce that you are back and the best in the FANfic writing with two of the most exceptional stories going. Give us more and as usual I cannot wait for next posting Big thanks your loyal fan CG

    10. Well, these two are certainly not disfunctional/toxic as so many have called them in this story. I love the way you write them Ally, can’t wait for your next update.

    11. Let’s see we have sexy, hot steamy sex filled with love. Then we get the soulmates sweetness and happiness. And you top it off with a promise of a future to come. You are AWESOME!

    15. hi ally, i’m sorry to hear that you’ve been going true a rough periode i hope you start feeling better soon! But i’m also very glad to see that you are back with your great story’s!! i’ve missed your fantastic writing! really so glad to see your back with us

    16. AWWWWWEEEEEEEE how freakin’ incredible this chapter is!! bette i really letting her walls down for one miss kennard! as long as they talk they will be fine…please let them stay on vacation forever, hehe… :)

    17. Woah, the end just knocked me off my feet. I can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction. I love that Bette is letting herself go emotionally in ways she never has before..and that she is already planning things like having James take over more work, working out, and spending time with Tina. Its really beautiful.

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