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Something so right – chapter 21
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When Bette entered their room Tina was lying on the second double bed – she was wearing one of the hotel’s white towelling robes. Bette saw by the look on her face that she was utterly miserable. Bette sat down on the bed and waited until Tina looked at her. When she did Bette saw how hurt the blonde was.
“When we get back to LA I think I will have Shane or Alice tell you that flying off the handle and assuming the worst are traits that I tend to reserve as strictly my own – really Tina I cannot have you being as self destructive as me. “
Tina looked puzzled
“If you had stayed in the hot tub for another couple of minutes I would have got my breath back enough for me to tell you that when I was out running that I thought about you and I being soul mates – and that I also told myself that if I said it to you that you would freak out. Tina – babe “
Bette rested her hand on Tina’s face
“Tina – babe – we are soul mates – totally and utterly made for one another. I was meant to
love you like you were meant to love me. it’s the only explanation that I have for the fact that we are so much on each others wave length. I love you and I know that you love me – Tina – this is destiny “
Tina’s tears trickled down her face
“I thought “
“I know you did – we are still getting to know each other but so far this is just wonderful. I love you – this is just such a fantastic relationship. We can make each other very happy. I know that I can make you so content Tina. “
The blonde sat up and carefully placed her hands on Bette’s shoulders and slowly moved downwards until she could take hold of her hands
“You just knock me off my feet “ Tina whispered “I have never felt this way and I love it and its exciting but its also really frightening. “
“I know – sometimes I am so high about what is happening between us and other times when I think about not being with you I just get so scared “
“What a pair we are “ Tina smiled
“I know – supposed to be two intelligent career orientated women and in fact we are a couple of love struck teenagers “
Tina moved closer and kissed Bette on the lips – the kiss lingered for several minutes until Bette ended the kiss and took several deep breathes
“What is it ?” Tina asked
Bette looked at the ring she always wore on the ring finger of her right hand. It held huge sentimental value to her – it had been her grandmothers and it was one of the few things that she had been given by her mother. Taking the ring from her finger she placed it in Tina’s palm
“Keep this for me -it’s a symbol of my love for you. One day we are going to be a partnership in everyway possible “
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Hello AllyE, Thank you for all your wonderful posts today. This one was magnificent. Completely blown away by your talent and way with words. Bette and Tina could have stepped into ice water and made it a hot tub as their intimacy heated up the moment. Loved your references to Season 1, Episode 2 shower scene. Cute, too fucking cute. There was almost a tragedy as Tina ran away but what sweetness followed as Bette explained the situation and stated her thoughts on their connection. Give Tina her grandmother’s ring was a commitment to their future together. Can’t wait ot see what happens when they return to the real world and the gang sees the meaning of true love. More please. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Ally, I haven’t left a comment for a while (sorry about that) but I have read every chapter. This is such an amazing story and as usual you Rock! Thanks for the post and waiting for the next! =)
just lovely..
Hey AllyE , well first things first Soooo gald that your back !! missed you !!. And what a way to announce that you are back and the best in the FANfic writing with two of the most exceptional stories going. Give us more and as usual I cannot wait for next posting Big thanks your loyal fan CG
I just love these two in this story. Great chapter! Post again soon, please!
Nice touch with the ending and Tina keeping the ring for Bette…nice update…
Wow, SO beautiful I really love the direction that this story is taking, thank you so much for the up date.
Ally this was so good.I even got a bit emotional.Sometimes taking a risk can go either way and it looks like its a positive risk.
Lovely, Ally. The ring thing – so sweet
Well, these two are certainly not disfunctional/toxic as so many have called them in this story. I love the way you write them Ally, can’t wait for your next update.
Let’s see we have sexy, hot steamy sex filled with love. Then we get the soulmates sweetness and happiness. And you top it off with a promise of a future to come. You are AWESOME!
Thanks Ally. That was just beautiful–how loving and tender they are with each other. I love the way Bette is sharing herself.
well that was sweet. thx
What an incredibly beautiful update!
hi ally, i’m sorry to hear that you’ve been going true a rough periode i hope you start feeling better soon! But i’m also very glad to see that you are back with your great story’s!! i’ve missed your fantastic writing! really so glad to see your back with us
AWWWWWEEEEEEEE how freakin’ incredible this chapter is!! bette i really letting her walls down for one miss kennard! as long as they talk they will be fine…please let them stay on vacation forever, hehe… :)
Woah, the end just knocked me off my feet. I can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction. I love that Bette is letting herself go emotionally in ways she never has before..and that she is already planning things like having James take over more work, working out, and spending time with Tina. Its really beautiful.
That was hot and awesome!