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    Something so right – chapter 21

    Story written on February 13, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68620
    Author Notes:

    “Other women had been more beautiful than Tina but none had unravelled her like the blonde who she loved so much. Maybe that was it Bette reflected – maybe it was the whole package – the fact that they laughed so much- the fact that Tina was so smart and loving – and maybe it was her smile and her laugh – it was certainly how sexy she was – and that fact that Tina knew she was sexy.”



    “Hey “

     

    Bette opened her eyes and looked in sheer wonder at Tina

     

    “Hello beautiful “

    “Hello beautiful yourself “

     

    “Wow “

    Tina kissed Bette again

     

    “Its just amazing how sex is with you “

     

    “I know “

     

    Tina closed her eyes again “I’m tired all of a sudden “

    “You want to go to bed ?”

    “No – do you ?”

    “Hell no – I only joined you in the hot tub so I could relax after my run “

     

    “And are you relaxed ?”

     

    “Very “

    “That’s good to know “

     

    Bette kissed Tina softly and let out a sigh

     

    “I love you so much “

     

    “I love you as well – are you okay Bette ?”

    “Blown away by you -by the way that you have just taken control of my heart. I love being with you and God I sure as hell love making out with you “

     

    With great care Tina removed her fingers from inside her lover and stroked Bette’s face. Bette licked Tina’s fingers – tasting herself.

     

    “Sex has never been this good “ Tina admitted “Its just amazing “

     

    Bette pulled Tina close and kissed her hair. Tina looked up at Bette and they began kissing again. The urgency wasn’t as all consuming but they still wanted more intimacy with their lover. When the kiss reluctantly ended Bette lent back against the side of the hot tub and held Tina close.

     

    “I know that you can think that I am just saying this but you are the best lover I have ever had.”

     

    Tina raised an eyebrow

     

    “I know -I know that it sounds like a line – its not. The reason that you are the best lover was that was the first time we have fucked – really just fucked each other hard. Until now its been lovemaking and I really don’t think I have done much of that. Tina – my heart is in this relationship and in our bed when we are making out. That’s the difference for me – that’s why I am just so in awe of what we are getting into “

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    1. Hello AllyE, Thank you for all your wonderful posts today. This one was magnificent. Completely blown away by your talent and way with words. Bette and Tina could have stepped into ice water and made it a hot tub as their intimacy heated up the moment. Loved your references to Season 1, Episode 2 shower scene. Cute, too fucking cute. There was almost a tragedy as Tina ran away but what sweetness followed as Bette explained the situation and stated her thoughts on their connection. Give Tina her grandmother’s ring was a commitment to their future together. Can’t wait ot see what happens when they return to the real world and the gang sees the meaning of true love. More please. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    2. Ally, I haven’t left a comment for a while (sorry about that) but I have read every chapter. This is such an amazing story and as usual you Rock! Thanks for the post and waiting for the next! =)

    4. Hey AllyE , well first things first Soooo gald that your back !! missed you !!. And what a way to announce that you are back and the best in the FANfic writing with two of the most exceptional stories going. Give us more and as usual I cannot wait for next posting Big thanks your loyal fan CG

    10. Well, these two are certainly not disfunctional/toxic as so many have called them in this story. I love the way you write them Ally, can’t wait for your next update.

    11. Let’s see we have sexy, hot steamy sex filled with love. Then we get the soulmates sweetness and happiness. And you top it off with a promise of a future to come. You are AWESOME!

    15. hi ally, i’m sorry to hear that you’ve been going true a rough periode i hope you start feeling better soon! But i’m also very glad to see that you are back with your great story’s!! i’ve missed your fantastic writing! really so glad to see your back with us

    16. AWWWWWEEEEEEEE how freakin’ incredible this chapter is!! bette i really letting her walls down for one miss kennard! as long as they talk they will be fine…please let them stay on vacation forever, hehe… :)

    17. Woah, the end just knocked me off my feet. I can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction. I love that Bette is letting herself go emotionally in ways she never has before..and that she is already planning things like having James take over more work, working out, and spending time with Tina. Its really beautiful.

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