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    Something so right – chapter 21

    Story written on February 13, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68620
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    “Other women had been more beautiful than Tina but none had unravelled her like the blonde who she loved so much. Maybe that was it Bette reflected – maybe it was the whole package – the fact that they laughed so much- the fact that Tina was so smart and loving – and maybe it was her smile and her laugh – it was certainly how sexy she was – and that fact that Tina knew she was sexy.”



     

    Tina stroked some of Bette’s damp hair back and toyed idly with it.

     

    “I have been in love and I have had sexually very loving relationships. But – they don’t compare either Bette. I am not going to paint a picture of disastrous hetero relationships – I was happy in a lot of them – I instigated most of them. But – really they are not on the same level as this. Its not because its early days – its because its you and I. And we have a connection that is so spiritual and so real and so good. Please don’t be scared by what I am going to say to you Bette okay and I do understand if you laugh at this comment – blame my hippy upbringing. But Bette – we connect. I really believe that you are my soul mate “

     

    Bette stared at Tina – soul mate — wow. What Bette was astonished by was the fact that while she had been running she had the same thought – that Tina was the other “ side “ to her – that Tina completed Bette. That Tina was her soul mate. She had told herself very firmly that she had to keep that thought to herself -that after only a few days as lovers she could tell Tina that unless she wanted to scare her off. And now Tina was saying it -they were naked in a hot tub in Hawaii after only being lovers for a few days and they were both admitting that they were soul mates.

     

    Tina misjudged Bette’s silence – she had scared Bette off – oh fuck Tina cursed – me and my fucking big mouth. Tina moved to get out of the hot tub. Bette was so lost in her own thoughts that it took her a few minutes to realise what Tina was probably thinking

     

    “No – Tina – stop “

     

    But Tina was out of the tub and heading back to their room. Bette’s reaction 99 times out of 100 was to go haring after Tina and leap in with some ill thought out comment. But Bette held herself back – this was so new for her as well as for Tina. She lay back in the hot-tub and counted very slowly to 300.

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    1. Hello AllyE, Thank you for all your wonderful posts today. This one was magnificent. Completely blown away by your talent and way with words. Bette and Tina could have stepped into ice water and made it a hot tub as their intimacy heated up the moment. Loved your references to Season 1, Episode 2 shower scene. Cute, too fucking cute. There was almost a tragedy as Tina ran away but what sweetness followed as Bette explained the situation and stated her thoughts on their connection. Give Tina her grandmother’s ring was a commitment to their future together. Can’t wait ot see what happens when they return to the real world and the gang sees the meaning of true love. More please. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    2. Ally, I haven’t left a comment for a while (sorry about that) but I have read every chapter. This is such an amazing story and as usual you Rock! Thanks for the post and waiting for the next! =)

    4. Hey AllyE , well first things first Soooo gald that your back !! missed you !!. And what a way to announce that you are back and the best in the FANfic writing with two of the most exceptional stories going. Give us more and as usual I cannot wait for next posting Big thanks your loyal fan CG

    10. Well, these two are certainly not disfunctional/toxic as so many have called them in this story. I love the way you write them Ally, can’t wait for your next update.

    11. Let’s see we have sexy, hot steamy sex filled with love. Then we get the soulmates sweetness and happiness. And you top it off with a promise of a future to come. You are AWESOME!

    15. hi ally, i’m sorry to hear that you’ve been going true a rough periode i hope you start feeling better soon! But i’m also very glad to see that you are back with your great story’s!! i’ve missed your fantastic writing! really so glad to see your back with us

    16. AWWWWWEEEEEEEE how freakin’ incredible this chapter is!! bette i really letting her walls down for one miss kennard! as long as they talk they will be fine…please let them stay on vacation forever, hehe… :)

    17. Woah, the end just knocked me off my feet. I can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction. I love that Bette is letting herself go emotionally in ways she never has before..and that she is already planning things like having James take over more work, working out, and spending time with Tina. Its really beautiful.

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