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Something so right -chapter 25
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“Yes “ Bette whispered in Tina’s ear “ That is fantastic “
Tina easily slipped at second finger inside her lover. Her instinct so far was to find and press hard against Bette’s G-spot but this wasn’t the time or place for Bette to lose control in the way that would happen if Tina brought her G-spot into their love making. Tina concentrated on moving harder and faster in and out of Bette while also rubbing her clit
“I’m close “ Bette managed to say after several minutes of relatively silent love making.
Tina pushed her hand forward so she was even deeper inside the woman she loved. Bette began to let out the softest of cries. Tina kissed her silent as she felt Bette’s body beginning to shake – she increased the speed at which she was stimulating Bette’s clit as she felt her body give one massive shudder and she came. Tina held onto Bette as she came gradually back down from the height that she had been on.
For several minutes Bette just slumped against Tina with the blonde holding Bette tight.
“You okay ?” Tina whispered
Bette lifted her head up and looked at Tina
“I love you so much “ she said catching her breath
“I love you “
Tina picked her shower gel from the cubicle door and poured a generous quantity on her hands and started to wash Bette’s body. Bette took her shower gel and began to mirror what Tina was doing. Bette was too emotional for words – this woman was more than she had ever known that another human being could be. She was loving and also she was unpredictable – for Bette who always played safe this was a new experience to have some one so prepared to just follow her heart and her instincts. From the Go-karting as one of their first dates to Hawaii to the hot tub sex and now this. Every day Tina told Bette that she loved her but she also demonstrated by being so free and such a unique person.
As Bette turned off the shower and wrapped Tina in her towel they looked at each other
“I am not sure that us having the same gym is a good idea “
“I think it’s a genius idea “ Tina replied
“Not if you are going to inflict such torture on me “
“There you go again accusing me of torturing you “
Bette pulled Tina close and kissed her
“As far as I am concerned I think I would let you do anything that you wanted “
Tina opened the shower door and stepped out and turned
“I might just hold you to that Porter – now get out of there and take me to dinner – because you owe me something and I want to claim it as soon as possible “
Bette’s goofy grin told Tina that Bette was more than willing to make repayment in full
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Loved it AllyE, they are so very sweet together and what they do to each other, oh boy. PPS
Bette was going to get her payback on Tina. she turn the rable on Bette. It hell to wait for your payback tho. They are so cute together. thanks
Loved the scene with Helena and Bette!! And i really shouldn’t have read this at work! Awwww Hell!! Great job!
Brilliant thanks
Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.
Great story ally…This is a great story…
so looking foward to the liquid scene. hope u post soon and that the next chapter will be longer because i can’t get enough of your writing.
Another absolutely perfect chapter Ally.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too sweet…can’t wait to see the reaction of the hussies at Liquid…TK IS TOO HOT!!!
Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!
Wow! I shouldn’t have read this chapter at work. I enjoyed this Ally!
so so so beautiful! I love this story so much. I cant wait for the next chap. Thanks Ally!
HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
That was very hot.Shower sex is always good.I hope going to Liquid is a good idea.PPS.
Please post again very soon :)
Great chapter! I’m glad to see that Helena is starting to realize that Bette is a human being and that she loves Tina. Thanks!
Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC
Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS
well that was good to read at work. way to many sick people. thx
ahhhhhh…..very nice Ally…sweet and tender and sooo sensuous and can’t wait for the club scene ;-)
Workout within a workout sounds good to me! Really liking helena in this story she is watching out for tina.. bette is winning helena over slowly! :)
That was hot and funny!