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Something so right -chapter 25
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“But when you are out together ?”
“When we went into a gay bar in Hawaii she was so getting checked out “
“How did she react ?”
“She was cool – said that they could look all they wanted but she was spoken for and that she only had eyes for me “
“You believe her ?”
Tina nodded “Yes – Bette’s love for me isn’t in question. She’s really in love with me and I am totally in love with her. We want to be together all of the time “
“So what it boils down to is you think that when the two of you go somewhere like Liquid its going to be impossible for the two of you to fight off the inevitable attention ?”
“Alice wants us to go there on Friday “
“And you would rather put lighted matches under your toe nails “
“Basically “
Helena lent back and considered the matter
“You have never been scared of a situation where you are under threat – you love the rush and the battle to come out on top “
“I know “
“So what is so different ?”
Tina lent back and ran her hand through her hair
“I’ve never dated someone whose hotter than I am “
Helena considered Tina’s comment and nodded
“So – you are very sure of yourself “
“But that was in heterosexual situations – this is new and even though I am doing great in some areas -this is new and Bette is hot “
“She’s no hotter than you — I’d say that the two of you are on an equal level. Tina -have you considered that you are going to get attention. Last year when we were in Miami in that gay bar – you were getting a lot of admirers “
“And I told them all I was straight “
“Even though you were 90% sure that you were not “
“Even though I knew I wasn’t “
“My point is Tina that you had a lot of women checking you out -that’s going to be something to get used to in the same way that you have to get used to women wanting what you have. If you are so sure of Bette then its not an issue. The first few times it will be weird for you and for Bette but gradually things will get easier “
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Loved it AllyE, they are so very sweet together and what they do to each other, oh boy. PPS
Bette was going to get her payback on Tina. she turn the rable on Bette. It hell to wait for your payback tho. They are so cute together. thanks
Loved the scene with Helena and Bette!! And i really shouldn’t have read this at work! Awwww Hell!! Great job!
Brilliant thanks
Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.
Great story ally…This is a great story…
so looking foward to the liquid scene. hope u post soon and that the next chapter will be longer because i can’t get enough of your writing.
Another absolutely perfect chapter Ally.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too sweet…can’t wait to see the reaction of the hussies at Liquid…TK IS TOO HOT!!!
Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!
Wow! I shouldn’t have read this chapter at work. I enjoyed this Ally!
so so so beautiful! I love this story so much. I cant wait for the next chap. Thanks Ally!
HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
That was very hot.Shower sex is always good.I hope going to Liquid is a good idea.PPS.
Please post again very soon :)
Great chapter! I’m glad to see that Helena is starting to realize that Bette is a human being and that she loves Tina. Thanks!
Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC
Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS
well that was good to read at work. way to many sick people. thx
ahhhhhh…..very nice Ally…sweet and tender and sooo sensuous and can’t wait for the club scene ;-)
Workout within a workout sounds good to me! Really liking helena in this story she is watching out for tina.. bette is winning helena over slowly! :)
That was hot and funny!