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    Something so right – chapter 28

    Story written on March 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette pulls herself together with a little help from her friends and a cheesy love song

    I’ve been waiting for a girl like you
    To come into my life
    I’ve been waiting for a girl like you
    And a love that will survive
    I’ve been waiting for someone new
    To make me feel alive
    Yeah, waiting for a girl like you
    To come into my life

    I’ve been waiting, waiting for you, ooh
    Ooh, I’ve been waiting
    I’ve been waiting, yeah
    I’ve been waiting for a girl like you
    I’ve been waiting
    Wont you come into my life?
    My life?

    ( foreigner – waiting for a girl like you )  

     

    As the music ended Bette looked down at her lover and smiled

     

     

    “Thank you for coming into my life “ she whispered

     

     

    “Thank you for coming into mine “ Tina replied kissing Bette as passionately as she could. They kissed as the next track started – Bette holding Tina as tightly as she could – she had found her soul mate and she was truly overwhelmed by how good it made her feel.

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    Bette slipped outside of the club – she was sweating and needed a few minutes to collect her thoughts – she had also seen Alice coming outside for a cigarette and she wanted to catch up with her oldest friend.

     

    “Want one ? “ Alice asked offering her a cigarette

     

    “No thanks – just need to clear my head “

     

    “You okay ?”

     

    “Its just hot in there “

     

    “Yeah and you two are the ones pushing the heat up “

     

    Bette sat on a low wall beside Alice who was lighting one cigarette from the butt of the first

     

    “No idea what you mean “

     

    “Yeah – you are the hottest thing in that club and you both know it “

     

    “You and Dana are doing some tonsil hockey as well “

     

     

    “Yeah – we’re messing around – you and Tina are the real deal “

     

    “Do you think we are ?”

     

    “Hell yes – how does it feel to have met your match ?”

     

     

    Bette let out a sigh “ It feels wonderful and it feels amazing and also – Al – it feels terrifying “

     

     

    “Why terrifying ?”

     

     

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    1. Great chapter, Bette should know by know that what she has with Tina can be once in a life time opportunity, the love that will change her life forever. Thanks Ally you are brilliant I can’t wait for your next story.

    2. So not surprised you’d spend your idle elevator time with dirty images going through your mind. I’d expect nothing less of you and would probably do the same in that situation.

    6. Bette should pay attention, this is the love of her life and vice versa. they are so right for each other and so lovely together. Great one AllyE and hope you feel better quickly. PPS

    7. Terrific update Ally! So…stuck in an elevator…well now you’ll be able to empathise with poor Bette and Tina on Sunday (snicker, snicker)

    8. I love Alice’s speech to Bette – I love all the support you are writing from their friends. Awesome awesome awesome as usual. Were you really stuck in an elevator??

    9. Oh my… now I want to be stuck in an elevator… how screwed up is that?? Great update Ally. As usual, can’t wait for your next post. Maybe you can fit in L&P somewhere in between too *wink*

    11. Aww, I loved this one. The Alice/Bette friendship was really cute. Glad she is being so supportive of B/T because that always endears me to a character. Glad that Bette is getting her bearings more. Hmm, a new B/T story? I’m there. Although, I seriously check for this one religiously so I can’t wait for more of it.

    12. Great chapter AllyE as per usual!! I love this story oh well actually I love all your stories, but this one I dont know has Bette in a slightly different light and makes it very interesting.Anyways please post soon

    13. Hey Ally. Great chapter. Stuck in an elevator huh? I wouldn’t mind being stuck in one if Tina was there with me. *wink. At least you had the girls in your head. Can’t wait for the next chapter and for your new story.

    16. Good old Foreigner! I LOVE that song – I think that was one of the final clues that I REALLY liked women a lot ;o) I really am enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing!

    17. oh yeah, GO ALICE GO! I am glad that Alice is there for Bette and talks sense to her. I am still chuckling my head off over Helena’s cheesy love song dedication.

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