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    Something so right – chapter 28

    “What if I am not good enough for her – she’s amazing “

     

     

    “So are you “

     

     

    “I’ve never done this before “

     

    “What – been in love ?”

     

     

    Bette nodded “What if I can’t do it “

     

     

    “I am sure that the two of you are doing it a lot “

     

    “No sex – that’s amazing with her – what if I can’t look after her “

     

    “She doesn’t look like she needs looking after – but maybe that’s the attraction “

     

    “What do you mean ?”

     

     

    “All the women you pick up in here have been so freaking grateful that you have lowered yourself to seduce them – they were never going to stand up to you or be your equal. All those women did was increase your self loathing “

     

     

    Bette nodded

     

     

    “And suddenly that one walks into your life- and she won’t sleep with you and that gets at you but she’s not just one of these women who want you at any cost. She’s her own woman – she’s not going to take whatever crumb you offer her. Maybe all along what you have needed is a woman not to need you. She wants you – that’s clear but she can function without you and if you mess up you’d have to see her being chased by most of the dykes in LA. Bette – you and Tina are doing fine “

     

     

    “I’m scared I’ll go back to my old ways “

     

     

    “The more you fear you will – the more likely it will become a self fulfilling prophecy. Bette – let go of the past – take your future into your own hands – and trust me – your future is that blonde “

     

    “You think ?”

     

     

    Alice grinned “ I have seen the picture of you in the graduation gown – so I know that you are an intelligent woman – but there are times when I wonder about you “

     

    “Thanks Al “

     

    “That blonde is your future Porter – apart from the fact that the two of you look fucking fantastic together -well – there’s a chemistry – you love her don’t you ?“

    Comments

    1. Great chapter, Bette should know by know that what she has with Tina can be once in a life time opportunity, the love that will change her life forever. Thanks Ally you are brilliant I can’t wait for your next story.

    2. So not surprised you’d spend your idle elevator time with dirty images going through your mind. I’d expect nothing less of you and would probably do the same in that situation.

    3. Bette should pay attention, this is the love of her life and vice versa. they are so right for each other and so lovely together. Great one AllyE and hope you feel better quickly. PPS

    4. Terrific update Ally! So…stuck in an elevator…well now you’ll be able to empathise with poor Bette and Tina on Sunday (snicker, snicker)

    5. I love Alice’s speech to Bette – I love all the support you are writing from their friends. Awesome awesome awesome as usual. Were you really stuck in an elevator??

    6. Oh my… now I want to be stuck in an elevator… how screwed up is that?? Great update Ally. As usual, can’t wait for your next post. Maybe you can fit in L&P somewhere in between too *wink*

    7. Aww, I loved this one. The Alice/Bette friendship was really cute. Glad she is being so supportive of B/T because that always endears me to a character. Glad that Bette is getting her bearings more. Hmm, a new B/T story? I’m there. Although, I seriously check for this one religiously so I can’t wait for more of it.

    8. Great chapter AllyE as per usual!! I love this story oh well actually I love all your stories, but this one I dont know has Bette in a slightly different light and makes it very interesting.Anyways please post soon

    9. Hey Ally. Great chapter. Stuck in an elevator huh? I wouldn’t mind being stuck in one if Tina was there with me. *wink. At least you had the girls in your head. Can’t wait for the next chapter and for your new story.

    10. Good old Foreigner! I LOVE that song – I think that was one of the final clues that I REALLY liked women a lot ;o) I really am enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing!

    11. oh yeah, GO ALICE GO! I am glad that Alice is there for Bette and talks sense to her. I am still chuckling my head off over Helena’s cheesy love song dedication.

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