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Something so right – chapter 56
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Bette didn’t speak. Tina continued
“We were in his bedroom – he was so different to the guy I had recently dumped – Mark. David was very diffident – he hadn’t much experience but he was so sweet and sensitive. He kept asking me if I was sure I wanted him to enter me “ Tina swallowed
“I thought he was scared but it wasn’t fear – he was genuinely giving me the chance to say no “
Bette took Tina’s hand and stroked her palm. Tina looked at Bette’s long fingers and smiled – so different to what she remembered to be David’s – so meaty in comparison.
“When we had sex he was really gentle — and he was good – took time to get me aroused. We fucked a lot and he had so much stamina “
Bette didn’t like hearing about Tina fucking a man but she did understand why the blonde was talking like this. It was good that she was getting this out in the open – the pressure of not uttering these memories was eating away at her and that was causing the mood swings and snappy moments. All the same she was feeling sick at the image that she was conjuring up of a man enjoying what she now regarded as her own private pleasure.
Tina let a long sigh and brought Bette’s hand to her lips so she could kiss it.
“Then I see this other image and I know that its one that I have invented – its of him and his tanned and hot body and its fucking my mother. Bette – how the fuck could she do this to me ? I can just see him moving inside of her and I know its so fucking sick but I can’t help it “
“And this has been playing on a loop in your head ?”
Tina nodded “ I know I am being unreasonable and stupid and I need to let it go but – its there in my head “
“You need to replace it with another image – you need to get another image in your head that isn’t your mother being screwed by the hired hand “
Tina looked at Bette “I thought you would think I was silly “
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nice update. tina finally opened up to bette, huge step for her! even better that bette was there for her! :)PPS
just greatttt
I’m glad they got to talk. All that was eating away at Tina. Not good. Hopefully they can move forward and have a great Christmas. Thanks for posting!
That was a nice, effective strategy to get the ugly images off Tina’s head. Replace them with good, loving and memorable ones. I enjoyed their bed talk, tickle war and laughter. Many thanks for this post, Ally! :>
You write loving dialogue so well – it’s sweet and real and just the right amount of mushy. Also sexy as hell.
Smell-o-vision? Bette’s going to have to make up some scratch n’ sniff cards like John Waters did for “Polyester”.
lovely resolution…like the snow New Year idea.
Its time these two get to relax and enjoy themselves, its been pretty tough for both since they came from Tina’s home. And boy, the images in Tinas head are pretty nasty to deal with.
thanks Ally, I can always depend on you to cheer me up
Two amazing stories from one amazing writer!!! Ally will will always be here to read what you write but you also need to do what your heart tells you. Thank you!!!! I am glad you are going to keep these going.
Such a wonderful chapter Ally, I liked Bette’s openness and honesty, they are a great couple, and what they have is so rare, that level of understanding and love is so precious. Thanks Ally, post soon. Love
Awesome chapter and glad B&T are ok now!
Great chapter, as always!!! I love this story and I am glad that you are continuing it. Tina needs to learn to have a little more faith in Bette, but in the end, she did tell Bette her troubles. Bette was great in how supportive and helpful she was to Tina. Can’t wait to read about them in front of the fireplace :P PPVS