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Something so right – chapter 56
“No – I can’t image how it makes you feel but you do have to replace it with something else “
“What do you suggest ?”
Bette kissed Tina on the lips “ Tell me a favourite memory about us “
Tina laughed “ How many do you want ? – our first 69 – the very first time we made love, the first time in my bed “
“Any of those will do “
“I really thought you would either get mad with me for thinking about fucking a man or you would tell me to grow up or something “
“If it’s a problem you have – then it’s a problem we have. I am determined to learn by my own past mistakes and one of the things that I have been guilty of is not being interested or bothered by my girlfriends problems – that’s not going to happen here. This is something that is affecting your mood, its affecting your work and we haven’t made love since it happened “
Tina laughed “I know and that is bothering me “
Bette stood up “ You want to eat or do this ?”
“I think I might need to get some protein inside me “
“Come on then – then we are having an early night “
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It took until 8:10 before they had eaten and finished chatting. Finally Bette lead Tina to their bedroom and they undressed. Bette put on a white mans shirt and Tina followed Bette’s lead also by plumping for a white man’s shirt. Bette got onto the bed and Tina sat between her legs.
“Just relax “
“Okay “
Bette pulled her back so she was lying in Bette’s arms
“Close your eyes “
Tina obeyed
“Tell me what you are thinking about “
“How soft you feel “
“As soft as David ?”
“Softer “
“Did he touch you like this ?”
Bette popped a button on Tina’s shirt and slipped a hand inside so she was touching her breast
“Yes “
“Does he touch your mother in the same way ?”
“Yes “
“Who do you prefer touching you ?”
“You touching me “
“Why ?”
“Because you are so full of love for me . You touch me in ways that no one else ever has “
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nice update. tina finally opened up to bette, huge step for her! even better that bette was there for her! :)PPS
just greatttt
I’m glad they got to talk. All that was eating away at Tina. Not good. Hopefully they can move forward and have a great Christmas. Thanks for posting!
That was a nice, effective strategy to get the ugly images off Tina’s head. Replace them with good, loving and memorable ones. I enjoyed their bed talk, tickle war and laughter. Many thanks for this post, Ally! :>
You write loving dialogue so well – it’s sweet and real and just the right amount of mushy. Also sexy as hell.
Smell-o-vision? Bette’s going to have to make up some scratch n’ sniff cards like John Waters did for “Polyester”.
lovely resolution…like the snow New Year idea.
Its time these two get to relax and enjoy themselves, its been pretty tough for both since they came from Tina’s home. And boy, the images in Tinas head are pretty nasty to deal with.
thanks Ally, I can always depend on you to cheer me up
Two amazing stories from one amazing writer!!! Ally will will always be here to read what you write but you also need to do what your heart tells you. Thank you!!!! I am glad you are going to keep these going.
Such a wonderful chapter Ally, I liked Bette’s openness and honesty, they are a great couple, and what they have is so rare, that level of understanding and love is so precious. Thanks Ally, post soon. Love
Awesome chapter and glad B&T are ok now!
Great chapter, as always!!! I love this story and I am glad that you are continuing it. Tina needs to learn to have a little more faith in Bette, but in the end, she did tell Bette her troubles. Bette was great in how supportive and helpful she was to Tina. Can’t wait to read about them in front of the fireplace :P PPVS