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Something so right – chapter 58
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“And that’s a problem ? “ Bette replied
Tina picked the phone up
“Hello “
Bette saw Tina’s face fall – Tina looked at Bette
“Where are you dad ?”
Bette sighed – her immediate reaction was – shit – so much for a long night of hot sex but in a few seconds she pushed aside her selfishness and realised that this call was the first contact from Tina’s family in over a month
“Have you left her ? “
Tina swallowed- Bette took hold of Tina’s hand – the blonde looked at Bette and sighed
“Well – you don’t leave me much option do you ? Yes I am still upset dad – I have every right to be”
Tina put the phone down and walked away. Bette stood and watched Tina – she paced around the room for a few minutes in silence. Finally she came back to Bette who had been watching her anxiously
“I need a hug “
Bette pulled her close and held her for several seconds
“How is that ?”
“Wonderful “
“You want to tell me ?”
Tina looked up at Bette
“He’s in LA “
“Why ?”
“To see me “
“Obviously – so he’s on his way over ?”
“He is about to get into a cab – he should be here in 40 minutes “
Bette pulled Tina tighter
“Its going to be okay “
“I don’t want to see him”
“You love him to pieces “
“I do – he hasn’t left her “
“And you don’t want that either – whatever else has happened – they are your parents – they love you regardless of their faults and odd conduct “
“I don’t know why he’s here “
“He doesn’t need a reason – is he booked into a hotel or do we pull out the sofa bed ?”
“He didn’t say – sorry – I should have asked “
Bette kissed Tina
“Its okay – don’t beat yourself up. We are going to deal with this – together “
“I can’t deal with this on my own “
“You don’t have to – that’s why you and I are now a couple – so that we don’t have to face problems on our own. Its good that we have someone that we trust to bounce ideas off “
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I was so happy when I saw this tory posted, Ally!!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Thank you
wow maybe tina will at least talk to her mom. if anything they need to talk to willow poor kid is getting crap for her sister that doesn’t even live there! :)PPS
Very nice chapter Ally, and their family situation is really complicated that you don’t know what is the right thing any more. thank you and please post soon. Love
Thanks for updating this story Ally…it’s a really good one too. We can never have too many Ally updates.
I like Bette and Tina’s commitment but it’s no fun for kids having parents who fyck around especially when they’re still living 2gether. The world has not caught up with ‘free love’ as yet. Especially not teenagers who can be very cruel. I feel for Willow and understand Tina’s contempt [almost] for her parents. PPS.
I love the way Bette and Tina support each other. It’s beautiful.
Utterly glad that you posted and plan on continuing with this story. Its lovely, there so much love even between chaos. And you’re such a fantastic writer.
catching up. thx
That was great!
Nice update Ally…Love his reaction about having kids…
L5 ? Not going – i am far too shy !!
Your pages seem to last longer than the average fanfic story. They are to be savored. They contain multiple layers and a rich story text. Are you going to L5?
I’m so glad you decided to continue this story. It’s great! Thanks for sharing your talent.
i was so glad to see an update to this story! thanks, ally!
They really should not start a family until Tina grows up. She’s all about her gay pride-now that she’s gay, but she has an endless hissy about her parents’ unconventional marriage that suits them just fine. Kind of hypocritical on her part I’d say.
So glad that Tina Dad came over to see her. Tina and Bette are happy,and his reaction to children was priceless. Tina standing by her gun for Christmas was being her own woman. thanks
Seriously Ally, I wasn’t sure which story this was until Niall called. Don’t keep us waiting so long.
Thank you for bringing it back!!!!! I love this story. Actually, I love all of your stories, and how you form Bette and Tina’s personality in each. You are a phenominal writer, thank you. PPVS
It’s so nice to see an update on this story. It’s one of my favorites. I’m glad Tina is talking to her dad. Hopefully a conversation with her mom isn’t too far off. It’s good that Bette and Tina are taking a holiday to themselves. Thanks for posting!
bringing up parents is a challenge
Yeah, uh, who was it just had a birthday?
No funnyone – thats old age sweetie !
Blast you and your confounded logic!
i am still younger than you funnyone
thanks for that great update ally.a house with a pool and a garden. well i think i know a nice place :)and another holiday for them WOW that will make all my dreams come true