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    Something so right – chapter 58

    Story written on November 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Christmas approaches

    “Go to her “ she advised

    He moved forward a few steps before looking back at Bette

    “Tina babe “ Bette said “Your father is here “

    Tina turned – tears streaming down her face. Quickly Niall ran to her and they embraced for several minutes. Bette smiled – she needed to give them some privacy

    “I’ll go and make some coffee “ Bette said knowing that neither would notice her at that moment. Still – it would give them some time. She walked into the kitchen and strolled around taking a record time to brew a pot of coffee. When she emerged Tina and Niall were still embracing. Niall looked at Bette and smiled

    “You are taking good care of my little girl “

    “I am “

    Tina looked at Bette and smiled

    “She is fantastic dad – -I am very happy with her “

    “Good – that means a lot to all of us that you have found the right person to be with Tina”

    “I have – she’s one in a billion is my girlfriend “

    Bette smirked “ James would tell you that my ego is big enough without yet more flattery”

    “And he is right- but praise where its due honey “

    Bette shrugged

    “I want to talk to both of you about all of this – which is why I am here “

    “Lets sit down “ Bette suggested “ I’ll get the coffee “

    When she returned with three mugs and milk, sugar and coffee – Tina was sitting on the sofa and her father in one of the chairs. The two lovers eyes met – Bette could read Tina – she nodded and sat next to her on the sofa. Tina reached out and squeezed Bette’s hand

    “You okay ?” Bette asked quietly

    “Sure “

    Niall looked at Tina sitting with her hand in Bette’s – they did look right. At first he had found it odd that Tina was so at ease being so close to a woman but he had seen that Bette just utterly worshipped his daughter so he had realised he had no right to feel uncomfortable with his daughter’s relationship

    “You leaving so abruptly was a shock for all of us – one I don’t know we have recovered from”

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    2. wow maybe tina will at least talk to her mom. if anything they need to talk to willow poor kid is getting crap for her sister that doesn’t even live there! :)PPS

    3. Very nice chapter Ally, and their family situation is really complicated that you don’t know what is the right thing any more. thank you and please post soon. Love

    5. I like Bette and Tina’s commitment but it’s no fun for kids having parents who fyck around especially when they’re still living 2gether. The world has not caught up with ‘free love’ as yet. Especially not teenagers who can be very cruel. I feel for Willow and understand Tina’s contempt [almost] for her parents. PPS.

    7. Utterly glad that you posted and plan on continuing with this story. Its lovely, there so much love even between chaos. And you’re such a fantastic writer.

    12. Your pages seem to last longer than the average fanfic story. They are to be savored. They contain multiple layers and a rich story text. Are you going to L5?

    15. They really should not start a family until Tina grows up. She’s all about her gay pride-now that she’s gay, but she has an endless hissy about her parents’ unconventional marriage that suits them just fine. Kind of hypocritical on her part I’d say.

    16. So glad that Tina Dad came over to see her. Tina and Bette are happy,and his reaction to children was priceless. Tina standing by her gun for Christmas was being her own woman. thanks

    18. Thank you for bringing it back!!!!! I love this story. Actually, I love all of your stories, and how you form Bette and Tina’s personality in each. You are a phenominal writer, thank you. PPVS

    19. It’s so nice to see an update on this story. It’s one of my favorites. I’m glad Tina is talking to her dad. Hopefully a conversation with her mom isn’t too far off. It’s good that Bette and Tina are taking a holiday to themselves. Thanks for posting!

    25. thanks for that great update ally.a house with a pool and a garden. well i think i know a nice place :)and another holiday for them WOW that will make all my dreams come true

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