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Something so right – chapter 58
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“Hello Niall “
“Bette – its good to see you “
They embraced. Bette looked at him – he looked the same as he had when he had shown up unexpectedly and Tina had outed herself to him.
“How are things with you ?” Bette asked glancing with some concern at the two huge bags he had with him – she hoped that didn’t mean he was going to become a long term house guest.
Bette didn’t want to share the apartment with anyone but Tina – and she knew that Tina felt the same way
“I didn’t want this to turn into a feud so I decided to come over for a few days”
“I imagine that its been hard on everyone “
“It was a shock “
“Come on up “
Bette picked one of the bags up
“Don’t worry Bette – its full of Christmas presents “
Bette smiled
“We were just discussing that we might start house hunting “
“Is it going well ?”
Bette walked to the lift and pressed a button
“Its going very well — I love your daughter very much Niall “
“That was obvious – you have never had to convince me of your feelings for one another”
Bette nodded “Sarah was harder to win over “
“She takes too much notice of her old friends and ignored what was in front of her own eyes – the evidence that you and Tina are very much in love – that’s obvious to anyone who saw the two of you “
“Thanks “
They stepped into the lift and Niall looked at her
“How has she been ?”
“Obsessing about David and her mother. Its not been easy but I have been there for her every step of the way and she is getting her head around it all “
“That shows me how much the two of you are into one another. Tina has always been one who bottles things up – that she is opening up to you is good “
“it’s a tough situation for everyone “ Bette said diplomatically
Niall nodded and was silent for the rest of the lift journey. They came out together and Bette opened the front door. Tina was standing looking out of the window. Bette took both bags and put them in a corner. Niall stood and looked at his daughter for a few seconds before looking back at Bette
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I was so happy when I saw this tory posted, Ally!!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Thank you
wow maybe tina will at least talk to her mom. if anything they need to talk to willow poor kid is getting crap for her sister that doesn’t even live there! :)PPS
Very nice chapter Ally, and their family situation is really complicated that you don’t know what is the right thing any more. thank you and please post soon. Love
Thanks for updating this story Ally…it’s a really good one too. We can never have too many Ally updates.
I like Bette and Tina’s commitment but it’s no fun for kids having parents who fyck around especially when they’re still living 2gether. The world has not caught up with ‘free love’ as yet. Especially not teenagers who can be very cruel. I feel for Willow and understand Tina’s contempt [almost] for her parents. PPS.
I love the way Bette and Tina support each other. It’s beautiful.
Utterly glad that you posted and plan on continuing with this story. Its lovely, there so much love even between chaos. And you’re such a fantastic writer.
catching up. thx
That was great!
Nice update Ally…Love his reaction about having kids…
L5 ? Not going – i am far too shy !!
Your pages seem to last longer than the average fanfic story. They are to be savored. They contain multiple layers and a rich story text. Are you going to L5?
I’m so glad you decided to continue this story. It’s great! Thanks for sharing your talent.
i was so glad to see an update to this story! thanks, ally!
They really should not start a family until Tina grows up. She’s all about her gay pride-now that she’s gay, but she has an endless hissy about her parents’ unconventional marriage that suits them just fine. Kind of hypocritical on her part I’d say.
So glad that Tina Dad came over to see her. Tina and Bette are happy,and his reaction to children was priceless. Tina standing by her gun for Christmas was being her own woman. thanks
Seriously Ally, I wasn’t sure which story this was until Niall called. Don’t keep us waiting so long.
Thank you for bringing it back!!!!! I love this story. Actually, I love all of your stories, and how you form Bette and Tina’s personality in each. You are a phenominal writer, thank you. PPVS
It’s so nice to see an update on this story. It’s one of my favorites. I’m glad Tina is talking to her dad. Hopefully a conversation with her mom isn’t too far off. It’s good that Bette and Tina are taking a holiday to themselves. Thanks for posting!
bringing up parents is a challenge
Yeah, uh, who was it just had a birthday?
No funnyone – thats old age sweetie !
Blast you and your confounded logic!
i am still younger than you funnyone
thanks for that great update ally.a house with a pool and a garden. well i think i know a nice place :)and another holiday for them WOW that will make all my dreams come true