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Something so right – chapter 58
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Bette kissed Tina again
“We are a team “
Tina smiled at Bette
“Fuck I love you more every day “
“That’s okay then – do we have any non organic food in the kitchen ?”
Tina laughed “ You think of everything “
Bette was glad to see that her simple joke had made Tina smile. She hoped that Niall Kennard was in LA to make some sort of peace with Tina but the worst thing that could happen was Tina would just become more entrenched in her opinions and she would get upset. They did talk about her parents situation but no where near as much as they had done when they got home from Virginia. Bette stroked Tina’s blonde hair
“I promise – its going to be fine – you are a daddy’s girl “
Tina nodded “I know “
Bette hugged Tina and they stayed wrapped together for over five minutes. Finally Tina pulled away and looked at Bette
“I love you “
“I love you more “
Tina smiled “ I think I will take a shower and get changed – is that okay ?”
“Of course – I will check the kitchen for anything that we might get into trouble with the food police for “
Tina kissed Bette
“You are the best thing has ever happened to me “
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It was a tense three quarters of an hour – Bette was tempted to have a whiskey more than once just to settle her nerves but she knew it wasn’t the answer. She needed to be clear headed and calm for Tina’s sake. The blonde had taken a very long shower and had changed into tracksuit trousers and a red tee-shirt. Bette was keeping busy doing a little bit of tidying up and moving a pile of washing that had come out of the machine and neither of them had put it away.
The door phone sounding was a relief to Bette
“I’ll go down and meet him “ Bette said getting up
Tina nodded “Thanks “
“Its going to be okay “
She kissed Tina softly on the lips before hurrying out of the apartment and taking the stairs two at a time to get to the ground floor in rapid time. She saw Niall standing outside the building waiting to be granted access. She opened the front door and smiled at him
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I was so happy when I saw this tory posted, Ally!!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Thank you
wow maybe tina will at least talk to her mom. if anything they need to talk to willow poor kid is getting crap for her sister that doesn’t even live there! :)PPS
Very nice chapter Ally, and their family situation is really complicated that you don’t know what is the right thing any more. thank you and please post soon. Love
Thanks for updating this story Ally…it’s a really good one too. We can never have too many Ally updates.
I like Bette and Tina’s commitment but it’s no fun for kids having parents who fyck around especially when they’re still living 2gether. The world has not caught up with ‘free love’ as yet. Especially not teenagers who can be very cruel. I feel for Willow and understand Tina’s contempt [almost] for her parents. PPS.
I love the way Bette and Tina support each other. It’s beautiful.
Utterly glad that you posted and plan on continuing with this story. Its lovely, there so much love even between chaos. And you’re such a fantastic writer.
catching up. thx
That was great!
Nice update Ally…Love his reaction about having kids…
L5 ? Not going – i am far too shy !!
Your pages seem to last longer than the average fanfic story. They are to be savored. They contain multiple layers and a rich story text. Are you going to L5?
I’m so glad you decided to continue this story. It’s great! Thanks for sharing your talent.
i was so glad to see an update to this story! thanks, ally!
They really should not start a family until Tina grows up. She’s all about her gay pride-now that she’s gay, but she has an endless hissy about her parents’ unconventional marriage that suits them just fine. Kind of hypocritical on her part I’d say.
So glad that Tina Dad came over to see her. Tina and Bette are happy,and his reaction to children was priceless. Tina standing by her gun for Christmas was being her own woman. thanks
Seriously Ally, I wasn’t sure which story this was until Niall called. Don’t keep us waiting so long.
Thank you for bringing it back!!!!! I love this story. Actually, I love all of your stories, and how you form Bette and Tina’s personality in each. You are a phenominal writer, thank you. PPVS
It’s so nice to see an update on this story. It’s one of my favorites. I’m glad Tina is talking to her dad. Hopefully a conversation with her mom isn’t too far off. It’s good that Bette and Tina are taking a holiday to themselves. Thanks for posting!
bringing up parents is a challenge
Yeah, uh, who was it just had a birthday?
No funnyone – thats old age sweetie !
Blast you and your confounded logic!
i am still younger than you funnyone
thanks for that great update ally.a house with a pool and a garden. well i think i know a nice place :)and another holiday for them WOW that will make all my dreams come true