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Something so right – chapter 61
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“Its early yet but I could get my head down – where is my room – is it that one there ?”
“That is OUR room “ Bette said “ Did you not know ?”
“No – oh “ Bette watched Finn as he thought the problem through. He was so like Tina – except
for the height and the general hairiness and being male. Finally he shrugged
“Never mind – this sofa will be just fine “
“it’s a sofa bed “ Tina said “ It opens out but your feet will stick over the end by a long way “
“That’s okay — its freezing at home – anyway – I am a Kennard – I can sleep anywhere “
“You know that Tina and I do not get up for milking at the crack of dawn ?” Bette was less than happy but he was Tina’s brother and she knew how much her lover missed her family – especially after the Thanksgiving fiasco
“What time were you planning on getting up tomorrow ? “ he asked
“Mid-day “ Bette replied
“MID DAY ?” he exclaimed
“What Bette means is that we were planning a lie in – we both work hard all week and our weekends are very important to us “
“This weekend was going to be VERY important “ Bette muttered as she sipped her bourbon.
One minute she had been relishing 48 hours of passionate love making – now it looked like it was going to be 48 hours of FRUSTRATION
“You got any coke in the fridge ?” Finn asked
“Diet “
“There is a 7-11 across the street “ Bette remarked. He looked at Bette and grinned – with that smile there was no doubt in the world who his sister was
“Really – no shitting ?”
“No shitting “ Bette replied “ and 7-11 means its open for another hour “
“Can I go there T ?”
“If you want a coke that much “
“How do I get back in ?”
“Just press the button for Flat 20 “ Tina explained
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Oh man fin couldn’t have called tina first? very immature, especially not to let his parents know, whose is next their little sister will? :)PPS
Hello Ally, Great update! Bette’s frustration was so hysterical and her taking it out on Finn was a real treat. No wonder Tina was in stitches. SHame that Finn’s arrival caused Tina’s tenuous relationship with her mother to weaken further. Especially as it upset Tina so much. I do think that Tina and her mom need to sort this out once and for all. Perhaps Bette will find a way to heal this wound. More to the point I hope that Bette and Tina can find some alone time and really enjoy each other’s company. Hot sex loving is due for this stressed out couple. Please let there be love… Many thanks for a fantastic rollercoaster ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Finn is probably thinking wow my sister is one lucky woman. PS
Alpha Bette at this point is funny but I do understand her frustrations. Is Willow showing up next? Tina’s mother has a lot of nerve accusing her but, we don’t know what Finn has been talking about or threatening to leave and we don’t know what has been going on at the farm between the rest of the family. Then he just up and disappears without a thought to anyone else and how they might feel about that. Kids.Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.
Bette in frustration is cracking me up, and its only Fridau right. Just fantastic
Wow, That line was so sexy! Bette ordering Tina to get on the bed – I thought I was going to die. Amazing chapter! Now let’s see what else Bette tells Tina to do … hehehe. Thanks for posting! PPS!
O.K., there’s an easy resolution to this problem…Bett and Tina only have this weekend off and they had planned on it being a love fest…so they make good money, either they get a hotel for the weekend or they pay for Finn at a hotel for the weekend. Monday, everyone’s back at work and the 3 of them are back at the apartment together. Great chapter Ally!
I really got frustrated just reading how this Finn interrupted their weekend plans, I feel for Bette, poor thing she doesn’t needed all the family popping up in their house like that, if I were her I would change the address and not tell them what is it for awhile. God, Ally will you please send him away, he is so getting on my nerves. Post soon please. Love
“Is the apartment on fire ?” “Can you smell gas ?”ha ha haLOVE your story
That was funny and Tina need to do something quick or Bette gonna go crazy with her frustrations, poor Finn show up not in a good time lol. Please more, thanks!
He may be tall, but Finn is nowhere near being a man. He ran away from home without telling Mommy or Daddy for fear he’d never escape (I wasn’t aware the farm was encircled with razor wire) and couldn’t be bothered to call ahead. If that’s the best he can do he really should go home until he’s a bit more grown up.
Wonder what Finn wanted. But love a frustrated Bette and love this story! Thanks for posting!