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Something so right – chapter 61
“Great – I am going to have such a ball with you two – you two just rock – you two are the
best “ Finn hugged Tina again – he would have hugged Bette but she was hugging her bourbon. “Can I get you two anything ?”
PRIVACY Bette thought
Bette thought
“No thank you “
“No thanks – please be careful – don’t dawdle and remember that people are not as friendly as they are in Carolina. Do not stand and chat – they will think that you are a nut ball “ Tina lectured him
“Okay – I am not a baby “ Finn hurried out of the apartment leaving it as peaceful as Bette liked it. She looked at Tina for several seconds -the blonde looked across at her.
“Can you believe that he is here ? The farm will be lost without him “
“Has he told Ma and Pa Walton ?” Bette asked dryly
Tina looked shocked “ He will have – yes sure “
“He did not say that he had – do you really believe that he just made up his mind after
watching a movie ?”
“Finn is not like that – he wouldn’t do anything SECRETIVE “
Bette closed her eyes and mused that if he kept secrets as well as his parents there would
have been a ticker-tape farewell for him.
“Bette ?”
The brunette opened one eye- Tina had come across and was standing looking at her with those big hazel eyes and shy smile. Bette took hold of Tina by the hand and pulled her onto her knees
“I wanted you to myself “ Bette said sadly “ Just some time to give you all the loving that you
deserve. God I wish I had kept my apartment “
“But you love being here “
“I do and I love you. But my ideal situation is you and I – not a threesome “
“He will get bored – it’s a holiday “
“You heard what he said – one way ticket and he wants to get a job and become a rock star “
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Oh man fin couldn’t have called tina first? very immature, especially not to let his parents know, whose is next their little sister will? :)PPS
Hello Ally, Great update! Bette’s frustration was so hysterical and her taking it out on Finn was a real treat. No wonder Tina was in stitches. SHame that Finn’s arrival caused Tina’s tenuous relationship with her mother to weaken further. Especially as it upset Tina so much. I do think that Tina and her mom need to sort this out once and for all. Perhaps Bette will find a way to heal this wound. More to the point I hope that Bette and Tina can find some alone time and really enjoy each other’s company. Hot sex loving is due for this stressed out couple. Please let there be love… Many thanks for a fantastic rollercoaster ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Finn is probably thinking wow my sister is one lucky woman. PS
Alpha Bette at this point is funny but I do understand her frustrations. Is Willow showing up next? Tina’s mother has a lot of nerve accusing her but, we don’t know what Finn has been talking about or threatening to leave and we don’t know what has been going on at the farm between the rest of the family. Then he just up and disappears without a thought to anyone else and how they might feel about that. Kids.Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.
Bette in frustration is cracking me up, and its only Fridau right. Just fantastic
Wow, That line was so sexy! Bette ordering Tina to get on the bed – I thought I was going to die. Amazing chapter! Now let’s see what else Bette tells Tina to do … hehehe. Thanks for posting! PPS!
O.K., there’s an easy resolution to this problem…Bett and Tina only have this weekend off and they had planned on it being a love fest…so they make good money, either they get a hotel for the weekend or they pay for Finn at a hotel for the weekend. Monday, everyone’s back at work and the 3 of them are back at the apartment together. Great chapter Ally!
I really got frustrated just reading how this Finn interrupted their weekend plans, I feel for Bette, poor thing she doesn’t needed all the family popping up in their house like that, if I were her I would change the address and not tell them what is it for awhile. God, Ally will you please send him away, he is so getting on my nerves. Post soon please. Love
“Is the apartment on fire ?” “Can you smell gas ?”ha ha haLOVE your story
That was funny and Tina need to do something quick or Bette gonna go crazy with her frustrations, poor Finn show up not in a good time lol. Please more, thanks!
He may be tall, but Finn is nowhere near being a man. He ran away from home without telling Mommy or Daddy for fear he’d never escape (I wasn’t aware the farm was encircled with razor wire) and couldn’t be bothered to call ahead. If that’s the best he can do he really should go home until he’s a bit more grown up.
Wonder what Finn wanted. But love a frustrated Bette and love this story! Thanks for posting!