Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.
Something so right – chapter 61
Login to add story to favorites
(6 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Anything that gets him out of the apartment is fine by me Bette thought
“So what have you been buying ?”
“Beer, chips , burgers that you just warm up in the microwave – just cool stuff “
“Basically $20 worth of junk ?” Bette summed up
“Pretty much – great “ he beamed
“Did you get the coke ?”
“Sure did – wow – is that the sofa bed ?”
“By day it’s a sofa but at night it becomes your bed. Come into the kitchen – I want to show you were everything is so you are not totally helpless “
Bette returned to her chair and unfinished bourbon – the weekend was saveable if Finn was encouraged by whatever means possible to get out and explore the city. Was there a city wide bus ticket she could buy him ?
“Okay Finn – any questions ?” Tina came out of the kitchen
“Where is the bathroom ?”
“Oh shit “ Bette cursed – that was going to be a problem. She looked at Tina
“Our bathroom is only accessed through our bedroom “
Finn shrugged “ In that case I will go and clean up then I’ll can let the two of you turn in”
Finn pulled out an ordinary plastic bag that contained his toothbrush, shaving gear and a bar of soap. Bette couldn’t help but smile as the 6ft 5in giant strolled into the bathroom.
Tina walked across and snuggled against Bette
“I unpacked his shopping – you have no idea the junk he’s bought “
“He is breaking free “ Bette commented
“He is a man and wants to find himself “
“Is that a direct quote ?”
“Yeah “
“So this isn’t a holiday ?”
“Doesn’t look like it “
“And do the folks on Walton’s Mountain know where he is ?”
“Damn- I didn’t ask him – I’ll go and ask and get him a towel – remind me to buy his a wash-bag “
Tina walked into the room – she returned in a few minutes shaking her head
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Oh man fin couldn’t have called tina first? very immature, especially not to let his parents know, whose is next their little sister will? :)PPS
Hello Ally, Great update! Bette’s frustration was so hysterical and her taking it out on Finn was a real treat. No wonder Tina was in stitches. SHame that Finn’s arrival caused Tina’s tenuous relationship with her mother to weaken further. Especially as it upset Tina so much. I do think that Tina and her mom need to sort this out once and for all. Perhaps Bette will find a way to heal this wound. More to the point I hope that Bette and Tina can find some alone time and really enjoy each other’s company. Hot sex loving is due for this stressed out couple. Please let there be love… Many thanks for a fantastic rollercoaster ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Finn is probably thinking wow my sister is one lucky woman. PS
Alpha Bette at this point is funny but I do understand her frustrations. Is Willow showing up next? Tina’s mother has a lot of nerve accusing her but, we don’t know what Finn has been talking about or threatening to leave and we don’t know what has been going on at the farm between the rest of the family. Then he just up and disappears without a thought to anyone else and how they might feel about that. Kids.Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.
Bette in frustration is cracking me up, and its only Fridau right. Just fantastic
Wow, That line was so sexy! Bette ordering Tina to get on the bed – I thought I was going to die. Amazing chapter! Now let’s see what else Bette tells Tina to do … hehehe. Thanks for posting! PPS!
O.K., there’s an easy resolution to this problem…Bett and Tina only have this weekend off and they had planned on it being a love fest…so they make good money, either they get a hotel for the weekend or they pay for Finn at a hotel for the weekend. Monday, everyone’s back at work and the 3 of them are back at the apartment together. Great chapter Ally!
I really got frustrated just reading how this Finn interrupted their weekend plans, I feel for Bette, poor thing she doesn’t needed all the family popping up in their house like that, if I were her I would change the address and not tell them what is it for awhile. God, Ally will you please send him away, he is so getting on my nerves. Post soon please. Love
“Is the apartment on fire ?” “Can you smell gas ?”ha ha haLOVE your story
That was funny and Tina need to do something quick or Bette gonna go crazy with her frustrations, poor Finn show up not in a good time lol. Please more, thanks!
He may be tall, but Finn is nowhere near being a man. He ran away from home without telling Mommy or Daddy for fear he’d never escape (I wasn’t aware the farm was encircled with razor wire) and couldn’t be bothered to call ahead. If that’s the best he can do he really should go home until he’s a bit more grown up.
Wonder what Finn wanted. But love a frustrated Bette and love this story! Thanks for posting!