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Something so right -chapter 63
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Tina watched as Shane and Finn stood talking both holding pool cues
“I think there is a real friendship springing up there “
Bette nodded “ I agree – they are not that far apart in age and he knows that she is a lesbian “
“He’s also sweet on Terri “
Bette laughed “ How funny was that – you go and ask him if he’ll be okay while we go to the gallery. He would hate the gallery “
“He would “ Tina got up and strolled to the back of the café. Helena smiled at Bette
“So how much cold water did his arrival pour on the two of you last night ?”
Bette smiled “ In the end it was temporary distraction “
“I assume from what he said that he heard the two of you – expressing your feelings ?”
“That’s one way to describe it “
“How’s all of this affected Tina ?. She looked very unhappy when the others were asking
questions earlier “
“You noticed that as well ? Yeah – it just brings up the whole business with her mother. You know how raw that left her. Because he didn’t tell his folks Tina rang up and she blamed Tina – that hit her hard. Finn rang later and spoke to her father and said that he wasn’t going to let their mother speak to Tina like that “
“He is going to be defensive of her – both of you in fact”
“Yeah – that moment when Alice was firing questions at him and he stood up for both of us – that is a good trait in him “
“He’s a good kid “
“Hardly a kid “ Bette replied “ He is a young man”
“I agree but you are going to have to watch out for him – this is a big city and not everyone is going to be as kind to him as we are “
Bette nodded “ I know – we will do what we can “
“How do you feel personally about all of this ? I wouldn’t have enjoyed having my weekend of passion to be killed like he obviously has “
Bette shrugged “I know what it means to her – I saw how happy she was when she arrived with me in Carolina and I know -only I know what the fight did to her – it upset her more than I can tell you “
Helena nodded “ She’s my oldest friend – I do know because she tells me her feelings. And I also know how much you have done for her. You constantly surprise me Bette . You know that I didn’t think you could be tamed and yet you were. I didn’t think you would give up your tom cat ways but I was wrong. You couldn’t be a better girlfriend Bette “
Bette smiled “ Its kind of you to say “
“ Praise where it is due. She loves you “
“Its two way – I love her “ Bette looked round to check where Tina was
“I want to ask you something – something that you cannot tell Tina about “
Helena nodded
“I want to buy her a ring”
“Engagement ?”
“No – well I don’t know – I just want to buy her a ring that sort of thanks her for everything that she has done for me and as a promise that I belong to her. What do you think ?”
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Please not a “friendship” ring. Or worse still, an “abstinence” ring. Do you have those silly things in Britain, Ally? Since you guys shipped most of your fundamentalists over here generations ago, I’m hoping you’ve escaped some of our sillier repressive attitudes borne of puritanism. No, I don’t think I have to worry about Bette giving Tina one of those.
Nice very nice. Finn may prove to fit right in.
Why else would you buy your girlfriend a ring except to ask her to marry you…otherwise just buy her some other jewelry. Ask her Bette…I’ll bet she says yes! Ally…simply superb…again!
AllyE great chapter. Finn, once his farm edges are smoothed off wil be quite a gentleman. One that knows how to take care of his family and not let anyone (Alice) intefere or get more info than they need. He is a quick learner and I loved how he came to our girls’ defense when Alice asked just one too many questions. If just once her brain would engage before her mouth it would be lovely and put the brakes on that mouth before it says something it shouldn’t. Alice has a heart of gold but she does insane things sometimes. And as far I’m concerned it is not part of her charm. Good job. Post when you can.
Finn is adorable. And what a wonderful development on the lovely twosome. Go fo the ring Bette
Every chapter of every story is outstanding.
Finn is cute and like the way he protect Bette and Tina. Maybe Bette should buy Tina watch or earings or neckles but not a ring if she not ask her to marry her. PPST!
Finn is so sweet. I am glad Bette wants to buy Tina a ring. Now Bette ask that wonderful woman to be your wife. Thank you Ally
don’t buy tina a watch, IC has everyone breaking up when they buy a watch! finn is adorable,lol… alice is too much. bette needs to ask tina! :)PPS
It’s a great idea, and Bette should totally do it as soon as possible, and I like the way they are dealing with Finn. Thanks Ally, can’t wait for the next post. Love
a ring huuu ? this is getting serious :)thanks ally and PPS