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Something so right -chapter 63
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“Music – I love music “
“He planned in a band at home “ Tina said
“Well if you are interested I am going to a club tomorrow night to see a new band that a friend at work plays in “
Tina looked up “ Whose that ?”
“Carmen “
Tina grinned “You really like her don’t you ?”
“What – Shane is sweet on a girl ? “ Alice joked
“I like her “ Shane agreed “Anyway – she plays in a band with some of her friends. I have no idea what they are like but the club is across town and I’d be glad to take you along “
“Not a gay club ? “ Tina asked
“No – what do you think Finn ?”
“This is so cool – you two have the best friends “
Bette regarded Alice with a raised eyebrow “ Some of them have their moments “
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It was close to a couple of hours later and no one showed any sign of moving. Alice and Dana were across talking to some of Alice’s other friends
Finn was proving popular much to Tina’s delight. She looked across at Bette
“Did you want to check into the gallery ?”
Bette looked at her watch
“Could do – what about ? “ she glanced at Finn who was in the back of the café playing pool with Shane.
“Leave him here “ Bette said “ We could come and get him in an hour – he seems happy enough with Shane – I am not sure which one is the biggest hustler “
“Him “ Tina assessed
“You have seen Shane fleecing people who think that because she is a woman she isn’t going to be much of a player “
“We have always played pool “ Tina said
“I never saw a pool table “
“Its in the basement – I just never took you down there. But trust me – he can play – not as much as a shark as Willow but he’s hot “
“They could team up – the country boy and the dyke “
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Please not a “friendship” ring. Or worse still, an “abstinence” ring. Do you have those silly things in Britain, Ally? Since you guys shipped most of your fundamentalists over here generations ago, I’m hoping you’ve escaped some of our sillier repressive attitudes borne of puritanism. No, I don’t think I have to worry about Bette giving Tina one of those.
Nice very nice. Finn may prove to fit right in.
Why else would you buy your girlfriend a ring except to ask her to marry you…otherwise just buy her some other jewelry. Ask her Bette…I’ll bet she says yes! Ally…simply superb…again!
AllyE great chapter. Finn, once his farm edges are smoothed off wil be quite a gentleman. One that knows how to take care of his family and not let anyone (Alice) intefere or get more info than they need. He is a quick learner and I loved how he came to our girls’ defense when Alice asked just one too many questions. If just once her brain would engage before her mouth it would be lovely and put the brakes on that mouth before it says something it shouldn’t. Alice has a heart of gold but she does insane things sometimes. And as far I’m concerned it is not part of her charm. Good job. Post when you can.
Finn is adorable. And what a wonderful development on the lovely twosome. Go fo the ring Bette
Every chapter of every story is outstanding.
Finn is cute and like the way he protect Bette and Tina. Maybe Bette should buy Tina watch or earings or neckles but not a ring if she not ask her to marry her. PPST!
Finn is so sweet. I am glad Bette wants to buy Tina a ring. Now Bette ask that wonderful woman to be your wife. Thank you Ally
don’t buy tina a watch, IC has everyone breaking up when they buy a watch! finn is adorable,lol… alice is too much. bette needs to ask tina! :)PPS
It’s a great idea, and Bette should totally do it as soon as possible, and I like the way they are dealing with Finn. Thanks Ally, can’t wait for the next post. Love
a ring huuu ? this is getting serious :)thanks ally and PPS