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Something so right -chapter 63
“It wouldn’t be self interest would it ? “ Dana enquired
“Bette wants the best for Finn like I do “ Tina said “ Are you going to be okay Finn – who are you going out with ?”
“Terri – she’s really nice “
Tina grinned “ Terri ? “
“Yeah – she the cute waitress over there “
“I know – I have been coming here long enough.”
“What sort of work are you looking for ? “ Shane asked
“Anything that pays enough for me to get my own place and maybe some wheels”
Bette winked at Tina – they had discussed the fact that they were going to loan him some
money for a car. They just weren’t telling him yet – Bette wanted to be sure that he was responsible enough to appreciate their offer.
“I might know of some work at the club “ Dana said
“What sort of club ? “ Finn’s eyes lit up
“Calm down Romeo “ Bette said “ Dana is a pro tennis player “
“You are – wow – are you famous ?”
“No “ Alice said
“Sod off “ Dana hardly blinked when she responded to Alice’s insult “Anyway – its not full time but I am pretty sure that there is always work either in the kitchen or working on the grounds “
“The grounds would be better for him “ Bette said
“I know – I will make a couple of calls on Monday and get back to one of you – is that okay Finn ?”
“That is so cool – thank you Dana – I won’t let you down “
“I know that – If you are anything like Tina you will be hard working and honest -that’s the bottom line for jobs like that. I will put in a good word for you “
“I will be good I promise you “
“That’s good enough for me “
“Thanks Dana “ Tina smiled at her friend
“No problem”
“What sort of things are you into ?” Shane asked Finn
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(6 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
Please not a “friendship” ring. Or worse still, an “abstinence” ring. Do you have those silly things in Britain, Ally? Since you guys shipped most of your fundamentalists over here generations ago, I’m hoping you’ve escaped some of our sillier repressive attitudes borne of puritanism. No, I don’t think I have to worry about Bette giving Tina one of those.
Nice very nice. Finn may prove to fit right in.
Why else would you buy your girlfriend a ring except to ask her to marry you…otherwise just buy her some other jewelry. Ask her Bette…I’ll bet she says yes! Ally…simply superb…again!
AllyE great chapter. Finn, once his farm edges are smoothed off wil be quite a gentleman. One that knows how to take care of his family and not let anyone (Alice) intefere or get more info than they need. He is a quick learner and I loved how he came to our girls’ defense when Alice asked just one too many questions. If just once her brain would engage before her mouth it would be lovely and put the brakes on that mouth before it says something it shouldn’t. Alice has a heart of gold but she does insane things sometimes. And as far I’m concerned it is not part of her charm. Good job. Post when you can.
Finn is adorable. And what a wonderful development on the lovely twosome. Go fo the ring Bette
Every chapter of every story is outstanding.
Finn is cute and like the way he protect Bette and Tina. Maybe Bette should buy Tina watch or earings or neckles but not a ring if she not ask her to marry her. PPST!
Finn is so sweet. I am glad Bette wants to buy Tina a ring. Now Bette ask that wonderful woman to be your wife. Thank you Ally
don’t buy tina a watch, IC has everyone breaking up when they buy a watch! finn is adorable,lol… alice is too much. bette needs to ask tina! :)PPS
It’s a great idea, and Bette should totally do it as soon as possible, and I like the way they are dealing with Finn. Thanks Ally, can’t wait for the next post. Love
a ring huuu ? this is getting serious :)thanks ally and PPS