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Something so right – chapter 67
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“You would have been good for her “
“Helena needs to find a role in life “
“She does- I wish she had the passion and the drive that Bette had “
Before Tina spoke James walked up to them
“Its time Bette “
“Thank you James “
Bette took a deep breath and nodded at him
“Open the doors and we will go to the gallery “
The others all piled into the elevator and went to the third floor – the gallery was beautifully lit and the whole atmosphere was full of excitement. Bette took Tina by the hand and they went inside. This was the only time for several hours they would be alone. Bette looked at Tina
“Thank you again. I don’t think you even know what your support and love has meant to me”
“I would do anything for you “
“I feel the same “
Bette placed the softest and most tender kiss on Tina’s lips
“I love you “
“I love you “ Tina replied.
Bette looked at her watch – slowly the second hand went to 12 and it was now time. She took another deep inhalation of air
“Lets do it “
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Bette was deep in conversation with one of her artists when a woman walked in – she was carrying a notebook and Tina could tell in an instant that this was Sasha – the reporter who was one of Bette’s former lovers. Tina could call it experience but she had learnt from the look that she got when she was holding Bette’s hand which women envied her from wishing they could have Bette. The look she got from women who knew what wonderful attentions she was enjoying was different – it was base.
“Thank you Michael – do go and enjoy the show “
“Bette -sorry I am late – I was covering something across town “
“Hello Sasha – you should know there is no better show opening tonight than this show”
Bette was revelling in the show and all the attention. As she had predicted the collection of art was the most wonderful mix and people who had arrived at 6pm showed no sign of leaving despite it being almost 9pm. As the second showing was at 9pm there was likely to be a crowd – that suited Bette – that meant that word of mouth would be good. The show that was hard to get into – that alone would generate people attending just to see what everyone else was talking about. It all meant that Bette was going to sell a lot of works and her commission was rightly among the highest among galleries on the west coast – for the reason that having a piece in a exhibition staged by Bette Porter meant that it would sell and lead to other pieces being commissioned – Bette’s popularity among the artist community was high. For Bette this meant that she could afford her share of a big house that she would buy with Tina – Bette wanted nothing more than to lay down roots with the woman she loved so much.
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Okay, Ally… you know I love this story, but Tina needs to put her notions about marriage related to her parent’s arrangement to rest and move on to the monogomist union example she and Bette can define… seriously! Tina needs to say YES! *wink* PPS!
Oh my God Ally that is worse than Miss Chaiken herself.I don’t believe Tina said NO. Then again with her parents marriage being the way that it is, she maybe scared.I hope this doesn’t mean they will separate or anything like that.
ÙAlly what’s that???? Did you honestly ended this chapter like this, I am shocked, why did you do this to Bette?? My God my heart is breaking for her, I honestly didn’t see that coming, I mean what does Tina have to say to justify herself??? Unless she wanted to be the one who propose. PLEASE post soon, you are probably laughing at us and at our comments, I feel like you have something in store and I can’t wait to find out what is it exactly. Thank you so much for being the amazing writer and one the most talented writers that you are. Love
Aww why Tina why? PPS
The night was going so well. Why did Tina say no? There better be a good explanation for this. Thanks for posting!
OMG, I think Tina said no because of her parents lousy open marriage. But the embarrassment for Bette is astronomical. I feel so sad and sorry for Bette that others have witnessed this debacle, not to mention ruining one of the greatest nights of Bette’s life. Please post your explanation very soon. Thanks for posting, I think.
Are you kidding…who would ever believe theywould say no to Bette Porter???? There better be a way out of this Ally. Great update and it certainly made everyone take notice!
Aahhh.So cruel of you for leaving it like that. PPS :)
Ok gang, the fugitive’s name is ‘Ally Emmerson’ she’s on the run…we’re gonna spread out and check every hen house, pool house and dog house in the area… LOL! Got carried away there but you better post soon or I will send my posse out to get you!
WHAT!!!!!!!! (i just scared the dog with my screaming)
Please don’t do this to us, your loyal readers! Not nice! And it was so good up to the last line!
This is a joke right, Please update soon
So you are saying that Bette is on her knee and Tina says no? All I have to say is why Ally why? I know you love the cliffhangers but this was just cruel. Excuse me as I wipe a tear from my eye.
oh my god !! Why ………… I am really sad now – PPS really soon I cant cope !
Just got caught up on this story and loving it. I hope that Tina is just in shock and rethinks her answer. Please? PPS!
What?….you bette continue this and soon!
Ok, before any panic sets in here is my take. The no, is because Tina is going to whip out a ring and ask her……..pls pls pls.
What?!?! And you stop at that. Bad, Ally. Bad! This is a great chapter… But I think a page is missing. ;) PPS
hihi oke you held something back for us huh! because this isn’t happening, is it?!? :S OMG.. you have the worst timing you know, how can you stop right here.. there is something about writers, they always stop at the wrong moment you know! :P but i like it, i have some fate.. so do not disappoint me oke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PPS! and thank you very much for this update :)
You’re bad, Ally! You know you can’t stop there! Just maybe Tina is saying no because she wants to propose to Bette! PPS
what? why did u stop there? hopefully tina has a good reason for saying like she has a ring for bette?:)PPS
oh boy… good thing its a friday which i am hoping means you will have time to give us the next chapter over the weekend! at least i’m sure that B&T will be fine in your hands :)
Ally, that was just bad of you to stop there. Why would Tina say No? Please give us a new chapter ASAP!!!! Thanks
Noooooo, why oh why do cliffies even exist!!! Come on Ally… between you and Tina are going to give me a heart attack! What’s wrong with that girl, why doesn’t she want to marry Bette?? Great update… oh and I didn’t leave a comment on JTWYA but I’m still loving every minute of it! Please post pretty soon… pleeaasssee?? :o)
WTF! No!!! i am so hurt for bette or is T or U playing us? pps
I tend to agree with honda90, but the fact that Bette ask her to marry her and she said No worries me. I could see if she asked her to be her wife and she said No I want you to be MY wife and wipped out a ring. Come on Ally PPVS :o).
OMFG NO ???? O_oPPS ally PLEASE
Oh Ally you’re such a tease! Anyway who says no to Bette Porter? Please explain before too long, pretty please!
Oh, Ally, you are sooooo naughty! Hehe! What were the Hitchcock films Shane and Finn saw? Vertigo is my favorite, but I admit it had to grow on me and I wonder if those two are quite old enough to appreciate it fully.
oh no why ????????