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Something so right – chapter 73
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“I do – its okay Bette – I am going to be fine – it was just a bit of smoke “
Bette cried uncontrollably for several minutes – finally she managed to dry her eyes and control herself for long
enough to speak
“I am so sorry- I was a utter bitch and I am sorry. I just want you so bad – I don’t always think things through “
“Bette – its okay – we both acted like jackasses. Please don’t cry babe “
Tina touched Bette’s hair “ Its okay “
“I hurt you – and I was so angry with you – I was so up myself – I was ignoring all the messages from your phone and then Helena rang and she gave me hell. Tina “
Bette dissolved again
“Its okay Bette – we had a row – okay so it was a spectacular one but it was a row. If we weren’t in love it wouldn’t have happened “
“I just don’t want to lose you “
“You aren’t going to lose me – despite your its my way or the highway -I wasn’t going anywhere”
Bette rubbed her eyes “ I will make it up to you “
“We need to sit down and talk – there is no making up to be done – we had a row- we both acted like idiots “
Tina looked around
“What is it ? “ Bette asked
“Can you get me some water ?”
“Of course – I won’t be long “
Bette kissed Tina’s hand again and went out of the room. Tina took the oxygen mask and breathed in several times. She lent back – she felt very tired but she also wanted to talk to Bette – to find some common ground before misunderstandings clouded their relationship. She had to make Bette see that she wasn’t going to leave her or cheat on her – she was going to love her forever more. She just didn’t need marriage to prove that – but as Helena had said – maybe Bette did need that extra security blanket of being able to say that she was Tina’s wife. Tina closed her eyes – she wanted to be in her own bed – with Bette beside her. But she was savvy enough to know that her breathing needed to be much easier than it was at the moment – she must have inhaled a lot of smoke for her to feel so weak. Bette came into the room carrying a water jug and a glass
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Yay Tina is alright! and Bette is just too cute spoiling Tina like that! Parents can stay home for till Tina is recovered in my mind! PPS:)
Well, I think Finn can sell it to the parents to stay away for now, by telling them that Tina wants to see them in a few weeks. If they are smart, they will listen to him. They really started to communicate in this chapter, but I was sorry to see that without this catastrophic catalyst they couldn’t find common ground. Hoping you update again soon Ally…thanks!
well sometimes you write a chapter that just take my breathe away. i hope you will stay for a couple of weeks here because you write the interaction between them sooo good !and admit that teddy bear is from 604 ;) give it back to BooBooPPS ally
I am releaved, Thank God that it went well, and they are both OK and found their way back to each other. It’s wonderful the way they love each other, it kind of reminded me of love and pride, I don’t know why but I missed this story so very much, and I was wondering when will you post it again Ally??? I hope we can see B&T healthy and happy in the next chapter, and for them to find a new common thing to do while getting Tina better again. Thanks Hun, you are great. Love
I am glad to hear that Tina is going to be fine. Yes, they need to talk. Tina has had Bette face her demons, gragually. I think it’s time that Tina faces her fear about marriage. As Helena has said before she and Bette are NOT her parents. It is not fair to Bette.
Nice to see them willing to discuss. Too bad it took a crisis to do so but maybe that’s what it took to move them from spots. ITA w/funnyone. Tina and Finn must be from the English part of NC.
aahww thank you,, they are so sweet together! love your story, but they really need to talk :) PPS!
I loved this chapter!! Thanks ally!!
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Glade that Tina will be okay. Finn love the both so much,and understands both of them and the stubborness in both. Her parents shouldnt come for a couple of weeks but should come. thanks
Love this story and chapter. PPS please Ally.
Thanks god Tina is ok and hope she get well soon. B&T need to talk and work thing out when Tina is well. Please post soon, thanks!
lovely; and great that they equals. thx.
So glad that Bette and Tina made up. Thanks for yet another fabulous update.
So they’ve finally kissed and started the long road to making up. We can all breathe a sigh of relief now. But they do need to talk some more about all the difficult stuff about their relationship and their future. Thanks a bunch for this update, Ally! :>
thank you for brightening my weekend, ally! :) loved this chapter. good to see them really starting to communicate and handling this mess maturely. enjoy your movie night!
I just loved this chapter. Finally they are communicating, but have so much more to talk about. Nix to the parental visit too, unless Tina’s mum apologizes to Bette.
You know, I’ve inhaled a fair amount of smoke in my day, but never in enough concentration to put me in the hospital. However, I HAVE woken up in the hospital and seriously, as much as you want to be elsewhere, if you’re that sick, you don’t really feel like jumping out of that uncomfortable bed. And yes, just as it’s not the best make out spot, it’s also not the place for deep relationship discussions. I was struck by how oddly people from North Carolina speak: Mums in bloody knickers. Or is it bloody mums in knickers? Despite their ongoing beef, I don’t see how Tina’s parents could be made to stay away under the circumstances.
well at least tina will be okay! yes ia gree they both need to talk… not sure about the parents coming to visit could create world war 4…:)PPS