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Something so right – chapter 73
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“I told the doctor that you are awake – she is going to come and see you in a few minutes”
Bette put the jug down and poured Tina a glass. Tina took the glass and drank it in one.
“Same again ?”
“Please “
Bette poured more water and sat down
“You are not feeling well are you ?”
“I have felt better “
“My heroine “ Bette said stroking her hair which was a little singed at the ends “ You are just amazing “
“Are they okay ?”
“I haven’t heard anything – I will try and see them for you – you saved two lives this morning and I just am in awe of you. Do you remember anything ?”
“Not really – it’s a blur to be honest – what do you know ?”
“Apart from what Helena called me when she finally reached me – just that you were walking up to the flat and you smelt smoke and you rang 911. When the fire-fighters arrived you were outside with the old man and the little girl “
“It’s a blur “ Tina repeated sipping her water a little slower. Bette touched her face
“I thought I was going to lose you and I have never been so afraid “
“I am not that easily got rid of – I wasn’t going to let you being an ass come between us. I wasn’t sure how I was going to make you see sense but I would have done it somehow or other. Maybe this is fate Bette – maybe I was meant to be where I was this morning – if we hadn’t fought last night and this morning I wouldn’t have been. Maybe it was meant to be that I was there and that I saved them and it brought both of us to our senses. Maybe I deliberately set the fire so I could be the hero and you would come running to my side. Its maybe the only way you would be talking to me right now “
Bette smiled “ You are so like Finn its scary “
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Yay Tina is alright! and Bette is just too cute spoiling Tina like that! Parents can stay home for till Tina is recovered in my mind! PPS:)
Well, I think Finn can sell it to the parents to stay away for now, by telling them that Tina wants to see them in a few weeks. If they are smart, they will listen to him. They really started to communicate in this chapter, but I was sorry to see that without this catastrophic catalyst they couldn’t find common ground. Hoping you update again soon Ally…thanks!
well sometimes you write a chapter that just take my breathe away. i hope you will stay for a couple of weeks here because you write the interaction between them sooo good !and admit that teddy bear is from 604 ;) give it back to BooBooPPS ally
I am releaved, Thank God that it went well, and they are both OK and found their way back to each other. It’s wonderful the way they love each other, it kind of reminded me of love and pride, I don’t know why but I missed this story so very much, and I was wondering when will you post it again Ally??? I hope we can see B&T healthy and happy in the next chapter, and for them to find a new common thing to do while getting Tina better again. Thanks Hun, you are great. Love
I am glad to hear that Tina is going to be fine. Yes, they need to talk. Tina has had Bette face her demons, gragually. I think it’s time that Tina faces her fear about marriage. As Helena has said before she and Bette are NOT her parents. It is not fair to Bette.
Nice to see them willing to discuss. Too bad it took a crisis to do so but maybe that’s what it took to move them from spots. ITA w/funnyone. Tina and Finn must be from the English part of NC.
aahww thank you,, they are so sweet together! love your story, but they really need to talk :) PPS!
I loved this chapter!! Thanks ally!!
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Glade that Tina will be okay. Finn love the both so much,and understands both of them and the stubborness in both. Her parents shouldnt come for a couple of weeks but should come. thanks
Love this story and chapter. PPS please Ally.
Thanks god Tina is ok and hope she get well soon. B&T need to talk and work thing out when Tina is well. Please post soon, thanks!
lovely; and great that they equals. thx.
So glad that Bette and Tina made up. Thanks for yet another fabulous update.
So they’ve finally kissed and started the long road to making up. We can all breathe a sigh of relief now. But they do need to talk some more about all the difficult stuff about their relationship and their future. Thanks a bunch for this update, Ally! :>
thank you for brightening my weekend, ally! :) loved this chapter. good to see them really starting to communicate and handling this mess maturely. enjoy your movie night!
I just loved this chapter. Finally they are communicating, but have so much more to talk about. Nix to the parental visit too, unless Tina’s mum apologizes to Bette.
You know, I’ve inhaled a fair amount of smoke in my day, but never in enough concentration to put me in the hospital. However, I HAVE woken up in the hospital and seriously, as much as you want to be elsewhere, if you’re that sick, you don’t really feel like jumping out of that uncomfortable bed. And yes, just as it’s not the best make out spot, it’s also not the place for deep relationship discussions. I was struck by how oddly people from North Carolina speak: Mums in bloody knickers. Or is it bloody mums in knickers? Despite their ongoing beef, I don’t see how Tina’s parents could be made to stay away under the circumstances.
well at least tina will be okay! yes ia gree they both need to talk… not sure about the parents coming to visit could create world war 4…:)PPS