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Something so right – chapter 74
Tina smiled “ I can afford the other half “
Bette kissed Tina again “I am so looking forward to getting you back home “
“I am looking forward to our bed tonight “
Bette looked around
“You got everything ?”
“Yes “
“I have arranged for a hamper of fruit and cookies and good coffee and chocolates to be sent to the nurses who have been caring for you “
Tina smiled and touched Bette’s face
“Thank you “
“Worth every dime – they have taken good care of you – and put up with me “
Tina sighed “ Take me home Bette “
Bette took Tina’s case and taking her hand they walked out of her room together.
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They travelled up in the elevator in silence – Tina wasn’t sure she would ever feel the same way about this building again – maybe it was time to move out and set down roots with Bette.
Bette unlocked the door and opened it to allow Tina to walk in. The apartment was spotless – Tina looked around
“Where’s all of Finn’s things ?”
“He’s moved in with Shane – his idea not mine – she wants someone to share with and they are great friends “
“Did you encourage it ?”
“I paid his first months rent “
“Bette ! “
“He wanted to go Tina – we aren’t loud enough for him and with Shane he can be the slob that he is at his age. They really are pals Tina – he said that he will be around to see us often enough but he wants his freedom “
Tina sighed – she was sad that Finn wouldn’t be around all of the time but it was good to have the apartment back – it meant they could get into something resembling normality again. Tina walked around looking at the apartment
“I had forgotten what this place looks like without stuff all over place “
“I paid his rent on the understanding that the place looked as tidy as the day he walked in. By all accounts him and Shane came round last night and cleaned and tidied for four hours – the bath is sparkling “
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(6 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
Love Tina’s ass can look at that all day. Ok great chptr looking forwrd to more
I love this version of Bette and Tina finding out about one another’s needs and trying to live with the differences – why oh why can’t aren’t you the one who wrote the final season. You are so right about what was worth watching this last episode Tina’s ass, Angie’s face and Bette’s look of love when she kissed Tina at the airport. And that’s about all. Thanks for your alternative it makes this season more bearable.
purrfect!!!
Loved the update AllyE. Tina and Bette really need to mature a bit more before they think of marriage and talk a LOT about things. They are of two different minds because of circumstances beyond their control. They each need reassurance that their love will never waiver for any reason and a marriage certificate is not really necessary to ensure that. People fall out of love all the time marriage or not. Hopefully Tina will speak with her mother the next day when she calls and ask her not to come to LA, their presence is not needed. And that her health will improve more without the aggravation of her mother’s presence. Because they will not be able to be in a room together without taking offense to something the other will say. Great post AllyE. Have a good weekend. Post when you can.
These two really need to get a grip!!! Both are insecure and immature!!! Grrrr!!! LOL :)
Great update Ally! Tina definitely gets some smooth points for the no pyjamas in bed ploy. PPS!
What is that quote..an update by any name would still be as sweet!
You are such a wonderful writer. So much passion and love.
i hope these two find some middle ground soon. thanks for the update, ally! looking forward to the L Wing tom :)
Great chapter, I hope Tina’s mom doesn’t come and start trouble that makes T have a setback in her recovery. PS
This Ma Kennard doesn’t leave people alone?? God help Tina. What a wonderful chapter Ally, I loved the fact that they have the place for themselves, they can rest and spoil each other, and do what they want. I am so looking forward for the next chapter. Have a great night. Love
I think it’s sad that they wouldn’t let Tina’s mother talk to her, despite everything. Even tired, she could have said hello and let her mother hear her voice. If Ma isn’t too cool with Bette, it really is Tina’s problem not being able to accept her mother for who she is that is the real stumbling block. It’s not like she abused Tina, it’s just that her parents’ lifestyle makes Tina uncomfortable. And T & B get all upset that Ma doesn’t accept their relationship! But Ma never kicked them off the farm, Tina left in a huff. Tina really does need to grow up. She reconciled with Bette in the aftermath of the fire, she could have done the same with her mother. And I’m not sure if Bette was protecting Tina so much as enabling her.
Hehehehe, Ally you funny girl – where were you with your thought – I think in LWord-land by Tinas cute ass as you mentioned LOL. Where is my L Wing dose.
My apologies – i had just finished writing LWing 251 and thats my excuse ! Thanks to funnyone for emailing me to inform me of my error. i will post lwing tomorrow !! sorry again – klutz am i.
Ally… haha.. I guess you are getting old woman.. you posted a Something so right chap by the name of L wing. Damn.. you got me all happy to see a new chap of L-wing (not that I don’t get happy to see one from SSR too) and I got so confused with Tina at the hospital.. Come on my queen.. you can’t leave me all hoping now.. post the L wing chap too?? please??
Not a problem… I’ll take a ‘Something So Right’ chapter any way I can get it ;-)
I thought that was an L Wing and then it wasn’t but it is all good because it was an Ally post. Thanks Woman…pps
OK these two are so not ready for marriage yet, but how about a long engagement this way Tina get stime and Bette gets the reassurance she feels she needs? PPS:)
i think bette has the right idea of keeping everything in tina’s life pretty much calm, but tina should at least talk to her mom when she feels better.tina needs to at least be respectful of her mom’s choices, just her mom needs to to her choices. these two are so not ready for marriage yet! :)PPS
That was great!